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 Posted: Sun Aug 22, 2010 11:15 am
not so much of a post of approval in either place I posted the story.
that's depressing.
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Posted: Sun Aug 22, 2010 1:29 pm
Don`t seek praise for everything you do, otherwise the work you do that truely shines won`t amount to much.
one second...
*shoots his high horse*
Now that thats taken care of let me actually go and read what you`ve posted. I appologize for being perfusely lethargic.
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Posted: Sun Aug 22, 2010 3:57 pm
Raskal56 Don`t seek praise for everything you do, otherwise the work you do that truely shines won`t amount to much. one second... *shoots his high horse* Now that thats taken care of let me actually go and read what you`ve posted. I appologize for being perfusely lethargic. its not seeking praise for everything I do. It's just I worked long hard hours that I don't have to get this done. and I want someone to both criticize and enjoy my work. confused
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Posted: Tue Aug 24, 2010 12:58 pm
Finally replied sorry it's such a late one
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Posted: Tue Aug 24, 2010 6:57 pm
Good stuff JP, I like how you`re establishing the relationship between Mortar and Houndour. The only thing I really can say to criticise your work is for you to pay more attention to grammar and doule usage of certain words or phrases. Otherwise its good material.
Missy, Fiyori and you need to hurry along a bit more. I know its a little tough coordinating things together but we`ve been on Cinnabar for coming close to a year now. We need to push things along faster and get to some real action.
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Posted: Tue Aug 24, 2010 7:04 pm
Raskal56 Missy, Fiyori and you need to hurry along a bit more. I know its a little tough coordinating things together but we`ve been on Cinnabar for coming close to a year now. We need to push things along faster and get to some real action. this. complete and utterly this. lets hurry to mainland already. oh and thanks for the complement. I was starting to get discouraged but now I can continue writing.
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Posted: Tue Aug 24, 2010 9:42 pm
posted. Um...I'm tired. I'll correct any mistakes tomarrow morning.
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Posted: Thu Aug 26, 2010 2:11 pm
Yay I finally posted something.
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Posted: Sun Sep 12, 2010 11:05 pm
I lost my sunglasses today...... neutral
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Posted: Wed Sep 15, 2010 8:29 am
Bummer Hatter. I broke mine the other day too. Nice post btw. I like how you referred to your pent up sense for adventure as a caged stallion, then later got on a boat named 'Seabuscuit'! That's good stuff right thar. xd
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Posted: Thu Sep 16, 2010 8:28 pm
They were five dollars at Wal-Mart, but it was the day I cut my hair short. Haha, I wasn't even aware of the correlation I made. I have been away, busy with school and the fraternity of which I am a pledge so I decided to write a long post to make up for my absence.
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Posted: Fri Sep 17, 2010 9:03 am
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Posted: Sun Sep 19, 2010 2:44 pm
It won't let me view the topic. It keeps saying I am not authorized to view the forum. I am guessing it is the "Before the Beginning" thread?
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Posted: Sun Sep 19, 2010 4:12 pm
Estranged Hatter It won't let me view the topic. It keeps saying I am not authorized to view the forum. I am guessing it is the "Before the Beginning" thread? No its in another guild.
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Posted: Sun Sep 19, 2010 4:27 pm
So is there a general direction that this rp is heading in?
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