☆ Custom Weapons

[Mana_ecl Zetsuya]

Shinigami Abarai

In terms of your sword, it appears fine over all. If it were me, I'd think about making its cutting capabilities variable, through chakra pumped into it. Ha ha.

As for your techniques, you've got to put those in the custom jutsu section.

Lanfaer

Suddenly, I'm struck with something. For each? Sorry you need one more little amendment. For excessive gain and growth, due to sizes already gargantuan, I'd like to see a note which makes it so they can only grow twice consecutively.

The size of that wrecking ball after 75 chakra would be ridiculous.  

[Shinigami Abarai]

Shinigami Abarai

Character: Uinsean Nara.
Link to profile: Profile.

Weapon Name: Greased Lightning. (Based on the old phrase, not those bad movies. lol)
Weapon Type: Katana.

Weapon Height: 28 in.
Weapon Weight: 0.5 lb.

Description: A sword crafted from a special metal that can only be found on a single continent. This metal is extremely lightweight, and can channel the natural raiton chakra found in some shinobi. This metal can only be found in one area, and is dangerous to retrieve. This sword is the only known weapon crafted from the metal, and is most likely to remain that way. Uinsean's father retrieved a small quantity of it before he died, and his mother recently gave it to him, as his father's will stated. As well as a note, explaining to Uinsean what to do with it, and what exactly it was. One more thing had been left in the will, a scroll containing some ideas for raiton manipulation through a crafted weapon.

Ability Summary:
• The sword is extremely light in weight due to the material.
• Emits maintained electricity throughout the blade for [5] Chakra per post.
• The blade, when charged with electricity, has increased cutting power.
• Additionally, the blade can be charged with chakra in varying degrees to increase it's cutting power. [10-30] Chakra in increments of 5 will enhance the cutting power accordingly.

Alright, I've given it a tweak. Is this still acceptable?  

[Mana_ecl Zetsuya]

Shinigami Abarai

That is acceptable! Remember, you can't get the weapon until you're a chuunin and it's not like it's sitting in your room! Ha ha.
Go rank up! Go find your sword!  

[Shinigami Abarai]

Mana_ecl Zetsuya

Shinigami Abarai

That is acceptable! Remember, you can't get the weapon until you're a chuunin and it's not like it's sitting in your room! Ha ha.
Go rank up! Go find your sword!

I'm well aware, I just wanted to get the idea ran through, and done with since I'm up for a chance to be chunin. lol Thank you for your time.  

[Lanfaer]

Mana_ecl Zetsuya

Shinigami Abarai

In terms of your sword, it appears fine over all. If it were me, I'd think about making its cutting capabilities variable, through chakra pumped into it. Ha ha.

As for your techniques, you've got to put those in the custom jutsu section.

Lanfaer

Suddenly, I'm struck with something. For each? Sorry you need one more little amendment. For excessive gain and growth, due to sizes already gargantuan, I'd like to see a note which makes it so they can only grow twice consecutively.

The size of that wrecking ball after 75 chakra would be ridiculous.

So it only allows me to grow twice? Or only twice in one use? Cause if it was only at once, then ti would require a post cooldown before I am able to grow again. But if you're saying in general, then...damn xD There goes the "wrestling a Bijuu" idea I had.

 

[Mana_ecl Zetsuya]

Lanfaer

So it only allows me to grow twice? Or only twice in one use? Cause if it was only at once, then ti would require a post cooldown before I am able to grow again. But if you're saying in general, then...damn xD There goes the "wrestling a Bijuu" idea I had.

You almost had me, you weasel. I gotta be more careful when reading your stuff from now on.

You'd be able to grow twice. For that particular use of growth. When you go back down to your normal size, then I'd say you need a cool down there (maybe six posts or so), but you'd have the capability to try the method again.  

[Lanfaer]

Lanfaer

Lanfaer

Character: Wanryoku
Link to profile:

Weapon Name: Zangai ("Wreckage")
Weapon Type: Wreckingball

Weapon Height: 3,000" long, 42" diameter
Weapon Weight: *5,000 lbs

Description: The wreckingball known as Zangai was once a living human who was the traveling companion, and brother, to Wanryoku. The man was not known for his intelligence, but his kind heart and blunt personality made him popular with pretty much everyone he met. However, on his final mission as a human during the equivalent of the Chuunin Exams in his lands with Wanryoku, the two came upon a glade where one legion fought against another, and one side was losing. This side was made up of children from six different squads, each having this be their first event, and their opponents were experienced warriors who had tried, and failed, many times to pass. Because of this, the younger warriors were being routed. Wanryoku hesitated for but a moment, but it was a moment far too long for Zangai. The large man charged into battle to defend the younger group, and was quickly aided by Wanryoku.

