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 Posted: Thu Aug 12, 2010 5:12 pm
eh. . . I'm around; just went through the depths of hell and back.
I'm going to work on my story soon.
I'm on CH.4
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Posted: Sat Aug 14, 2010 7:35 am
redface
Sorry I've not been online. My brother's PC broke down, so I've not had any real internet access. At first he thought it was just a virus but it just kept on shutting down, after wiping it didn't work we took it to the shop and asked to get it repaired. Long story short he's bought himself a laptop, which I've finally managed to get on.
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Posted: Sat Aug 14, 2010 11:38 am
Actually Jpiiym, you didin`t complete the training. Don`t you remember Armond telling you to come back for the final part after you picked up your mission letter? You blew out of town immediately afterwards and never completed the top shelf.
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Posted: Sat Aug 14, 2010 12:23 pm
HOLY CRAP! Right when i get busy with life, the RP moves fast... the irony... sighs... I guess I'll have to catch up...
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Posted: Sat Aug 14, 2010 12:27 pm
Oh and Raskal, do you mind if i do a times skip to the next day? cause i don't want to throw you guys off Since yours and Sonata's characters are interacting
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Posted: Sat Aug 14, 2010 1:18 pm
Thats fine, it won`t affect us.
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Posted: Sat Aug 14, 2010 2:10 pm
How's everyone's weekend so far?
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Posted: Sat Aug 14, 2010 2:13 pm
Raskal56 Actually Jpiiym, you didin`t complete the training. Don`t you remember Armond telling you to come back for the final part after you picked up your mission letter? You blew out of town immediately afterwards and never completed the top shelf. !? ((goes back few ******** meeeeeeeeeeeee. scream ... well Any suggestion's on how my character can get out of this one intact? (that mean's without getting his balls cut off)
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Posted: Sat Aug 14, 2010 2:41 pm
Well technically I don`t think you have any pokemon on you sinc eyou left and the ones you were using at the time of training were rentals. I`ll have Jaxon give you a pokemon to use.
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Posted: Sun Aug 15, 2010 2:44 pm
Ok, just forget put that part about not finished in my recent post for you JP. I was going to write something else clever but I forgot what it was.
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Posted: Sun Aug 15, 2010 3:05 pm
Raskal56 Ok, just forget put that part about not finished in my recent post for you JP. I was going to write something else clever but I forgot what it was. lol thanks though. (you pulled my a** out of the flame's with those pokemon.) what type pokemon are they anyway? and who is glitch? and who is Jd? (which is which)
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Posted: Sun Aug 15, 2010 6:36 pm
The pokemon are a Meganium and a Swampert. Glitch is the boy and GD is the girl.
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Posted: Sun Aug 15, 2010 7:31 pm
Raskal56 The pokemon are a Meganium and a Swampert. Glitch is the boy and GD is the girl. So I'm holding their starters? (the silver in me doesn't know how he feels about that kind of grudge...)
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Posted: Mon Aug 16, 2010 9:18 am
just put it in your mouth Raskal56 The pokemon are a Meganium and a Swampert. Glitch is the boy and GD is the girl. So I'm holding their starters? (the silver in me doesn't know how he feels about that kind of grudge...) moral dilemma? you should delve deeper and figure out what the deal is at some point.
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Posted: Wed Aug 18, 2010 12:40 am
redid mission 1: part 1
just posted mission 2: part 1 on morters story.
ok because it DOES include a questionable scene with a little girl I feel I need to explain this. but while I do so I might as well post comments on all the chapters so far.
Mission1: part 1- I completely redid this. When I first did this, it was rushed, not thought through at all, and just badly typed. but I went through it again and added and removed a lot of things that I think will make it more enjoyable to read. (if anyone ever cares to read it) The point of the chapter is just to get a feel for the character's being introduced and their environment. I included some of houndours background too,
bottom line though morter has two potential girlfriends in the future, he's still a loser, his dad's still a d**k, and houndour is still breaking her ribs. read it if you want because the information I included will be needed if you intend on following the story.
Mission1: Part 2- you see houndour warm up to Morter a little. Nothing else happens.
Mission 1: Part 3- the Granbull catch up with houndour, a meeting that changes morter forever. houndour finally accepts Morter. my second favorate chapter to date.
Mission 2: Part 1- Most of this chapter is seen from the view point of jessie. In this chapter,through both a shower scene, and a flashback, you will truly get a feel for how young the main characters are at this point. And maybe you start to think more about how disturbed Morter really has become and the type of relationship he has with his father...
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