[SWSE] Dawn of Defiance <OoC> {Not accepting}

[Dallas Moonrain]

redface Here's her actual link (and I'll fix the previous post in a minute...)

Xylee Shindra

Sorry about that!  

[Disciple of Sakura]

Seph Baelzara

@The Miraluka:
'kay, as much as I love Miralukas (I ******** love those sight-blind near-humans), your supposed-backstory on your appearance baffles the s**t out of me.
Who imprisoned you?
Why do you still have the slave collar?
How did you escape?
If you're going to have a "glowing" visor, I'm going to have to ask you to spend credits on it. Specifically 2000 credits. I'm treating it as Cybernetic Prosthesis for the Eyes (and would give the same boons and banes), since it's nonessential to your sight. It's also the same cost as a replacement set for the Kel Dor living--but those are essential to their lives, thus can get away with it. But if you want it just to give off life, I can see dropping the price, and removing a zero from the price

Made an edit on the first post. It's bold red.

1) The backstory, as stated, isn't done yet. I intend on working on it, but it was kind of late when I posted it, and I was very tired mentally yesterday.
2) Who imprisoned me? At this point, I'm actually thinking it was originally space pirates, but the full backstory will get written when I get the chance.
3) Because I kept it.
4) The visor is just like any other Miraluka visor (and therefore free) except with a LED light in it that gives off red light. It certainly shouldn't cost nearly that much credits, if any. It's an aesthetic without any mechanical advantage, so I just don't see why it should cost as much as something necessary to a race's survival. If having a visor that lights up is going to be costly without yielding a reward, I'll look into picking a different illustration and just going from there.  

[Disciple of Sakura]

Background is done.

As to the fourth item... not really in the mood to argue it, but clothing in Star Wars doesn't have any cost at all, as far as I can see. Paying for something that has no mechanical value or benefit isn't something I like doing. I'll just use a different illustration rather than trying to look cool.

For reference: Here's the sheet now.  

[Keith Valken Lionheart]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UQPMK-GowoY

To pump you guys up.  

[Mongooseh]

Nope.  

[Disciple of Sakura]

Seph Baelzara

Mir Eshke - Level (1) to all defenses. I don't know where you're getting the +3 for Reflex.

That would be the armor. Padded flight suit. +3 REF defense.  

[Lord of the Vine]

Seph Baelzara

Xylee/Jaboo/Lorn Kawl/Niknik - Desinty? Without fluff I have trouble figuring out a suggestion for you due to that.
Garne - Add level (1) to all defenses
Mir Eshke - Level (1) to all defenses. I don't know where you're getting the +3 for Reflex.

On a side note: Can anyone understand/speak Jawa?

Done.  

[Anatarei Crimsonthrone]

Don't suppose there might be room for a Wookiee Jedi? Seeing as it still doesn't seem to be taken.

Reason he survived Order 66 - who expects a Wookiee to be a Jedi?  

[Lord of the Vine]

Seph Baelzara

I'm actually in a game with a Wookie Jedi. It's going fairly well, and the character is surprisingly balanced.
So no, sorry, that reason won't fly.

During the Clone War Era, though? How many Wookiee Jedi can you name from that time?

Not trying to start something, but Wookiee Jedi are fairly uncommon.  

[Anatarei Crimsonthrone]

Seph Baelzara

I'm actually in a game with a Wookie Jedi. It's going fairly well, and the character is surprisingly balanced.
So no, sorry, that reason won't fly.

Well, there's an actual background there. It does amount to that, but how do you suss out a barely Padawan Wookiee Jedi amidst all the other Wookiees on a planet full of Wookiees when you've got Yoda killing the s**t out of your men?