To say the least, the opposing forces were decimated.

However, in the end, Zangai died. In return for what had been done, one of the younger members, a shaman in her tribe, bound the brother's soul into a hunk of iron that oddly attracted other iron, other objects in the vicinity, forging itself into the iron ball it is now. This was bestowed unto Wanryoku as a thank you gift, and much to his surprise the ball possessed Zangai's mind, except now only his emotions, his feelings, came through to him whenever they were near, and never more would his brother speak. Because of his personality, abilities befitting his personality and jutsu specialty came with the weapon form that he now possessed. It was this that made Wanryoku take up the wreckingball as a weapon, and it has been his weapon for the last five years.

Ability Summary:
• Excessive Gain ~ This is a basic technique, one that requires small amounts of chakra to activate and yet which may well drain one of chakra from excessive use. For each [25] chakra points sacrificed, the weapon will increase (in diamater) 1.5x, (in weight) 2x, and (in length), 2.1x. This does not negate any issues with wielding the device, for one must be of the correct strength, size, and mass to wield such a device for this to take effect. Should the weapon leave the hand of its user, it will revert back to its original shape and more chakra must be used to increase its statistics again. Note, this can only increase the ball twice in size before the limit is reached.

• Excessive Growth ~ This ability is quite different than the previous power, for instead of increasing the size of the weapon it increases the size of the user. For each [40] points of chakra used, the user may increase their physical size up to 1.5x the original base. This also increases one's physical strength and vitality, but agility is arguably reduced due to the restriction of movement for something that size. If the weapon leaves the hand of Wanryoku, he will immediately be reduced to his original size, and all the damage that was inflicted upon him in his larger forms will be multiplied by a factor matching the number of times his physical body has increased. This particular ability lasts all of ten posts, counting only Wanryoku's posts.
**Note** ~~> Should Wanryoku voluntarily return to his original size, no damage will be sustained. Note, this can only increase Wanryoku's size twice before the limit is reached.

• Empathy ~ Zangai has an intelligence, which is purely for role play purposes and will in no way effect battle unless the effects of feeling his brother's emotions affects how Wanryoku may act. This ability is permanently active, and cannot be silenced. The emotions can be felt by Wanryoku as long as he is within a fifty mile radius of the weapon.

• Recharge ~ This is a very situation-based ability. It will only work should Wanryoku discharge one of the above abilities, or rather, disengage the abilites, of his own free will. [10] Chakra Points will be returned to the chakra pool for each successive use of the above abilities.

**note**
All abilities take 6 posts to learn.

Fixed

Fixed again! D:<

Damned you, Mana! Quit foiling my dreams, you p***k! >.> *grumbles*

 

[lazyactor]

Character: Aki takigure
Link to profile: profile

Weapon Name: Akio
Weapon Type: Armor

Weapon Height: full body
Weapon Weight: 30 pounds

Description:an living weapon more of an armor than a weapon. tendril treaders do not have an exoskeleton. this weapon slash armor would be Aki's bones in a way. it comes with 15 hidden compartments for his hearts to be stored and protected in steel balls the same size as his hearts. the compartments open and close at his will. they have to be open for him to be able to gather there elements chakra and use said element.each compartment has a cool down once there opened or closed. addinally it also acts as a resistance barrier that prevents his body from being cut away. limbs can't be cut away easily. tendril threaders lose there limbs easily but with this there way harder to be severed. each joint is detachable but once done they have a cool down for the exoskeleton to be able to reattach them. the chest cavity is more of a trap than any thing else . if something were to pierced it the exoskeleton would either pierced or wrap around it holding it firmly. there is a heart compartment in each major bone. one in the upper leg and lower. another in the lower and upper arms. two in the head and five in the chest cavity. these are just the exoskeletons basic properties. it makes its own chakra and makes it where any bloodline based jutsu only uses half the required chakra. E ranks are refunded back to the user. along with that it also assists in repairing Aki's body mid combat. light damage is restitched in 2 posts. heavy cuts 4 posts and complete limb stripping of tendrils is repaired in 10. the armor has its own mind and can advise Aki in his life helping him get out of C rank or lower genjutu's
Ability Summary:.
• compartments in the body two post cool down for opening or closing them.
• joint detachments. 2 post cool down to reattach.
• bloodline based jutsu's only require half chakra normally needed and E ranks are refunded.
•healing ability that repairs light damage in 2 post deep damage in 4 posts and in the event tendrils are burned or striped away they grow back in ten posts.
• structure and compartments are like steel not unbreakable but steel like.
• armor speaks and helps Aki escape C rank and lower genjutsu's.  

