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PostPosted: Fri Jun 08, 2012 8:24 pm
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PostPosted: Tue Jul 03, 2012 6:16 am

Character: Mitsunari Ishida
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Puppet Name: Abyss
Puppet Appearance: User Image

Puppet Description: Abyss was the first puppet that Mitsunari created when he was still young and living with his foster mom. After graduating from the academy he decided that he would redo some of the things that his puppet can do. It previously was used to simply enhance Mitsunari’s taijutsu as well as hide his appearance as it surrounded him like armor. Now the puppet does the same things however, it is now stronger. It is made out of chakra infused wood to make it incredibly strong and durable. Basic ninja tools do nothing to the user unless they know the projectile bukijutsu. Secondly it has holes in the knuckles and feet where the user is able to release chakra from (either pure unelmental chakra or one of their elements) to add a slight burst in speed and a stronger punch or kick. The third change in this puppet is that it also releases chakra from all points of it at all times enabling the user to detect incoming attacks from the blind spots or rear. However, that doesn’t mean that the user can dodge the attack (as he can’t unless a jutsu is used), but allows him to brace for its impact. This feild can be shut off if the user trusts in his abilities enough. The last change is that the puppet not only has the holes in the knuckles but he also has small blades retractable blades that allow him to add a hidden surprise to a punch.

Mechanism Summary:
• Chakra Infused Wood
• Holes in Knuckles and Feet where chakra can emit from
• Chakra sensing feild
• Retractable blades on the knuckles
• Hides Appearance

Cons
• Counts as two of his custom puppets due to increased number of mechanisims
• Drains 10 chakra points every 15 posts while in battle to maintain the feild, (doesn't drain outside of battle}
 

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PostPosted: Sun Jul 15, 2012 4:06 pm
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Character: Mitsunari Ishida
Link to profile:

Puppet Name: Abyss
Puppet Appearance: User Image

Puppet Description: Abyss was the first puppet that Mitsunari created when he was still young and living with his foster mom. After graduating from the academy he decided that he would redo some of the things that his puppet can do. It previously was used to simply enhance Mitsunari’s taijutsu as well as hide his appearance as it surrounded him like armor. Now the puppet does the same things however, it is now stronger. It is made out of chakra infused wood to make it incredibly strong and durable. Basic ninja tools do nothing to the user unless they know the projectile bukijutsu. Secondly it has holes in the knuckles and feet where the user is able to release chakra from (either pure unelmental chakra or one of their elements) to add a slight burst in speed and a stronger punch or kick. The third change in this puppet is that it also releases chakra from all points of it at all times enabling the user to detect incoming attacks from the blind spots or rear. However, that doesn’t mean that the user can dodge the attack (as he can’t unless a jutsu is used), but allows him to brace for its impact. This feild can be shut off if the user trusts in his abilities enough. The last change is that the puppet not only has the holes in the knuckles but he also has small blades retractable blades that allow him to add a hidden surprise to a punch.

Mechanism Summary:
• Chakra Infused Wood
• Holes in Knuckles and Feet where chakra can emit from
• Chakra sensing feild
• Retractable blades on the knuckles
• Hides Appearance

Cons
• Counts as two of his custom puppets due to increased number of mechanisims
• Drains 10 chakra points every 15 posts while in battle to maintain the feild, (doesn't drain outside of battle}
Can you provide a link to your profile, please?
 
PostPosted: Thu Jul 19, 2012 2:00 am
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PostPosted: Mon Aug 13, 2012 5:46 pm

Character: Kurai Satetsu
Link to profile: Profile isn't up yet but will be after this gets approved

Puppet Name: Suigetsu
Puppet Appearance: Suigetsu

Puppet Description: Suigetsu is a puppet that actually has significant personal value to her. This puppet was designed by her mother and then later altered by her after she became a shinobi. Suigetsu is a composite puppet and the only reason why she has such a strong puppet is because it was her mother's

Mechanism Summary:
• Weapon launcher installed within the shield where the fore arm meets the shield. The arm is the feeding system and it is capable of firing multiple shuriken at once. The chest of the puppet houses the shuriken ammunition. The chest holds up to three hundred shuriken and it can fire how many ever shuriken she wants. However the maximum for this is ten shuriken per shot.

• Chakra resistant skin installed upon the puppet. Including the war hammer and shield

• Cable reel system within the body. The cable's maximum length is fifteen feet and is attached to the end of the war hammer allowing it to be swung around for a unique attack style. The cable can be lengthened or retracted as needed and it comes out the left side of the puppets hip. The cable itself is very strong and difficult to cut however if a situation were to arise where the cable is being used against the puppet it is able to detach the cable with ease.
 
