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 Posted: Mon Apr 01, 2013 10:57 pm
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Azzurro Skyde 
Character: Suoh Kuroh [5th of 7 possible custom puppets] "Architect"
Link to profile: [x]
Puppet Name: Hibiki Kuraku Saundo Ningyō [ Echo, The Darkened Sound Puppet ]
Puppet Appearance: ->
Puppet Description:
Echo is a Close Combat, Human Artificial Fight Type Puppet, equipped with tools that Suoh has collected through the ages, it is adapted to almost every situation. The Puppet is held together with a special Tungsten Metal and wood, therefore is not magnetic at all.
Echo's special primary mechanism is it's chains. Inside it's body it holds five talismans that are connected to the [ Shiirete Siru (Replenishing) - Rank D ] Technique and feeds out five different links of chains. The chains are not metal or magnetic in anyway as they are also made of Tungsten. These five chains are all connected to something different. two chains are fed into the leggings of Echo, where at the tip are two serrated kunai's that can impale and be fired out in high speeds. Two more are connected to the two swords,(also made of Tungsten), so that they are always connected to Echo and Suoh can never lose grip of them. The final Chain is much more like a third arm or tail; its main purpose in battle is to catch people off guard and trip them up or do a frontal assault during a parry.
Mechanism Summary:
• Two Tungsten Blades (Pure Black)
• Two Kunai Launchers (In Knees)
• Five Chains; two connected to Kunai's, two connected to swords, one free as a tail
• Fully Capable of performing Bukijutsu skills up to Rank B (All Costs still apply to Suoh, added cost of [ +10 cp ] to any skill)
• Unable to use without at least five fingers.
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Posted: Mon Apr 01, 2013 11:03 pm
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Azzurro Skyde 
Character: Suoh Kuroh [6th of 7 possible custom puppets] "Architect"
Link to profile: [x]
Puppet Name: 'Timid' Saigo Tsūkoku [ Ultimatum ]
Puppet Appearance: ->
Puppet Description: A Hollow Puppet that Akane has worked on for four years straight. The Puppet is Hollow and has the ability to fill itself with Chakra [ up to 300 cP max ] and then expel it through three different means.
The first method of letting out the chakra is to dispel a Rank amount of chakra into its gauntlet that covers its right arm, which would erupt a large sound wave that would increase in ferocity for each rank, only one rank of skill can be used each post, unless stated:
Rank E :: A small sound wave is shot out in front of Timid for a small range [20 ft] and causes temporary deafness and causes endless ringing. Deafness lasts two [2] posts
Rank D :: A small sound wave is shot out in front of Timid and covers a larger amount of area [40 ft], the wave can cause deafness and a minor headache. The headache and deafness lasts three [3] posts
Rank C :: A ripple of the air will show as the sound is shot outwards for [50 ft], this wave is quiet due to the frequency, but once it passes someone it causes severe dizziness for [3] posts.
Rank B :: More like a loud bang, sound will erupt in a cone in front of Timid and a state of deafness and daze to people who are within a [40 ft] radius in front of Timid right arm. The disability and deafness lasts four [4] posts, making Taijutsu and Bukijutsu skills one rank less useful.
The second method is to feed or store chakra then give it to any squadmate of Suoh's choice. Max of [ 80 cP ] for feeding and giving chakra.
The final method of using chakra for Timid is to use it himself. If one of Souh's hearts is put into Timid's chest cavity, the chakra will interact and Suoh can communicate through Timid in a different voice. A long as a heart is in Timid, he does not need any strings attached to him and can walk around areas as long as Suoh is in the same Subforum. Suoh usually uses this method to use Timid as some sort of secretary to his office.
Mechanism Summary:
• Sound Eruptor Gauntlet [ Right Arm ]
• Heart Cavity
• Senbon Launcher [ 20x Ammo ]
• Built in Dako Staff [ Left Arm ]
• Built in Tsuru-Kame Shield [On Back ]
You tempt me with your Fairy Tail puppet! Aside from that, you're applying for a custom jutsu within a custom puppet. >.< Given its effects, I would advise changing the gauntlet to the Chakra Dispersal Gloves, of which can be normally found in Takumi, & wouldn't need a custom jutsu application. Since the gloves are a dual item set, each glove's activation would be a separate mechanism. (just a suggestion)
The others, heart cavity (1st), senbon launcher (2nd), Dako Staff (3rd), and shield (4th), fill the puppet up to its maximum allowance of 4 mechanisms anyways. If you put a heart inside of the puppet, that allows for jutsu to be done anyways, yes? Try applying for the custom jutsu, and then simply have the heart use that jutsu when needed, instead of attaching it to the puppet. |
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Posted: Thu Apr 04, 2013 7:42 am
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Twin Puppets(taking up two puppet slots) One approval thingy.
