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Posted: Sun Nov 05, 2017 10:48 pm
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Doesn't look like I'm going to make the Monday "deadline", but hopefully finishing the conversion isn't going to take that much longer. sweatdrop
I'm finding an additional hangup I'm having now {on top of all the rearranging and tweaking I'm having to do} is a problem of TOO MANY details. emotion_facepalm I had hardly any for quite a few chapters, then I started adding in more as I noticed the lack, but the problem is... I hate getting stuck in descriptions. As I've told others before, I don't really want to write a "book" that I wouldn't want to read, and when an author spends ungodly amounts of time describing things rather than just getting the ******** on with the plot, it annoys the hell out of me, so writing this chapter is starting to annoy me. stare I'll probably go back and cut a lot of things during editing after I finish converting. There are a few things that I definitely want in there for scene establishment, but including it all and trying to put in my own descriptions to mold the scene how I "see" it has just become tedious.
I need to find a balance of enough description to get the point across without feeling like there's more scene description than actual content. Too much description gives me flashbacks to when Oscar Wilde spent an entire chapter... AN ENTIRE ******** CHAPTER... just going on and on about the expensive s**t in Dorian Gray's house. ******** your expensive tapestries or whatever the ******** you're on about stressed Just get to the plot already, goddammit! scream *flips a table*
In a way, I think that was really part of the appeal of Lewis Carroll's book for me. He practically didn't have any description at all. Just content and narration.
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Posted: Mon Nov 06, 2017 10:32 pm
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Posted: Thu Nov 09, 2017 8:16 pm
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Posted: Thu Nov 09, 2017 9:08 pm
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Posted: Thu Nov 09, 2017 9:48 pm
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Posted: Fri Nov 10, 2017 1:00 am
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