PostPosted: Mon Aug 13, 2012 5:48 pm
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PostPosted: Sun Dec 23, 2012 9:39 pm

Character: Tekkou
Link to profile: Here

Puppet Name: Sai
Puppet Appearance: User Image - Blocked by "Display Image" Settings. Click to show.

Puppet Description: Sai is a puppet which has been dressed to look like any other person you would see on the streets. He is about 6’ tall and has white hair. He is covered in artificial skin from head to toe that makes him look normal. Underneath the skin he has bits of metal patching in key places. The patching covers the top of his forearms, his entire hands, the front half of his legs, as well as the front of his torso. Inside his head is a speech recognition device, which allows him to speak and respond to others, and along his body has multiple stealth nodes so his charka strings can’t be seen. He moves like a normal person, looks like a normal person, and also talks like one too. This could possibly be the biggest deception of this generation. Sai is always by Tekkou’s side acting like a squad member.

Mechanism Summary:
• Covered in artificial skin and hair making it look like a real person
•Metal patching underneath fake skin
•Speech recognition system allowing him to speak and respond to others
•Stealth Nodes making chakra strings attached invisible

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PostPosted: Fri Dec 28, 2012 6:02 pm
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PostPosted: Tue Feb 19, 2013 9:40 pm

Character: Takumi Satetsu
Link to profile: X

Puppet Name: Vex
Puppet Appearance: User Image

Puppet Description: Vex is Takumi's first puppet he made while still at the academy. He created this puppet in the likeness of one of Sasori's puppets though on a much smaller skill scale. This puppet also is one of his favorites, if not his all time favorite puppet ever as it is a very skilled and adapt puppet. It is made out of a chakra enhanced wood that is capable of taking multiple hits easier while also being able to dish them out with ease. This puppet is equipped with two bladed wings hidden in the back that can spin and slice up his opponent or rest in front of the user to block low ranking ninjutsu and complex tai and buki, while also stopping projectiles. The next thing it has is a wire launcher and reel in the abdomen that can be coated in a poison if needed to. The wire reach is about twenty five feet and can be fired with decent accuracy. The last hidden surprise this puppet has is a kunai canon located in the right palm of the puppet. This canon is able to fire five cylinders into the air that rain down kunai once the reach their peek height of ten feet into the air. The kunai are able to cover a fifteen foot area with kunai in merely seconds. However, this can not be fired in a quick succession as the reload factor of this canon it rather slow and take three posts before it can be used again.

Mechanism Summary:
• Dual Bladed Wings hidden in the back. Able to block C rank Ninjutsu and Complex Tai and Buki, as well as deflect projectiles not used in a buki style. It can also act as a weapon when at close range as they are able to spin rapidly in front of the puppet or behind it as well.
• Wire Launcher and Reel hidden in the abdomen. Able to launch twenty five feet out with decent accuracy. If used right it can even be used to bounce of corners and ensnare an opponent before bringing them into the spinning wing blades.
• A Kunai Canon hidden in the right palm. Is able to launch five cylinders that contain a massive amount of kunai ten feet in the air, in which time it would activate and unleash a massive shower of kunai that cover a fifteen foot area. Can not be fired quickly as it take three full posts to reload the canon.
 
PostPosted: Thu Mar 28, 2013 9:44 am

(If possible, I’d like to assume the puppet was acquired during the time jump.)

Character: Shadowseeker Húnyistír
Link to profile: [x]

Puppet Name: Tosai
Puppet Appearance:
(Picture coming eventually. I draw all of the images I use.)

Rather realistic in appearance, the puppet resembles a golden eagle in size and proportion. It has a wingspan of approximately 84 in (213.36 cm) and a body length of 36 in (91.44 cm). However, it weighs a bit more than a normal bird, about 12 lbs (5.4 kg), though it is still very lightly built. This makes it rather fragile.


The bird, as mentioned, is rather realistic, with a lot of effort put into its appearance, thanks to its user’s perfect memory and artistic abilities. It is covered with reddish-brown feathers, darker at the tail, save for a strip of white feathers, and head, with yellow hind legs and a slightly darker beak. Its talons are abnormally long, however, at about two inches.

Puppet Description:
Shadow spent the time he was traveling over a course of three or four months also searching for materials he could use for his puppet. Though it represents an eagle, they are much harder to find and too majestic to hunt, so he used mostly hawk feathers, though the wings proved difficult to find the proper feathers and length.

For the base of the puppet, he used a bamboo structure, since the reed was both durable and lightweight. It was given the same bone structure as a bird, for the most part, though the hollow cavity of the abdomen was also reinforced with bamboo. This cavity, as well as the ‘skull’, is utilized for mechanism compartments.

The beak is made of animal bone, carved into the proper shape and painted. The feet are also made of bone, though jointed. They are the only obviously jointed area without inspecting the puppet closer. The talons are made with bladed steel.