Character: Samuru Sanmiitai
Link to profile: Last Profile
Puppet Name: Peilli/Pelleg
Puppet Appearance: 
Puppet Description: The puppets are identical in make and creation. The faces are made of a mixture of steel and ceramic, the skin pale with a high blush on the cheeks. Bright blue eyes are painted in extreme detail but each doll only has one eye. The wood is made of white oak and reinforced with a steel frame, joints connected by thick threads inside. Standing at just under 6'0", both puppets are of average male size. They are dressed in identical but slightly altered clothing which includes a long sleeved bolero, open chest and loose, open sided pants. Dark sandals on both feet but with no socks.
Mechanism Summary:
• Peilli:
- -The fingers of Peilli are hollow, concealing knives that slide out of the tips and extend up to 4inches.
- -Contains a gas filled cavities in the chest that can be released through the mouth, flooding the immediate area surrounding Peilli with a paralytic. The gas becomes ineffective up to 3ftaway from Peilli and the paralysis is minor, causing stiffness and slowed reactions for 20minutes(2posts). Must be refilled by hand.
- - Elbows bend back and leather whips burst out, extending up to 15ft, that Peilli can be used to control. Whips are 1per elbow, stored in the upper arm and must be rewound after each use. Can be detached.
- - Mimic: The only chakra ability Peilli posseses. Allows him to take on the exact appearance of his puppeteer, coating the illusion in chakra to 'mimic' the user. Illusion lasts 50minutes(5posts) and Peilli cannot be more then 30ft from the puppeteer.
• Pelleg:
- - Back is hollow with a hidden nunchaku set and tonfa set placed inside. The cover slides down when Pelleg is made to press the back of his hips. Nunchaku are wood, same white oak, and reinforced with steel and the tonfa share a similar design.
- -Long blades are concealed in the calfs of the legs, one on each outer side. Slim slats of wood move in to release the blades that remain attached to Pelleg on the inside.
- -Spikes(1/2inch) can burst out of the side of Pelleg's forearms, 20per arm. The spikes are steel but hollow, with a minuscule hole in the tip, that are filled with a nerve poison that can cause numbness and hemophilia.
- - Transfer: For single use purpose, Pelleg can be transfered from his current position to the area where the puppeteer is, moving faster then most Jounin. For it to work, Pelleg must be within 20ft of the puppeteer and the chakra strings must be attached.
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Posted: Thu Apr 04, 2013 10:00 pm
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Posted: Fri Apr 05, 2013 2:20 pm
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CanoodlingFlibbertyJibbit Twin Puppets(taking up two puppet slots) One approval thingy.
Character: Samuru Sanmiitai
Link to profile: Last Profile
Puppet Name: Peilli/Pelleg
Puppet Appearance:
Puppet Description: The puppets are identical in make and creation. The faces are made of a mixture of steel and ceramic, the skin pale with a high blush on the cheeks. Bright blue eyes are painted in extreme detail but each doll only has one eye. The wood is made of white oak and reinforced with a steel frame, joints connected by thick threads inside. Standing at just under 6'0", both puppets are of average male size. They are dressed in identical but slightly altered clothing which includes a long sleeved bolero, open chest and loose, open sided pants. Dark sandals on both feet but with no socks.
Mechanism Summary:
• Peilli:
- -The fingers of Peilli are hollow, concealing knives that slide out of the tips and extend up to 4inches.
- -Contains two(2) gas filled cavities in the chest that can be released through the mouth, flooding the immediate area surrounding Peilli with a paralytic. The gas becomes ineffective up to 3ftaway from Peilli and the paralysis is minor, causing stiffness and slowed reactions for 20minutes(2posts). Must be refilled by hand.
- - Elbows bend back and leather whips burst out, extending up to 15ft, that Peilli can be used to control. Whips are 1per elbow, stored in the upper arm and must be rewound after each use. Can be detached.
