☆ Custom / Human Puppets

[Fist of the Bro Star]

Character: Zeramaru Akasun
Link to profile: http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?t=22087877&page=2

Puppet Name: Hisame
Puppet Appearance:

Puppet Description: Hisame (meaning "Hail"), is made of incredibly dense carbonized metals that make its individual parts nearly indestructible to anything below an A-ranked attack. Unlike other puppets who use fancy machinery and weapons built within the puppet, Hisame's body alone serves as its own weapon. It has the unique mechanism that allows its controller to separate all of its body parts in an instant, and then reform them back together just as quickly. Thus, Zeramaru can separate his puppet and then fire them into an opponent in a hail of parts. Each part is razor sharp, and can cut through flesh like butter. Like shark-skin, it looks soft but when force is applied in the wrong direction it cuts and shears through whatever is in its path. In addition, Zeramaru gave the puppet both a mouth senbon shooter in its mouth, and gifted it with a remarkable human appearance. This is because the puppet is meant to be controlled outside of an area and used for spy or infiltration missions, giving it a remarkable versatility as it can be used efficiently both outside battle and within.

Mechanism Summary:
• Body can instantly separate and reform
• Razor Skin
• Senbon Shooter inside mouth
• Long-distance control (can be controlled outside of the area the user is located in)
• Contains Stealth Nodes
 

[Yaroki]

Character: Tonou Tamekaze
Link to profile: The puppet with him in the picture is the appearance

Puppet Name: Kaze
Puppet Appearance: Kaze surprised

Puppet Description:Kaze is made of a strong titanium alloy, making it have a strong defence while hiding its quick speed. This little puppet also is equipped with some fancy toys. A senbon launcher in the mouth, a toxic gas that shoots from in the eyes, hidden blades in his arms, and a mini spear with a cable attached to it that reaches 15 meters at full length. As if these surprises weren't good enough Kaze's stomach can act as a storage space even if it is a bit small;.



Mechanism Summary:
• Senbon launcher
• Gas eyes
• Twin blades in the hands
• Spear with cable that can also shoot from his mouth.

 

[Flamefox Merimac]

Character: Junichi Aburame
Link to profile: Jun

Puppet Name: Kowai
Puppet Appearance: [x]

Puppet Description: Kowai's human like appearance can make him seem kind of scary, and people have the right to fear them. Standing at 5'10", he's about average human height. Unlike most puppets, he is made with a combination of wood and metal. The bulk of his body is made of a fairly hard wood, making him able to taken decent blunt damage and okay cutting damage. The only real parts that deal with metal, are the claws on his hands and feet, and he has metal plating placed on his chest. Kowai carries a senbon launcher in his mouth and if needed, the jaw can extend lower then normal. The next set of hidden items are two poison laced daggers that come out of the wrist on the lower set of arms. Finally the last special ability has to deal with Jun being an Aburame member. In the chest is a medium size glass ball that can hold Jun's insects in it. Connected to the jar are pathways that lead to each hand, the mouth, and both legs. On the hands and legs are holes that the insects can come out from. On the head, it's mostly the mouth/eyes. There is a hatch on the back that allows Jun to fill the glass jar or during a battle, the insects can crawl down the chakra strings and into holes on the back of the puppet. The only other special thing about Kowai is that his head and arms can be controlled without the body. Of course he must have chakra strings attached in order to do that. He also has been made to resist cold weather due to where Jun lives.

Mechanism Summary:
• Sendom Launcher in Head
• Glass Jar to hold Insects in Chest
• Two Hidden Daggers in Lower set of Hands with Poison on them.
Trigger: Getting cut with blades.
Slight Dizziness: 2 posts after injected.
Moderate Dizziness: 4 posts after injected.
Disabling Dizziness: 6 posts after injected.
Pain: 7 posts after injected.
Death: 9 posts after injected.

((If only a small amount is injected add 1 post to every stage. IE Slight Dizziness 3, Moderate Dizziness 5, etc.))  

