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 Posted: Sun Mar 20, 2011 7:36 am
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Raving Exile loveAkiochan Raving Exile i wrote it when i was 14 but i sold the rights off to a band for cash. They perform it. Senses Fail - Map the Streets i'm listening to the song....I don't quite feel the words as much as I do in your poem. That was a beautiful poem thought smile true quality! Thank you! its always good to have people appreciate the original work rather than the more famous stuff.
How can you not when the original is better than the famous stuff smile You should do more and publish them on your own. You could be rich biggrin |
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Posted: Sun Mar 20, 2011 7:38 am
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loveAkiochan Raving Exile loveAkiochan Raving Exile i wrote it when i was 14 but i sold the rights off to a band for cash. They perform it. Senses Fail - Map the Streets i'm listening to the song....I don't quite feel the words as much as I do in your poem. That was a beautiful poem thought smile true quality! Thank you! its always good to have people appreciate the original work rather than the more famous stuff.
How can you not when the original is better than the famous stuff smile You should do more and publish them on your own. You could be rich biggrin
but i dont do it for money. i just write out my soul basically |
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Posted: Sun Mar 20, 2011 7:41 am
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Raving Exile loveAkiochan Raving Exile loveAkiochan Raving Exile i wrote it when i was 14 but i sold the rights off to a band for cash. They perform it. Senses Fail - Map the Streets i'm listening to the song....I don't quite feel the words as much as I do in your poem. That was a beautiful poem thought smile true quality! Thank you! its always good to have people appreciate the original work rather than the more famous stuff.
How can you not when the original is better than the famous stuff smile You should do more and publish them on your own. You could be rich biggrin but i dont do it for money. i just write out my soul basically
hmm, i feel you there. I haven't written poetry in a few years....i miss the days when I could just tap into anything and let the words flow...but know I'm a story writer so i guess my talent just shifted smile |
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Posted: Sun Mar 20, 2011 7:45 am
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loveAkiochan Raving Exile loveAkiochan Raving Exile loveAkiochan Raving Exile i wrote it when i was 14 but i sold the rights off to a band for cash. They perform it. Senses Fail - Map the Streets i'm listening to the song....I don't quite feel the words as much as I do in your poem. That was a beautiful poem thought smile true quality! Thank you! its always good to have people appreciate the original work rather than the more famous stuff.
How can you not when the original is better than the famous stuff smile You should do more and publish them on your own. You could be rich biggrin but i dont do it for money. i just write out my soul basically
hmm, i feel you there. I haven't written poetry in a few years....i miss the days when I could just tap into anything and let the words flow...but know I'm a story writer so i guess my talent just shifted smile
thats cool! id love to read something you wrote |
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Posted: Sun Mar 20, 2011 7:47 am
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Raving Exile loveAkiochan Raving Exile loveAkiochan Raving Exile Thank you! its always good to have people appreciate the original work rather than the more famous stuff.
How can you not when the original is better than the famous stuff smile You should do more and publish them on your own. You could be rich biggrin but i dont do it for money. i just write out my soul basically
hmm, i feel you there. I haven't written poetry in a few years....i miss the days when I could just tap into anything and let the words flow...but know I'm a story writer so i guess my talent just shifted smile thats cool! id love to read something you wrote
hmm, i have a host of things. some old poetry, i've got countless stories. i have my long time series, i even have some half decent yoai ^^ what would you like to check out from my library today? lol wink |
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Posted: Sun Mar 20, 2011 7:50 am
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loveAkiochan Raving Exile loveAkiochan Raving Exile loveAkiochan Raving Exile Thank you! its always good to have people appreciate the original work rather than the more famous stuff.