- - Mimic: The only chakra ability Peilli posseses. Allows him to take on the exact appearance of his puppeteer, coating the illusion in chakra to 'mimic' the user. Illusion lasts 50minutes(5posts) and Peilli cannot be more then 30ft from the puppeteer.
- -Detachable limbs allow Peilli to fall apart completely and can be reconstructed if enough time allows.
• Pelleg:
- -Concealed storage in his thighs hide a set of tonfa, one on each side. The tonfa are of the same wood and reinforced with steel.
- - Back is hollow with a hidden nunchaku set into it. The cover slides down when Pelleg is made to press the back of his hips. Nunchaku are wood, same white oak, and reinforced with steel.
- -Long blades are concealed in the calfs of the legs, one on each outer side. Slim slats of wood move in to release the blades that remain attached to Pelleg on the inside.
- -Spikes(1/2inch) can burst out of the side of Pelleg's forearms, 20per arm. The spikes are steel but hollow, with a minuscule hole in the tip, that are filled with a nerve poison that can cause numbness and hemophilia.
- - Transfer: For single use purpose, Pelleg can be transfered from his current position to the area where the puppeteer is, moving faster then most Jounin. For it to work, Pelleg must be within 20ft of the puppeteer and the chakra strings must be attached.
These look great, yes they do! 4 mechanisms per puppet, though. Y_Y If I assume that each arm's same mechanisms are attached to each other, that'll pare down the count on Peilli to 5. If you make the chest container 1 instead of 2, Peilli will be good to go. Is that acceptable?
If we try to pair up the side mechanisms on Pelleg, too, we can pare them down to 6. If you move the Tonfa to one side, that makes it 5. If you put the Tonfa in with the Nunchaku instead (thus making its mechanism more of a container), that will pare it down to 4. Is that acceptable? I'm trying to help ya here! ^_^ |
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Posted: Fri Apr 05, 2013 6:57 pm
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Posted: Fri Apr 05, 2013 6:58 pm
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Posted: Tue May 28, 2013 6:13 am
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Character: Ji-hun Kwon
Link to profile: http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?page=2&t=23550901#353708563
Puppet Name: Shokoui (First Act)
Puppet Appearance: Shokoui is a mysterious puppet, designed as an emblem of fear. Shokoui wears a large black cloak, complete with a deep hood. Shoukoui takes the form of a demi human. On the skull of shokoui, rests a single curved bladed horn. It's sharpened on one side only. The puppet's fingers has noticeable claws about a inch long each. Inside the mouth, along with the flamethrower, are rough jagged teeth crafted from steel with four longer canines.
Puppet Description: Both Arms: The puppet wields a foot long extendable blade in its forearms, ready to spring out at any moment from spring mechanism used to keep it in place. It's blade is serrated on one side for each arm. The blade uses a spring mechanism to shoot out once it's ready, making it versatile. These blades have been reinforced with an extra metal plate for each to compete with well-crafted swords and blades in which could normally snap the extendable blades.
Lower Torso: The good ol' puncture cable still exists inside Shokoui, except the metallic cable is now a bit shorter and a bit thinner to use against enemies. It's length has been cut down to eight meters. The cable is able to pierce solid surfaces such as wood or the ground. To control the course of the cable, Ji-hun must merely insert his own chakra into the cable, which can aid in the direction and speed. To provide a versatile use of the cable, the metal coil can be deployed out the back or the front. However with this unique upgrade, the puppet's durability at the stomach location has been cut down drastically.
Upper Torso/Chest: Inside the upper torso of the puppet is a built in shuriken shooter. The chest opens up with the same interlacing locks similar to all his other puppets to reveal several narrow horizontal slots all across the puppet's chest. The Shuriken are all deployed through these slots in which inside they are spun at a high speed first before being shot out. The spinning of the shuriken makes a loud whirling noise to both guide the weapons and to increase their aerodynamics. The shuriken inside the chest are specially designed for the mechanism with their blades curved in a counter-clockwise direction. Up to twenty shuriken can be shot at once before the mechanism needs to reload a next set. The torso contains up to sixty shuriken, enough for three burst shots or sixty single shot attacks. The drawback of the shuriken shooter takes a second to spin the shuriken to fire. To reload, the back of the torso opens up to insert different kinds of shuriken, bo-shuriken (throwing spikes), or metal discus.
