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Posted: Wed Oct 19, 2011 10:26 pm
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Posted: Wed Oct 19, 2011 10:27 pm
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Posted: Wed Oct 19, 2011 10:29 pm
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Posted: Wed Oct 19, 2011 10:38 pm
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Azeiel The Fallen digital m u f f i n s Azeiel The Fallen Only reason i quit playing it today was because I had to go to work XD @Digi Since you have the whole who goes where (after the roll) setup weird to me. would you mind simply telling me where i have to go because I am not going to figure this one out I am to tired for that XD I did. =.= I'm tired too! Go up, Az, go up. T.T Jebus. I know that but what THREAD XD It says SECTION 2.
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Posted: Wed Oct 19, 2011 10:47 pm
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digital m u f f i n s Sugar Dhaku digital m u f f i n s XD I knew you were still going to correct my grammar and punctuation mistakes. My essay. What did you think of it aside from the annoying little mistakes? Very well thought out and insightful. Your use of a personal experience to give your opinions validation was very nice, and your quotations were helpful rather than arbitrary. Okay. Cool. <33333333333333 I dunno if you were immediately looking for it but were there any comma splices? For some reason my paper seems over loaded with commas. Well, you had a lot of dependent clauses and no coordinating conjunctions, so they needed to have commas.
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Posted: Wed Oct 19, 2011 10:49 pm
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Sugar Dhaku digital m u f f i n s Sugar Dhaku digital m u f f i n s XD I knew you were still going to correct my grammar and punctuation mistakes. My essay. What did you think of it aside from the annoying little mistakes? Very well thought out and insightful. Your use of a personal experience to give your opinions validation was very nice, and your quotations were helpful rather than arbitrary. Okay. Cool. <33333333333333 I dunno if you were immediately looking for it but were there any comma splices? For some reason my paper seems over loaded with commas. Well, you had a lot of dependent clauses and no coordinating conjunctions, so they needed to have commas. I either broke them up or added coordinating conjunctions.
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Posted: Wed Oct 19, 2011 10:53 pm
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Posted: Wed Oct 19, 2011 11:05 pm
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Sugar Dhaku Sugar Dhaku digital m u f f i n s Sugar Dhaku digital m u f f i n s XD I knew you were still going to correct my grammar and punctuation mistakes. My essay. What did you think of it aside from the annoying little mistakes? Very well thought out and insightful. Your use of a personal experience to give your opinions validation was very nice, and your quotations were helpful rather than arbitrary. Okay. Cool. <33333333333333 I dunno if you were immediately looking for it but were there any comma splices? For some reason my paper seems over loaded with commas. Well, you had a lot of dependent clauses and no coordinating conjunctions, so they needed to have commas. I either broke them up or added coordinating conjunctions. Ahhh. Alright. Thanks a lot. Seriously. <<
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Posted: Wed Oct 19, 2011 11:10 pm
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digital m u f f i n s Sugar Dhaku Sugar Dhaku digital m u f f i n s Sugar Dhaku Very well thought out and insightful. Your use of a personal experience to give your opinions validation was very nice, and your quotations were helpful rather than arbitrary. Okay. Cool. <33333333333333 I dunno if you were immediately looking for it but were there any comma splices? For some reason my paper seems over loaded with commas. Well, you had a lot of dependent clauses and no coordinating conjunctions, so they needed to have commas. I either broke them up or added coordinating conjunctions. Ahhh. Alright. Thanks a lot. Seriously. << It was no problem. You're welcome.
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Posted: Wed Oct 19, 2011 11:20 pm
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Posted: Thu Oct 20, 2011 10:06 am
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Posted: Thu Oct 20, 2011 10:09 am
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Posted: Thu Oct 20, 2011 10:16 am
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Posted: Thu Oct 20, 2011 10:21 am
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Posted: Thu Oct 20, 2011 10:31 am
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