[Flamefox Merimac]

AandOE

Flamefox Merimac

Character: Junichi Aburame
Link to profile: Jun

Puppet Name: Kowai
Puppet Appearance: [x]

Puppet Description: Kowai's human like appearance can make him seem kind of scary, and people have the right to fear them. Standing at 5'10", he's about average human height. Unlike most puppets, he is made with a combination of wood and metal. The bulk of his body is made of a fairly hard wood, making him able to taken decent blunt damage and okay cutting damage. The only real parts that deal with metal, are the claws on his hands and feet, and he has metal plating placed on his chest. Kowai carries a senbon launcher in his mouth and if needed, the jaw can extend lower then normal. The next set of hidden items are two poison laced daggers that come out of the wrist on the lower set of arms. Finally the last special ability has to deal with Jun being an Aburame member. In the chest is a medium size glass ball that can hold Jun's insects in it. Connected to the jar are pathways that lead to each hand, the mouth, and both legs. On the hands and legs are holes that the insects can come out from. On the head, it's mostly the mouth/eyes. There is a hatch on the back that allows Jun to fill the glass jar or during a battle, the insects can crawl down the chakra strings and into holes on the back of the puppet. Due to the type of wood he is made of, Kowai is not effected by the cold as much.

Mechanism Summary:
• Senbon Launcher in Head
• Glass Jar to hold Insects in Chest
• Two Hidden Daggers in Lower set of Hands with Poison on them.
Trigger: Getting cut with blades.
Slight Dizziness: 2 posts after injected.
Moderate Dizziness: 4 posts after injected.
Disabling Dizziness: 6 posts after injected.
Pain: 7 posts after injected.
Death: 9 posts after injected.

((If only a small amount is injected add 1 post to every stage. IE Slight Dizziness 3, Moderate Dizziness 5, etc.))

Separation of head & arms counts as another mechanism, which extends the mechanism count up past 4. Denied.

He also has been made to resist cold weather due to where Jun lives.

We're not sure how this is meant to be taken. Is this asking for a shield mechanism? (which would be denied... via mechanism count) Or is this due to the type of wood it is made of? (which would be accepted)

The poison is another bout of confusion. If the blades are already tainted, say by your rpc dipping them in the liquid, then that's fine. If the puppet is actively applying & making the poison, then that counts as a mechanism, & would be denied. (via mechanism count past 4)

Took out the head and arms thing.

Changed the cold description to being made out of a type of wood that isn't as effected by the cold. Pretty much just there, so he doesn't wear and tare while being used in the snow village.

And yes they are just dipped in poison by Jun before/after battle.  

[Flamefox Merimac]

AandOE

Flamefox Merimac

Took out the head and arms thing.

Changed the cold description to being made out of a type of wood that isn't as effected by the cold. Pretty much just there, so he doesn't wear and tare while being used in the snow village.

And yes they are just dipped in poison by Jun before/after battle.

Then you're all set to go~~ Enjoy Yukigakure & the rest of the guild! ^_^

Sweet and thanks. ^^  

[Fist of the Bro Star]

AandOE

Fenrir Graveheart

Character: Zeramaru Akasun
Link to profile: http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?t=22087877&page=2

Puppet Name: Hisame
Puppet Appearance:

Puppet Description: Hisame (meaning "Hail"), is made of incredibly dense carbonized metals that make its individual parts nearly indestructible to anything below an A-ranked attack. Unlike other puppets who use fancy machinery and weapons built within the puppet, Hisame's body alone serves as its own weapon. It has the unique mechanism that allows its controller to separate all of its body parts in an instant, and then reform them back together just as quickly. Thus, Zeramaru can separate his puppet and then fire them into an opponent in a hail of parts. Each part is razor sharp, and can cut through flesh like butter. Like shark-skin, it looks soft but when force is applied in the wrong direction it cuts and shears through whatever is in its path. In addition, Zeramaru gave the puppet both a mouth senbon shooter in its mouth, and gifted it with a remarkable human appearance. This is because the puppet is meant to be controlled outside of an area and used for spy or infiltration missions, giving it a remarkable versatility as it can be used efficiently both outside battle and within.

Mechanism Summary:
• Body can instantly separate and reform
• Razor Skin
• Senbon Shooter inside mouth

"• Long-distance control (can be controlled outside of the area the user is located in)"

This mechanism is denied, as Kugutsu threads can't be drawn out as far as this implies.

"• Contains Stealth Nodes"

This isn't defined, & it would have been the 5th mechanism anyways, which is not allowed. Denied. (4 mechanisms for custom puppets, max)

"...individual parts nearly indestructible to anything below an A-ranked attack..."

This would be considered as a 'shield mechanism', which extends the mechanism count to 6, which isn't allowed. Denied. You may say what the puppet is made of, but specifically stating the rank of all-around non-chakra usage defense is cutting it a little over the line.

Took out the long distance control and stealth nodes. That should put me back to 4 mechanisms, correct?  