Shadow uses his tree climbing ability to climb to the highest branches of most trees, greatly extending his sight range and, therefore, range of the puppet’s control. He designed the puppet to be utilized as more of a scouting weapon than an offensive weapon, with mechanisms to help it get away in tight situations. It is also manually collapsible, where the head and legs contract into the body and the wings fold neatly against the back. This makes it easier and less awkward to transport.

Mechanism Summary:
• Senbon firing mechanism located in mouth; senbon soaked regularly in poison made from common ivy. It is rarely deadly, but coma as a result is possible.
- 2 posts – Difficulty Breathing
- 5 posts – Convulsions and Vomiting
- 10 posts – Paralysis
- 15 posts – Coma (50% chance per post until treatment is administered)
---- Roll 10-sided dice. Coma occurs if an odd number is rolled.
---- Person can still survive after coma if found in a reasonable amount of time.
- Stores up to 20 of these senbon.
• Bladed talons, beak, and wing tips for attack cutting through wires or nets.
• Weighted net, big enough to trap a single adult. Can carry only 1. Stored in abdomen.
• Paper compartment for storing explosive notes, ink drawings, or messages. Paper within compartment can be dropped via mechanism. Dimensions: 8x5x4 inches, can store as much paper as can be stuffed in it. Stored in abdomen.

Army of One Discipline:
• Ink compartment with emergency ink for Shadow to use. Ink can also be dropped via mechanism for techniques such as Ink Projectiles, Sumi Gatsumi no Jutsu (Ink Haze Technique), and Sumi Ame no Jutsu (Ink Rain Technique). Dimensions: 3x3x3 inches. Stored in abdomen.
• Smoke bombs to conceal escape. Can be dropped from compartment and holds up to 3. Stored in abdomen.
• Eyes are cameras that allow Shadow to see through a headset what it sees. However, he is unable to see his own surroundings when using this. Used to scout out areas inconspicuously, unless chakra strings are visible to enemy (only a few clans are able to see chakra easily).


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PostPosted: Sat Mar 30, 2013 3:03 pm
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It's well thought out, yes sirree bob! Well, a total of 4 mechanisms are allowed, so let me count them off here: Mouth located senbon launcher, bladed talons (2, 1 for each claw), bladed beak, bladed wing tips (2, 1 for each wing), weighted net, and 1 compartment. That's a total of 8 mechanisms. You also have the 'Army of One' discipline, boosting that to a total of 7 allowed mechanisms. Then you've added 3 more mechanisms for a grand total of 11. Well, I hate to say it but, you're 4 over the limit, so let's try to work this bit out, ne?

If you make the blades all connected together (reducing 5 to 1), they'll need to be held somewhere, like a 'trap' inside the abdomen compartment. This means that it won't be usable unless you open the abdomen & put them into place not unlike a spikey, rigid armor, but also much stiffer than as individual components. That would reduce the count to 7. That's my suggestion for reducing the count, but what do you think? If you accept this right off the bat, then you're good to go, otherwise we have lots of time to discuss it.
 
PostPosted: Sat Mar 30, 2013 3:08 pm
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I can just get rid of the blades. That's fine by me.

Edit: I just talked to Lan about it. I'll agree with you're suggestion.
 

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PostPosted: Sun Mar 31, 2013 11:59 am
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Character: Suoh Kuroh [5th of 7 possible custom puppets] "Architect"
Link to profile: [x]

Puppet Name: Hibiki Kuraku Saundo Ningyō [ Echo, The Darkened Sound Puppet ]
Puppet Appearance: ->

Puppet Description:
Echo is a Close Combat, Human Artificial Fight Type Puppet, equipped with tools that Suoh has collected through the ages, it is adapted to almost every situation. The Puppet is held together with a special Tungsten Metal and wood, therefore is not magnetic at all.

Echo's special primary mechanism is it's chains. Inside it's body it holds five talismans that are connected to the [ Shiirete Siru (Replenishing) - Rank D ] Technique and feeds out five different links of chains. The chains are not metal or magnetic in anyway as they are also made of Tungsten. These five chains are all connected to something different. two chains are fed into the leggings of Echo, where at the tip are two serrated kunai's that can impale and be fired out in high speeds. Two more are connected to the two swords,(also made of Tungsten), so that they are always connected to Echo and Suoh can never lose grip of them. The final Chain is much more like a third arm or tail; its main purpose in battle is to catch people off guard and trip them up or do a frontal assault during a parry.

Mechanism Summary:
• Two Tungsten Blades (Pure Black)
• Two Kunai Launchers (In Knees)
• Five Chains; two connected to Kunai's, two connected to swords, one free as a tail
• Fully Capable of performing Bukijutsu skills up to Rank B (All Costs still apply to Suoh, added cost of [ +10 cp ] to any skill)
• Unable to use without at least five fingers.
 