Mouth/Head area: The head has a more demonic appearance showing a single long horn on the forehead, sharpened on it's front side for a bladed headbutt. The teeth had been put in with an extra "decoration" made out of steel with four long canines drenched in red colored ink. The most fearsome weapon has still yet to reside inside the head of Shokoui. Inside resides a set of iron crafted teeth. Yet, this is not the weapon Ji-hun has put in mind as Ji-hun has implanted a flamethrower towards the the back of the mouth. Inside the skull is a steel insulated chamber filled with a flammable substance that's easily caught on fire. The flame thrower is enough to reach up to ten feet away and enough fuel to last with a continuous burst of one minute.
Mechanism Summary:
• Flame Thrower = Mouth
• Blades = Arms *Uncertain if this counts as two*
• Shuriken Shooter = Chest
• Puncture Cable = Stomach
• Metal Teeth = Mouth
• Iron Horn = Forehead
(+3 From Discipline)
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Posted: Sat Jun 29, 2013 8:40 pm
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Reiko Zena
Character: Ji-hun Kwon
Link to profile: http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?page=2&t=23550901#353708563
Puppet Name: Shokoui (First Act)
Puppet Appearance: Shokoui is a mysterious puppet, designed as an emblem of fear. Shokoui wears a large black cloak, complete with a deep hood. Shoukoui takes the form of a demi human. On the skull of shokoui, rests a single curved bladed horn. It's sharpened on one side only. The puppet's fingers has noticeable claws about a inch long each. Inside the mouth, along with the flamethrower, are rough jagged teeth crafted from steel with four longer canines.
Puppet Description: Both Arms: The puppet wields a foot long extendable blade in its forearms, ready to spring out at any moment from spring mechanism used to keep it in place. It's blade is serrated on one side for each arm. The blade uses a spring mechanism to shoot out once it's ready, making it versatile. These blades have been reinforced with an extra metal plate for each to compete with well-crafted swords and blades in which could normally snap the extendable blades.
Lower Torso: The good ol' puncture cable still exists inside Shokoui, except the metallic cable is now a bit shorter and a bit thinner to use against enemies. It's length has been cut down to eight meters. The cable is able to pierce solid surfaces such as wood or the ground. To control the course of the cable, Ji-hun must merely insert his own chakra into the cable, which can aid in the direction and speed. To provide a versatile use of the cable, the metal coil can be deployed out the back or the front. However with this unique upgrade, the puppet's durability at the stomach location has been cut down drastically.
Upper Torso/Chest: Inside the upper torso of the puppet is a built in shuriken shooter. The chest opens up with the same interlacing locks similar to all his other puppets to reveal several narrow horizontal slots all across the puppet's chest. The Shuriken are all deployed through these slots in which inside they are spun at a high speed first before being shot out. The spinning of the shuriken makes a loud whirling noise to both guide the weapons and to increase their aerodynamics. The shuriken inside the chest are specially designed for the mechanism with their blades curved in a counter-clockwise direction. Up to twenty shuriken can be shot at once before the mechanism needs to reload a next set. The torso contains up to sixty shuriken, enough for three burst shots or sixty single shot attacks. The drawback of the shuriken shooter takes a second to spin the shuriken to fire. To reload, the back of the torso opens up to insert different kinds of shuriken, bo-shuriken (throwing spikes), or metal discus.
Mouth/Head area: The head has a more demonic appearance showing a single long horn on the forehead, sharpened on it's front side for a bladed headbutt. The teeth had been put in with an extra "decoration" made out of steel with four long canines drenched in red colored ink. The most fearsome weapon has still yet to reside inside the head of Shokoui. Inside resides a set of iron crafted teeth. Yet, this is not the weapon Ji-hun has put in mind as Ji-hun has implanted a flamethrower towards the the back of the mouth. Inside the skull is a steel insulated chamber filled with a flammable substance that's easily caught on fire. The flame thrower is enough to reach up to ten feet away and enough fuel to last with a continuous burst of one minute.
Mechanism Summary:
• Flame Thrower = Mouth
• Blades = Arms *Uncertain if this counts as two*
• Shuriken Shooter = Chest
• Puncture Cable = Stomach
• Metal Teeth = Mouth
• Iron Horn = Forehead
(+3 From Discipline)
As per the request...
