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Posted: Fri Apr 01, 2011 8:29 pm
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Posted: Fri Apr 01, 2011 8:39 pm
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Azeiel The Fallen Durneal Azeiel The Fallen I see absolutely nothing wrong with your profile. APPROVEDthank you I was not approving your profile Durneal your profile is DENIED. Remove your summon, the crap you have in the buki and taijutsu slots, and add at least another paragraph to your bio. @ Twilight. Both of your attributes and your weapon are denied. Your attributed because they are simply way to OP and your weapon because that is not feasible. There is no way in hell a weapon would be able to extent from two feet to a full one hundred feet and still meowmeowMEOW weigh ten pounds. @Azzurro I am going to need you to make your first attribute a little less..... intense. Do that and your profile is APPROVED .
I changed the Attribute to, "Learns Suuton [3] Posts Faster" I can lower it, but I made it to Suuton only so would that be okay?
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Posted: Fri Apr 01, 2011 8:41 pm
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Posted: Fri Apr 01, 2011 8:43 pm
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Posted: Fri Apr 01, 2011 8:46 pm
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Posted: Sat Apr 02, 2011 11:44 pm
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Image is being hand drawn and will be posted soon. Azeiel has seen this in person if you have any questions. ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: Annalisa Cambria Hyuuga Nickname: “Cam”
Age: 19 Birthdate: February first Gender: Female
Height: 64 inches Weight: 125 pounds
Nindo: "Tis better to beg for forgiveness than to ask for permission." Personality: She is often seen as the silent-awkward type, but her violent nature is easily provoked. Betrayed in her youth she still holds a deep-seeded hatred somewhere in her heart. She sits quietly waiting for someone else to make the first move and calculates her first strike. By her tendencies she is not an aggressor.
Description: Image pending use your imaginations A billow of raven hair caresses her porcelain cheeks and skates along the edge of her jaw line. The A-symmetrical bob adding dimensions mystique to her already alluring visage. Hiding behind swept bangs steely white eyes pierce even the thickest of constitutions. Her plump lips are often found in a thinly pressed line attesting to her limited patience. Her shoulders are slender and small as compared to the voluptuous curves that follow as the eye moves further south. Her hands might be soft and delicate looking but with her Chakra control they are deadly weapons. Long "piano fingers" finish her hands with trimmed clean-cut nails. Hidden beneath robes, blades, and ties are her true features, a lithe, curvaceous, goddess of porcelain completion. Her legs are a powerhouse of muscle, long and lean she can run like a gazelle. She often wears a ballerina-style wrappings from mid-calf down to her ankles where they tie onto her Geta. Village: The Hidden Village Amongst The Leaves.
Rank: Genin Class: Eiseijutsu (Medical) ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Bloodline: Byakugan
Chakra Pool: 250 Chakra Color: Amethyst Chakra Element: Water, Wind
Strengths: • Medium-range attacks • Elevated Chakra control Weaknesses: • Short tempered • Elemental weaknesses (Earth and Fire) Fears: • Heights • Drowing (Inability to control ones own element)
Attributes: • Uses 5 fewer Chakra to use Byakugan • Learns Eiseijutsu in 1 less post Class Attribute: • C. Attribute - Faulty Precision: Accuracy with techniques slightly increased •Learns Eiseijutsu in 1 less post
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬ Ryo: 両{Money} 0 AC: 0
Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0 ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ Weapon Type: Weapon Range: Weapon Weight: Weapon Location: •
Summoning Type: Summon Sage: No Pacts: No
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬ • Shuriken x15, • Smoke Bombs x10 • Paper Fans x5
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u Maruton • Henge no Jutsu [Transformation Technique] • Kawarimi no Jutsu [Substitution Technique] • Bushin no Jutsu [Clone Technique] • Suimen Hokou no Waza [Act of Water Surface Walking] • Kinobori no Waza [Act of Tree Climbing] • Kai [Release]
Suiton • • • • • •
Fuuton • • • • •
Eiseijutsu • • • • •
Bloodline •
▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u •
▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u
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▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u
• ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬ It was a cold stormy morning when the deadened shrieks of pain began. She had sweat profusely pouring from her tired face as she began to show signs of blood-loss. The room was void shy the barley animated corpse and a few medical supplies. A sickly pallor consumed her as she gave a final cry and from her came the pride of the last eight months. Slowly the woman produced a weak stream of water that bathed the body and soft smile came to her thin lips as the tiny baby girl gave a howl. Gently wrapping her in a swaddling the woman laid back haggard and worn onto her drenched bed, a pool of crimson surrounding her lower torso. Her final breaths were ragged and torn as her sobs wracked from her chest. It seemed as if they weren‘t able to get a medical ninja after all. Maybe if she could hold on a little longer she would live. No, this was how it would have to be. Little Cam would have family to raise her if they came back in time. Alone. Scared. Cold.
