POETRY

[Kirksome]

lols it's cuz i am always in the RP sub forum- ADDICTED!!

Tomorrow is the end of the world
'So what' I thought and I twirled and twirled,
Hoping that I'd be too dizzy to die
Well I was wrong and we all know why
So follow my example,
Don't make my same mistake
Next time don't you ramble
And remember to behave.

OH YEA!  

[My BlAcK sTaR sHiNe]

*laughs*. i love how simple and funny your poetry is!!!!  

[Kirksome]

smile thanks! it isn't that well put together though, all i do is like, find rhyming words and center my poem around those words. what kind of serious poem author does that?  

[My BlAcK sTaR sHiNe]

i know i do sometiems!


your laughter should be silenced
your mouth should be shut
I'd love to call you a friend
and I would but
friends don't lie
friends don't cheat
I guess thats why I'm here
on the floor, beat
you never loved me
but I always loved you
I thought you were happy
then you struck with your shoe
you beat me to a pulp
left me blue and black
your laughter started with
a different letter in fact
your laughter was silent
it was solid and snide
as you hit me across the room
on the tile I slide
add an S to your laughter
slaughter all the day
the sirens signal they're coming
as I die, you run away.  

[Kirksome]

whoa... that is awesome! you are an awesome poet  

[My BlAcK sTaR sHiNe]

why thank you. thats nothing really.  

[Kirksome]

Turn around once you see a ghost....
Turn around twice you see a hoax
Turn around thrice you see a elf....
Turn around 4 times you see your self
Turn around 5 times you see a Dinosaur
Turn around 6 times you see a desperate implore
Turn around 7 times you see some love
Turn around 8 times you see a dove
Turn around 9 times you see some care
Turn around 10 times you see a dare.


ooooooooooooooooh  

[My BlAcK sTaR sHiNe]

*claps* awesome! i loved it!  

[Kirksome]

I have made a thread in the poetry sun forum with most of the poetry i've written on this here thread lolz  

[My BlAcK sTaR sHiNe]

awesome! i will totally read it! i've posted most my poems on there as well  

[Kirksome]

lol i'll have to read your's too!  

[My BlAcK sTaR sHiNe]

jsut to warn you, some of its really dark  

[Kirksome]

lawl, thanks for the warning twisted twisted twisted  

[My BlAcK sTaR sHiNe]

most of its really dark actually  

[Kirksome]

hmmmmmmmmmmmm kk i'll keep that in mind