Yes, the blades act as two mechanisms, but the total is still 7 and under, so you're fine. Enjoy~ |
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Posted: Sat Jun 29, 2013 8:42 pm
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Posted: Tue Aug 20, 2013 2:49 am
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Character: Kamiya the most epic awsome of all awsome puppet users.
Link to profile: go find it yourself ^.^ love ya
Puppet Name: Tian Zi
Puppet Appearance: the puppet looks similar to a brutish man wearing only a loin cloth. the head is angular while the arms and legs are much larger than puppets would normally have as it conceals the piston mechanisms within the arms that provide brutish strength. it has white paint all down it's front. the outer layer of the puppet is in fact a tough canvas designed to withstand the riggors of use on a puppet while concealing metal plates underneath that cover large sections of the entire puppet. the back of the puppet does not contain much plating leaving a gap going down where a human spine would normally be. underneath that is simple wood.
Puppet Description: the puppet origionated as a design from a self titled puppet master in the outlying regions of the desert. he'd modeled it after the strongest man in his village. once complete he presented it to the man who then attacked the puppet maker. the man saw puppets as a weak way to fight and were not worthy of use. the puppet maker having barely escaped with his life left the village and traveled to takumi where he met real puppet makers an learned of ways to make his puppet a veritable power house. the origional state of the puppet was simply containing the pistons and the titanium claws as the origional puppet maker after his defeat wanted to prove that puppets could match man with physical power. without the ability to actually control puppets the man sold off his puppet to a willing buyer from sunagakure. once in suna the buyer put up the puppet on display as a marvel in puppet physique. it was during this time that Kamiya began to tinker with it. unknown to the puppet seller Kamiya was improving upon the puppet piece by piece adding more and more mechanisms until he felt it was complete. at that point Kamiya approached the man asking if he could play with it. the man said no as Kamiya was simply a genin and the word of a genin is not that great. Kamiya was so infuriated by this that he built up a small fortune to pay for the puppet he'd put time into making. it's biggest weakness is along it's back as Kamiya could never figure out how to armor along the spine or heals where he'd put an explosive tag powered propulsion system to make the puppet dash forwards at rediculous speeds.
the piston mechanisms are designed in such a way as to be improved by the use of additional chakra outside of the 5 chakra for activating mechanisms. by pouring an ammount of chakra appropriate for Kamiya's rank or less the pistons will convey that level of power to the attack as if it was a taijutsu attack using that rank of stamina. genin=5 (E ranked technique level), chunin=10 (D ranked technique), jonin= 15 (C rank), konin=25 (B rank), sanin= 40 (A rank).
due to the weight of the puppet it does not possess the ability to raise itself off the ground with certain exceptions. these include the dash thruster system which could launch it into the air or the leg pistons which can allow it to jump slightly. the leg pistons also allow for it to dodge attacks at a much higher speed than normal through side stepping. this will only allow short changes in it's positioning but can be enough to avoid destruction.
Mechanism Summary: 8 total mechanisms (base 4 +4 from class and personal attributes)
• piston and shocks mechnaisms in arms [not twinlinked, both right and left arms] - can act to both improve offence but also can be used defencively to reduce physical damage taken.
• titanium claws on the fingers. [as these would not actually need to be activated to be on the hands, i dont know if they count. attacking with them would be similar to just performing a simple attack which in the rules is listed as not needing an activation.]
• leg pistons [twin linked, designed for quick manouvering.]
• shotgun style ball bearing launcher in mouth. [contains the force of a simple explosive tag with a range of 5'. any further and the ball bearings lose their force and will only cause some bruising.]
• 1 off explosive tag based dash thruster system. [allows for up to 20' dash at high speeds when starting on the ground and 30' when starting in the air, still allowing for sight of the puppet but reaching near shunshin speeds. this requires an extra 10 chakra due to the number of explosive tags plus an extra 5 to infuse the blasting areas with chakra to protect against damage.]
•chakra infused metal plates. [can put in chakra to protect from chakra based attacks. otherwise is still good metal plating]
• flash grenade in upper chest around the collar bone. [flash is directed forwards only. protected if behind puppet.]
• twinlinked kunai launchers [one on each wrist, only if claws dont count as mechanism]
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Posted: Tue Aug 20, 2013 12:37 pm
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dreadno
Character: Kamiya the most epic awsome of all awsome puppet users.