[Reaper Elyse]

Just to give the heads up their are just two things you might what to look over before saying your done. The fact that your puppet still implies that it can be controlled outside of the average visible range just naturally by it's design is still in the description and that's one of the things that as before was denied. (though I'd figure that making a jutsu that insist a use of chakra to extend your chakra string in distance could be added into your custom Jutsu's and bring you to the same result. Though here It's not possible to have it built in since all puppetry is with chakra and some chakra explanation would be needed.

Then the last thing is how many senbon can your puppet hold in it's self to be fired from the mouth mounted launcher. Also if it comes with these senbon already equipped. I'd say maybe 120 would be sage to start but that's just me.

No means to step on any toes but I thought it would help.  

[Yato no Mikoto]

Character: Kawaii Ooku Senju

Puppet Name: Natsumi
Puppet Appearance: Not an overly large puppet at around five and one half feet tall. It resembles a woman wearing the semi-formal wear of a samurai. The clothes are for show, much nicer in appearance than something an actual fighter would be useing but of the same style and usefulness.
Puppet Description: The puppet is made out of the unique wood of the Senju clan's Mokuton techniques. It is highly durable in the face of physical attacks and able to be repaired by Kawaii on the fly thanks to its composition. Unfortunately, repairing in such a manner requires chakra equal to that of the technique that caused the original damage. Paired with this is an extreme detail in structure. Its joints are made from stainless steel bearings allowing quick, fluid and accurate movements on par with that of its user. Every detail from the tips of its fingers to the ankle joint has the same range of motion as a human. As such, Natsumi is able to make use of an of Kawaii's Bukijutsu or Taijutsu techniques which do not require chakra. As far as non-mechanical weapons are concerned, the puppet itself carries a pair of katana and their accompanying wakizashi short swords on its back as well as permanently attached gauntlets designed to act like claws and shred opponents. Made of titanium for weight preservation purposes and designed not to inhibit movement.

Mechanism Summary:
• The puppet is able to be repaired using Kawaii's Mokuton outside of battle. As mentioned, repair requires chakra equivalent to that of the attack that damaged the puppet.
• The puppet's stomach houses a unique launching mechanism loaded with 12 kunai. The launcher allows the kunai to be deployed from lower torso with wire attached to them. The wire can then remain attached to the puppet, be severed by the puppeteer, or be attached to another kunai in order to continue firing wire. Up to 100 feet of wire is fed from a spool laying horizontally beneath the poison reservoir in the puppet's torso.
• Openings in the puppet's palms allow large quantities of poison to be dispersed via flexible tubing running through the arms from a large storage tank in the torso.
• The mouth of the puppet contains a single launcher which can fire 6 kunai with paper bombs.

Palms can disperse enough poison to coat all four swords in a thick layer before running dry. Each hand can only coat one weapon, though two hands are required to fully coat a sword, and each use requires the same amount. As such, using them to coat kunai can coat two kunai but means then that one of the four swords can no longer be coated due lack of material. Coating smaller weapons also causes some of the poison to be wasted, dripping down over the puppet's gauntlets and to the ground.

The poison is of the standard paralysis type. Breakdown of effects as follows:
2 Posts - Cognitive functions slow enough that the target is now slower physically and mentally than someone of their own rank, but still a step ahead of those below them.
4 Posts - The target is now struggling to move. Fighting against the effects is still possible, but the user's abilities have now decreased below those of even the rank below them.
5 Posts - The target is able to walk, in only the best case. Hands now lack the fine motor functions necessary to form handseals and barely possess enough strength to grip a weapon of any kind.
6 Posts - Total paralysis. The target is unable to move, even in the slightest.
 

[Yato no Mikoto]

AandOE

Buki/Tai techniques must be known by the user prior to usage within a puppet, okay? The maximum amount of mechanisms allowed is 4, so please try to narrow it down from the asked amount of 7.


Mechanisms that I see:

1. Repairability via chakra. (addended to be repairable outside of combat)
2. 2 Retractable spikes.
3. 1 Poison System.
4. 3 mouth launchers.

Other than that, I see a reasonable poison alongside a wonderful puppet application!

Wasn't sure what constituted a mechanism or not.

My changes:
Moved gauntlets to be a standard part of the puppet's construction.
Made repair a mechanism and restricted it to outside of battle.
Ditched retractable spikes.
Ditched Tri-launcher
Added launcher in the stomach region.
Mouth launcher now only fires kunai with paper bombs, count updated there as well.  

[Yato no Mikoto]

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