PostPosted: Sun Mar 31, 2013 3:58 pm
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Character: Suoh Kuroh [6th of 7 possible custom puppets] "Architect"
Link to profile: [x]

Puppet Name: 'Timid' Saigo Tsūkoku [ Ultimatum ]
Puppet Appearance: ->

Puppet Description: A Hollow Puppet that Akane has worked on for four years straight. The Puppet is Hollow and has the ability to fill itself with Chakra [ up to 300 cP max ] and then expel it through three different means.

The first method of letting out the chakra is to dispel a Rank amount of chakra into its gauntlet that covers its right arm, which would erupt a large sound wave that would increase in ferocity for each rank, only one rank of skill can be used each post, unless stated:
Rank E :: A small sound wave is shot out in front of Timid for a small range [20 ft] and causes temporary deafness and causes endless ringing. Deafness lasts two [2] posts
Rank D :: A small sound wave is shot out in front of Timid and covers a larger amount of area [40 ft], the wave can cause deafness and a minor headache. The headache and deafness lasts three [3] posts
Rank C :: A ripple of the air will show as the sound is shot outwards for [50 ft], this wave is quiet due to the frequency, but once it passes someone it causes severe dizziness for [3] posts.
Rank B :: More like a loud bang, sound will erupt in a cone in front of Timid and a state of deafness and daze to people who are within a [40 ft] radius in front of Timid right arm. The disability and deafness lasts four [4] posts, making Taijutsu and Bukijutsu skills one rank less useful.

The second method is to feed or store chakra then give it to any squadmate of Suoh's choice. Max of [ 80 cP ] for feeding and giving chakra.

The final method of using chakra for Timid is to use it himself. If one of Souh's hearts is put into Timid's chest cavity, the chakra will interact and Suoh can communicate through Timid in a different voice. A long as a heart is in Timid, he does not need any strings attached to him and can walk around areas as long as Suoh is in the same Subforum. Suoh usually uses this method to use Timid as some sort of secretary to his office.


Mechanism Summary:
• Sound Eruptor Gauntlet [ Right Arm ]
• Heart Cavity
• Senbon Launcher [ 20x Ammo ]
• Built in Dako Staff [ Left Arm ]
• Built in Tsuru-Kame Shield [On Back ]
 

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PostPosted: Mon Apr 01, 2013 10:50 pm
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Character: Suoh Kuroh [5th of 7 possible custom puppets] "Architect"
Link to profile: [x]

Puppet Name: Hibiki Kuraku Saundo Ningyō [ Echo, The Darkened Sound Puppet ]
Puppet Appearance: ->

Puppet Description:
Echo is a Close Combat, Human Artificial Fight Type Puppet, equipped with tools that Suoh has collected through the ages, it is adapted to almost every situation. The Puppet is held together with a special Tungsten Metal and wood, therefore is not magnetic at all.

Echo's special primary mechanism is it's chains. Inside it's body it holds five talismans that are connected to the [ Shiirete Siru (Replenishing) - Rank D ] Technique and feeds out five different links of chains. The chains are not metal or magnetic in anyway as they are also made of Tungsten. These five chains are all connected to something different. two chains are fed into the leggings of Echo, where at the tip are two serrated kunai's that can impale and be fired out in high speeds. Two more are connected to the two swords,(also made of Tungsten), so that they are always connected to Echo and Suoh can never lose grip of them. The final Chain is much more like a third arm or tail; its main purpose in battle is to catch people off guard and trip them up or do a frontal assault during a parry.

Mechanism Summary:
• Two Tungsten Blades (Pure Black)
• Two Kunai Launchers (In Knees)
• Five Chains; two connected to Kunai's, two connected to swords, one free as a tail
• Fully Capable of performing Bukijutsu skills up to Rank B (All Costs still apply to Suoh, added cost of [ +10 cp ] to any skill)
• Unable to use without at least five fingers.


Alright, so my understanding of how this works is this: A jutsu is creating the chain, which are connected to different things. Due to the jutsu being the main interactor of the chain, the '5' chains only act as 1 mechanism. And due to the items being attached to the ends of them, those items don't count as mechanisms. But, these things can only be used during the jutsu, due to their reliance upon it, yes? That means that the 2 kunai launchers (attached to the chain) don't count as mechanisms, and neither do the Tungsten Blades. All in all, you have 2 mechanisms: the jutsu/chain combo & the Bukijutsu abilities.

If that's correct, then you have the option of adding 2 more mechanisms. I would add a stop break between the swords & kunai launchers (possibly a container?) to keep them both from working at the same time. As for the other, that would be up to you. If you don't want to add anything else, then you're set to go. If you want to add the other 2 later on, feel free to post an addendum here for approval.
 
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