Cam grew up in the care of her aunt who assumed the roll of her mother. She was age 15 before her family finally told her the truth. It came out of the blue, one moment she was getting ready for the ninja academy the next she was in a desperate search to find the face of her true parents. The only thing that was certain was that she was born into the Bloodline of the Byakugan, the Hyuuga Clan. Years of searching left her with little more than heartache and despair. She’d found a few records that showed when her parents died and why but no matter what she found or who she spoke to, it never filled the void in her soul. She felt betrayed by everyone, and at the worst time in her life. Her Chakra control, compliments of her bloodline, drove her to Eiseijutsu. She vowed to never let someone else suffer the way her mother did but even still she found herself moving on the offensive. The betrayal left her tedious at times giving her lapses in judgment and making her fly off at the handle. He hands become deadly weapons.
Her limited at the Academy gave her a bit of control and taught her the basics but it ultimately served as little more that a distraction to the sirens going off in her brain.
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Posted: Sun Apr 03, 2011 12:03 pm
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Posted: Sun Apr 03, 2011 3:54 pm
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▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: Keiji Maeda Nickname: N/A
Age: 14 Birthdate: December 25th Gender: Male
Height: 5'4'' Weight: 120lbs
Nindo: "The Mind Shall Vanquish The Sword." Personality: Keiji is very much a calm and calculating person. He always has a reason for everything he does, no matter how small the action is.
Village: Konoha Rank: Gennin Class: Genjutsu
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Bloodline: N/A
Chakra Pool: 225 Chakra Color: Blood-Red Chakra Element: Lightning, Water
Strengths: • Genjutsu use • Reading an opponent Weaknesses: • Physically Weak • Fighting Women Fears: • Enclosed Spaces • Memories of Father
Attributes: • Genjutsu Learned In 1 Less Post • Can Use Musical Instruments Class Attribute: • Learn Genjutsu [1] Post Faster • C. Attribute - Perceiving Mind: Able to detect Genjutsu rank D
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬ Ryo: 両 0 AC: 0
Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ Weapon Type: Katana Weapon Range: Melee Weapon Weight: Six Pounds Weapon Location: Back Sheath
Summoning Type: Summon Sage: Pacts:
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬ • Shuriken x10 • Wire x20'
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u Maruton • Henge no Jutsu [Transformation Technique] • Kawarimi no Jutsu [Substitution Technique] • Bushin no Jutsu [Clone Technique] • Suimen Hokou no Waza [Act of Water Surface Walking] • Kinobori no Waza [Act of Tree Climbing] • Kai [Release]
Raiton •
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{Other jutsu type's name} {Bloodline, Kugutsu, Eiseijutsu, etc.} •
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▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬ Keiji comes from a long string of abuse and disapproval. His father was a drunk, always starting fights and had to rely on his wife to pay for food and his constant intake of alcohol. One night, while it was storming, his father beat his mother, and eventually killed her. It was then that Keiji took what he could carry and left that dead beat for good, though memories of that night haunt him no matter where he does.