Link to profile: go find it yourself ^.^ love ya
Puppet Name: Tian Zi
Puppet Appearance: the puppet looks similar to a brutish man wearing only a loin cloth. the head is angular while the arms and legs are much larger than puppets would normally have as it conceals the piston mechanisms within the arms that provide brutish strength. it has white paint all down it's front. the outer layer of the puppet is in fact a tough canvas designed to withstand the riggors of use on a puppet while concealing metal plates underneath that cover large sections of the entire puppet. the back of the puppet does not contain much plating leaving a gap going down where a human spine would normally be. underneath that is simple wood.
Puppet Description: the puppet origionated as a design from a self titled puppet master in the outlying regions of the desert. he'd modeled it after the strongest man in his village. once complete he presented it to the man who then attacked the puppet maker. the man saw puppets as a weak way to fight and were not worthy of use. the puppet maker having barely escaped with his life left the village and traveled to takumi where he met real puppet makers an learned of ways to make his puppet a veritable power house. the origional state of the puppet was simply containing the pistons and the titanium claws as the origional puppet maker after his defeat wanted to prove that puppets could match man with physical power. without the ability to actually control puppets the man sold off his puppet to a willing buyer from sunagakure. once in suna the buyer put up the puppet on display as a marvel in puppet physique. it was during this time that Kamiya began to tinker with it. unknown to the puppet seller Kamiya was improving upon the puppet piece by piece adding more and more mechanisms until he felt it was complete. at that point Kamiya approached the man asking if he could play with it. the man said no as Kamiya was simply a genin and the word of a genin is not that great. Kamiya was so infuriated by this that he built up a small fortune to pay for the puppet he'd put time into making. it's biggest weakness is along it's back as Kamiya could never figure out how to armor along the spine or heals where he'd put an explosive tag powered propulsion system to make the puppet dash forwards at rediculous speeds.
the piston mechanisms are designed in such a way as to be improved by the use of additional chakra outside of the 5 chakra for activating mechanisms. by pouring an ammount of chakra appropriate for Kamiya's rank or less the pistons will convey that level of power to the attack as if it was a taijutsu attack using that rank of stamina. genin=5 (E ranked technique level), chunin=10 (D ranked technique), jonin= 15 (C rank), konin=25 (B rank), sanin= 40 (A rank).
due to the weight of the puppet it does not possess the ability to raise itself off the ground with certain exceptions. these include the dash thruster system which could launch it into the air or the leg pistons which can allow it to jump slightly. the leg pistons also allow for it to dodge attacks at a much higher speed than normal through side stepping. this will only allow short changes in it's positioning but can be enough to avoid destruction.
Mechanism Summary: 8 total mechanisms (base 4 +4 from class and personal attributes)
• piston and shocks mechnaisms in arms [not twinlinked, both right and left arms] - can act to both improve offence but also can be used defencively to reduce physical damage taken.
• titanium claws on the fingers. [as these would not actually need to be activated to be on the hands, i dont know if they count. attacking with them would be similar to just performing a simple attack which in the rules is listed as not needing an activation.]
• leg pistons [twin linked, designed for quick manouvering.]
• shotgun style ball bearing launcher in mouth. [contains the force of a simple explosive tag with a range of 5'. any further and the ball bearings lose their force and will only cause some bruising.]
• 1 off explosive tag based dash thruster system. [allows for up to 20' dash at high speeds when starting on the ground and 30' when starting in the air, still allowing for sight of the puppet but reaching near shunshin speeds. this requires an extra 10 chakra due to the number of explosive tags plus an extra 5 to infuse the blasting areas with chakra to protect against damage.]
•chakra infused metal plates. [can put in chakra to protect from chakra based attacks. otherwise is still good metal plating]
• flash grenade in upper chest around the collar bone. [flash is directed forwards only. protected if behind puppet.]
• twinlinked kunai launchers [one on each wrist, only if claws dont count as mechanism]
The count on mechanisms is fine. The only real issue that I have belongs to the chakra infused metal plates, which sound like they'll protect it from anything. Where are these plates at, and what defense do they specifically do? |
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Posted: Tue Aug 20, 2013 2:50 pm
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AandOE dreadno
Character: Kamiya the most epic awsome of all awsome puppet users.
