Discorded - S

[Fenrir Shade]

PF heads into the residential area of Ponyville, knocking ponies over, insulting them, and even stealing candy from a fillie. Suddenly Trey gallops up, "Hey PF! Are you ready to venture into the Ursa Major Cave?"

"Like I ventured into your mother's cave last night?" shouts Path Finder, laughing. Trey, being far too young to understand, grows confused, "My mother's what?"

"Oh, sorry, let me dumb it down for you, I took my-" another convenient carriage passes, except it is more of a train. After a minute and a half, the wagon train ends and it reveals Trey's look of disgust and disbelief. "-And that is what I did to your mother you ignorant little-" Wagon "-Off!"

Trey begins to cry worse than he ever had before, his life effectively ruined by his childhood hero.

'NO!! You! How dare you make me talk to my friend that way?! You will pay for this! I swear!'
'Ah can it oldie, he's gone and you'll never see him again.'
'Never... See him... Again...?'

PF's coat turns grey, and all of his will of existence fades away. He was no longer the stallion he used to be, just a cold, empty husk.

((I will add color and italics later. It is far too hard to do on a phone.))  

[The Jolly Victini]

~Chapter 4 - Discord~

 

[The Jolly Victini]

((Now, we bring the discorded ponies to one place.))

Bonfire stormed through Ponyville. He was still angry about the dumb-buck of a mare that punched him while he was making a move. He didn't have anywhere specific to go, but he was going to try the Pink pony again at the candy place.  

[Fenrir Shade]

PF canters by and slams his two hind hooves against Bonfire's muzzle, sending him sprawling. "I told you I didn't want to see your ugly mug again!"  

[The Jolly Victini]

Bonfire got back up and gave a wry grin. "Heh, well this mug's still sexy enough to get some flank, oldie!" Bonfire remarked.  

[Fenrir Shade]

"Well atleast I don't kiss it." he says, walking away, leaving a pungent cloud behind. He knocks over an entire stand, and continues hoofing along.  

[WritingWithLove]

Autha walked arrogently amongst the other ponies. She had taken a liking to a much more sharpened and old-fashioned tongue, so she pushed the others as she went past and cried haughtily, "Thou mangled dismal-dreaming miscreants! Wilt thee not stand within my path?!"  

[The Jolly Victini]

Bonfire whipped Autha's flank with his tail. "Hey there, sweet flank! Back for another chance with me?"  

[WritingWithLove]

She stared at him with disgust. "Wilt thee kindly mind thine own business, thou odiferous hasty-witted strumpet!?" She looked him over and smiled as she rolled her eyes. "You are as a candle, the better burnt out."  

[The Jolly Victini]

A strange laugh emanated from nowhere and the three ponies were taken to a white void where a certain Draconeqqus was, laughing. "Oh, you ponies are a riot! Hahahahaha!"  

[Fenrir Shade]

PF kicks the draconeqqus in the face with all of his force, "Oy! What do you think you're doing taking me here?! I just wanted to make that fillie cry, but no! You ruined it!" He kicks him again.  

[WritingWithLove]

Autha rolled her eyes again and glared at the mysterious new "friend."
"What cause do we have to be here? Answer me! Come, you tedious fool. To the purpose!"  

[The Jolly Victini]

"I'm sorry, but you ponies are too funny! Ahahaha!" Discord said, somehow in a different location. The Discord Path Finder had kicked was a fake. "Even trapped in stone, there's still chaos that I've left behind, and you three fell for it! HAhahahahaha!" Discord pointed a mocking finger at Bonfire. "I've turned the idiotic firepony with the heart of gold into a common pervert," his finger then moved to Autha. "I've turned the meek bookworm into a brute," his finger then finally fell on Path Finder. "and I've turned the hopeless adventurer into an imbecilic thug!" Discord flew up into the air and threw some confetti. "My best work yet!"

Bonfire, inside, was hurt deeply by how he referred to him and the others. He wanted to shout at him, but no words came out. He tried so much harder, until finally, the Grey Bonfire spoke, but this one wasn't dark and mean. It was pure and real. "...Stop picki... us! It doesn... you do, our... dship is mor... than any cha... ould ever conjure!" His voice was shaky, only parts of his speech actually made it through. Hopefully, he though, this would convince the others that Discord didn't have full control over him.  

[WritingWithLove]

The Autha that had been locked away felt so weak. She was tired of hurting others. It was one thing to be outgoing, but another thing entirely to be a bully. "He... is... r-ri-"
Suddenly, her other form took over once more. She cackled haughtily and hissed, "Silence, you ninny! I am having far to grand a time to give up to the likes of thee so easily!" She looked over to Bonfire and winked flirtatiously.