How can you not when the original is better than the famous stuff smile You should do more and publish them on your own. You could be rich biggrin but i dont do it for money. i just write out my soul basically
hmm, i feel you there. I haven't written poetry in a few years....i miss the days when I could just tap into anything and let the words flow...but know I'm a story writer so i guess my talent just shifted smile thats cool! id love to read something you wrote
hmm, i have a host of things. some old poetry, i've got countless stories. i have my long time series, i even have some half decent yoai ^^ what would you like to check out from my library today? lol wink
Whatever your willing to show me. other than the yaoi.... sorry i just.... i dont mind people who do it i just cant read it |
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Posted: Sun Mar 20, 2011 7:56 am
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Raving Exile loveAkiochan Raving Exile loveAkiochan Raving Exile but i dont do it for money. i just write out my soul basically
hmm, i feel you there. I haven't written poetry in a few years....i miss the days when I could just tap into anything and let the words flow...but know I'm a story writer so i guess my talent just shifted smile thats cool! id love to read something you wrote
hmm, i have a host of things. some old poetry, i've got countless stories. i have my long time series, i even have some half decent yoai ^^ what would you like to check out from my library today? lol wink Whatever your willing to show me. other than the yaoi.... sorry i just.... i dont mind people who do it i just cant read it
hmm..lemme see....maybe...hmm...here, I think you'll like this story. It was a class assignment that my teacher is trying to get me to publish |
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Posted: Sun Mar 20, 2011 8:09 am
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loveAkiochan Raving Exile loveAkiochan Raving Exile loveAkiochan Raving Exile but i dont do it for money. i just write out my soul basically
hmm, i feel you there. I haven't written poetry in a few years....i miss the days when I could just tap into anything and let the words flow...but know I'm a story writer so i guess my talent just shifted smile thats cool! id love to read something you wrote
hmm, i have a host of things. some old poetry, i've got countless stories. i have my long time series, i even have some half decent yoai ^^ what would you like to check out from my library today? lol wink Whatever your willing to show me. other than the yaoi.... sorry i just.... i dont mind people who do it i just cant read it
hmm..lemme see....maybe...hmm...here, I think you'll like this story. It was a class assignment that my teacher is trying to get me to publish
Thats really good! |
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Posted: Sun Mar 20, 2011 8:13 am
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Raving Exile loveAkiochan Raving Exile loveAkiochan Raving Exile thats cool! id love to read something you wrote
hmm, i have a host of things. some old poetry, i've got countless stories. i have my long time series, i even have some half decent yoai ^^ what would you like to check out from my library today? lol wink Whatever your willing to show me. other than the yaoi.... sorry i just.... i dont mind people who do it i just cant read it
hmm..lemme see....maybe...hmm...here, I think you'll like this story. It was a class assignment that my teacher is trying to get me to publishThats really good!
really? you think so redface thankz |
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Posted: Sun Mar 20, 2011 8:27 am
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loveAkiochan Raving Exile loveAkiochan Raving Exile loveAkiochan Raving Exile thats cool! id love to read something you wrote
hmm, i have a host of things. some old poetry, i've got countless stories. i have my long time series, i even have some half decent yoai ^^ what would you like to check out from my library today? lol wink Whatever your willing to show me. other than the yaoi.... sorry i just.... i dont mind people who do it i just cant read it
hmm..lemme see....maybe...hmm...here, I think you'll like this story. It was a class assignment that my teacher is trying to get me to publishThats really good! really? you think so redface thankz
Yeah i cant write stories very well they always turn erotic |
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Posted: Sun Mar 20, 2011 8:28 am
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Posted: Sun Mar 20, 2011 8:34 am
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Raving Exile loveAkiochan Raving Exile loveAkiochan Raving Exile Whatever your willing to show me. other than the yaoi.... sorry i just.... i dont mind people who do it i just cant read it
hmm..lemme see....maybe...hmm...here, I think you'll like this story. It was a class assignment that my teacher is trying to get me to publishThats really good! really? you think so redface thankz Yeah i cant write stories very well they always turn erotic
haha, well i write erotica but i keep that to myself cause it generally involves real life characters. |
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Posted: Sun Mar 20, 2011 8:35 am
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Raving Exile Fireworks at dawn as I sip for assistance. This flask deeps me calm it reflects back my bent image. Of someone who's lost and getting older by the minute. Laugh lines are like growing scars someday they will be finished. I've got so many places that I want to see and I've got so many faces that I want to be. So get on your feet wipe the dirt off and get with it. Destiny waits at your door all wrapped up with a ribbon. It's time to move on because the past can't be your passion. So what if you did something wrong, fined someone who hasn't
thats really nice. I feel that poem deep in my heart smile |
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Posted: Sun Mar 20, 2011 4:36 pm
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Posted: Sun Mar 20, 2011 6:51 pm
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