Link to profile: go find it yourself ^.^ love ya
Puppet Name: Tian Zi
Puppet Appearance: the puppet looks similar to a brutish man wearing only a loin cloth. the head is angular while the arms and legs are much larger than puppets would normally have as it conceals the piston mechanisms within the arms that provide brutish strength. it has white paint all down it's front. the outer layer of the puppet is in fact a tough canvas designed to withstand the riggors of use on a puppet while concealing metal plates underneath that cover large sections of the entire puppet. the back of the puppet does not contain much plating leaving a gap going down where a human spine would normally be. underneath that is simple wood.
Puppet Description: the puppet origionated as a design from a self titled puppet master in the outlying regions of the desert. he'd modeled it after the strongest man in his village. once complete he presented it to the man who then attacked the puppet maker. the man saw puppets as a weak way to fight and were not worthy of use. the puppet maker having barely escaped with his life left the village and traveled to takumi where he met real puppet makers an learned of ways to make his puppet a veritable power house. the origional state of the puppet was simply containing the pistons and the titanium claws as the origional puppet maker after his defeat wanted to prove that puppets could match man with physical power. without the ability to actually control puppets the man sold off his puppet to a willing buyer from sunagakure. once in suna the buyer put up the puppet on display as a marvel in puppet physique. it was during this time that Kamiya began to tinker with it. unknown to the puppet seller Kamiya was improving upon the puppet piece by piece adding more and more mechanisms until he felt it was complete. at that point Kamiya approached the man asking if he could play with it. the man said no as Kamiya was simply a genin and the word of a genin is not that great. Kamiya was so infuriated by this that he built up a small fortune to pay for the puppet he'd put time into making. it's biggest weakness is along it's back as Kamiya could never figure out how to armor along the spine or heals where he'd put an explosive tag powered propulsion system to make the puppet dash forwards at rediculous speeds.
the piston mechanisms are designed in such a way as to be improved by the use of additional chakra outside of the 5 chakra for activating mechanisms. by pouring an ammount of chakra appropriate for Kamiya's rank or less the pistons will convey that level of power to the attack as if it was a taijutsu attack using that rank of stamina. genin=5 (E ranked technique level), chunin=10 (D ranked technique), jonin= 15 (C rank), konin=25 (B rank), sanin= 40 (A rank).
due to the weight of the puppet it does not possess the ability to raise itself off the ground with certain exceptions. these include the dash thruster system which could launch it into the air or the leg pistons which can allow it to jump slightly. the leg pistons also allow for it to dodge attacks at a much higher speed than normal through side stepping. this will only allow short changes in it's positioning but can be enough to avoid destruction.
Mechanism Summary: 8 total mechanisms (base 4 +4 from class and personal attributes)
• piston and shocks mechnaisms in arms [not twinlinked, both right and left arms] - can act to both improve offence but also can be used defencively to reduce physical damage taken.
• titanium claws on the fingers. [as these would not actually need to be activated to be on the hands, i dont know if they count. attacking with them would be similar to just performing a simple attack which in the rules is listed as not needing an activation.]
• leg pistons [twin linked, designed for quick manouvering.]
• shotgun style ball bearing launcher in mouth. [contains the force of a simple explosive tag with a range of 5'. any further and the ball bearings lose their force and will only cause some bruising.]
• 1 off explosive tag based dash thruster system. [allows for up to 20' dash at high speeds when starting on the ground and 30' when starting in the air, still allowing for sight of the puppet but reaching near shunshin speeds. this requires an extra 10 chakra due to the number of explosive tags plus an extra 5 to infuse the blasting areas with chakra to protect against damage.]
•chakra infused metal plates. [can put in chakra to protect from chakra based attacks. otherwise is still good metal plating. must put in an ammount of chakra into the plating to protect against attacks of that rank or lower. lasts for 2 attacks. plates are located along the entirety of the chest and abdomen as well as the neck and arms. joints and along the "spine" are not protected. must be manually reloaded and set by Kamiya to be used again.]
• flash grenade in upper chest around the collar bone. [flash is directed forwards only. protected if behind puppet.]
• twinlinked kunai launchers [one on each wrist, only if claws dont count as mechanism]
is that more what you were looking for? and so... do the claws get counted as mechanism? i am sorry. i'm reading this after just having gotten up as i dont have much time today to be on here so i may not be properly understanding. |
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