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Posted: Sun Apr 03, 2011 4:16 pm
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Posted: Sun Apr 03, 2011 5:44 pm
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Posted: Sun Apr 03, 2011 11:26 pm
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▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: Tsukino Kazuki Nickname: Moonlight Beauty
Age: 19 Birthdate: March 21 Gender: Female
Height: 5'6 Weight:121
Nindo: "Determination makes up for a Difference in strength!' Personality: Lovable,funny, and sweet.She is smart and resourceful. Tsukino is also quite the flirt.She tries her best in everything she does so she does not bring shame to her family.She is confident but not overconfident. Can come off as a bit blunt, but it's just who she is.
Village:Konoha Rank: Chunin Class: Medical Class ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬
Chakra Pool:275/275 Chakra Color: Emerald Green Chakra Element: Lightning
Strengths: •Healing • Close combat Weaknesses: • Long Range Combat Fears: • Heights • Death
Attributes: • Perceptive Sight - Tsukino has a keen eye and is able to deduct enemies within a matter of minutes after fighting them. Makes her a good scout and judge of character. • learns Taijutsu in 1 less post Class Attribute: • Able To Learn [Eiseijutsu] • Learn Eiseijutsu [1] Post Faster • C. Attribute - Faulty Precision: Accuracy with techniques slightly increased
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬ Ryo: 0 AC: 0
Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0 ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ Weapon Type: None Weapon Range: Weapon Weight: Weapon Location:
Summoning: (maybe later on) Summon Sage: No Pacts: None Yet
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬ • 15 Kunai • 15 senbon
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u Maruton {Start with the following six only} • Henge no Jutsu [Transformation Technique] • Kawarimi no Jutsu [Substitution Technique] • Bushin no Jutsu [Clone Technique] • Suimen Hokou no Waza [Act of Water Surface Walking] • Kinobori no Waza [Act of Tree Climbing] • Kai [Release] •Body flicker[X] •Manipulating Advancing blades[X] •Living Light Daggers[X] •Knowledge Removal Technique[X] {Raiton} •
{Your second element's name} • None
{Esiejutsu} • Diagnosis[X] •Shiatsu[X] •Cleanse[X] •Power of Resistance[X] •Extraction[X] •Bandage Skill[X] •Oxygen Supply[X] •Blood Cogulation[X] •Poison Removal[X] •Healing Hands Minor[X] • Adrenaline Pulse[X] •Soten Kisshun[X] • • • • • • ▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u •Death Viewing Technique(Killing Intent)[X] •Scattering One Thousand Crows Technique[X] •Crow Clone Technique[X] ▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u • Bruising Sky Leg[X] • Strong Arm[X]
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬ Tsukino was born into the head family of the Kazuki clan and much was and is expected of her.She trained in the art of healing techniques from a young age.She was sent to the academy at thirteen and began her ninja training.Her parents weren't suprised when she told them she wanted to be a medical ninja.Her friend, now deceased, helped her train while she helped him.They have grew close over the years and Tsukino hopes to one day be the best ninja there is.
She graduated and went on mission for the first time.Tsukino was well prepared for the threats that would present themselves during the battle but her teammates were not and unfortunately died during the battle.Tsukino was scarred but that she would never let it happen again.She is now the gennin of Konoha everyone loves of the village that helped her grow on her shinobi path.By many she is called the 'Moonlight beauty' for her ferocity in battle but beautiful appearance.She makes her father proud as she continues her path to the way of the shinobi.
Tsukino recently beat Kenta, her close friend, during the chunin exams. This win solidified her position as a Chunin in her village. Now she hopes to take on more missions while preparing for the new challenges that await her.
Shinsua I found it!!! Yay 4laugh All I did was edit in the jutsu, updated her bio, and updated her rank to where it should currently be. Five of the jutsu: Crow clone, Scattering Crows, Body Flicker, Advancing blades, and Killing intent, were all learned through a Transcription seal.
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Posted: Sun Apr 03, 2011 11:32 pm
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Posted: Mon Apr 04, 2011 2:14 pm
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Posted: Mon Apr 04, 2011 3:53 pm
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