[Anonymous_Alcoholic]

Character: Takeo Satoshi.
Link to profile: Merr

Weapon Name: Takeos' Special Brand of Death.
Weapon Type: Hand-rolled cigarette.

Weapon Height: 2.3"
Weapon Weight: 1.2-1.3 grams.

Description:

History: One day, Takeo was visiting the Whirlpool Country and came upon several purple-and-green shaded plants, a wonder to behold to the fresh-faced Chuunin. He had to have them, and being a child and rather stupid, thought they would be great smoked. So he bought a series of red-and-black rolling papers from a travelling merchant, because they were so odd and rare and Takeo loved colors, he had to have them. They were reputed to render any toxic plant safe enough to eat, as long as they were boiled for five days and nights along with the plant, and only on a full moon, which Takeo didn't believe for a second. He simply bought them up because they looked awesome. So when he got back to Kumo, he rolled up, lit up, and found himself in the hospital three days later, having fallen out of his apartment window while sleep-walking and nearly dead, but feeling pretty goddamn awesome. He was informed that he had found an extremely rare type of herb, Noushi, also know as one of the deadliest plants know to the shinobi world. Takeo, in his foolishness and ego, spent the next year and a half searching for enough seed to grow his own highly-deadly herb, always managing to find enough to smoke until he could get his hands on the next plant. A year later and Takeo found himself with enough seeds to plant his own garden of death, all under the nose of the Raikage, or only as long as his new house never catches on fire.

Now, he smokes them because it's cool and feels great, and if he happened to breath in your face, you would die.

Abilities:

Ability Summary:
• Secret Stash: Takeo can carry fifty special cigarettes at one time.
• Smoke Jutsu: Takeo has, through hard work and curiosity, perfected his own kind of jutsu, smoke-based and highly toxic. He needs his cigarettes for that, though.
• Completely lethal.
• Completely inconspicuous.
• Stylish.
• Death: The Plant: Known as Noushi, or Brain-Death, the herb in these cigarettes keep oxygen from getting to the brain as well as several other bad things like paralysis, expeditious necrosis of cerebral neurons, swelling of the esophagus, and diarrhea rather quickly, as even the most minute does is capable of killing even the hardiest wo/man. Takeo is only alive right now because he was born with a special immunity. [can be absorbed through inhalation]
• Initial symptoms are intense coughing fits and difficulty breathing [Within one-post of inhalation]
• Diarrhea and increased difficulty breathing - brain beginning to show adverse signs, coughing intesity increased [ Two Posts ]
• Complete Numbness - violent coughs[ Three Posts ]
• Extremely slowed reaction-time, breathing has become a battle, oxygen supply to brain starting to show signs of being stymied [ Four Posts ]
• Paralysis and swelled esophagus - Involuntary coughing fits [ Five Posts]
• Last-Chance Stage: Brain shows sign of recovery, esophagus de-swells, coughing dies down, despite paralysis signs are nominal [ Six Posts ]
• Coma - Oxygen no longer getting to the brain, cerebral neurons decayed, severe brain-damage and on top of all that, explosive diarrhea - the 'Think you Prayers' stage[ Seven Posts ]
• Brain-Death through complete necrosis of cerebral neurons, brain irreparably damaged by oxygen deprivation - You are now deader than dead [Eight Posts]

• Growing and Drying: Takeo owns his own home, and therefore, his own little garden where he grows the Noushi plant. It takes a one-week RL time period to grow the plant from seed to, well, fully-grown plant and a one-day RL period to dry the leaves.


• Special Note: Can be defeated with A-level Eiseijutsu, if caught within five posts. [Because once you're paralysed, how you gonna do them handseals boy?] If not effected, can heal others within seven posts. [Post seven is when brain damage has reached, well, severe damage status.]

 

[Mana_ecl Zetsuya]

Lanfaer

Make certain you have the note you've got on the ball's expansion skill on the body growth as well, where you may only use it twice in succession. Then, you're approved.

drizzit1121

Denied.
Genjutsu notification, possibly. But escape? I think not.
Bloodline skill reduction by half? And refunds? You either get a chakra dock, or you get a refund. Not both.
Regeneration without cost is not acceptable.
You need to clarify what exactly goes down with the joint detachment and same with the compartments.

Anonymous_Alcoholic

Looking good!  

[lazyactor]

Character: Aki takigure
Link to profile: profile

Weapon Name: Akio
Weapon Type: Armor

Weapon Height: full body
Weapon Weight: 30 pounds

Description:an living weapon more of an armor than a weapon. tendril threaders do not have an exoskeleton. this weapon slash armor would be Aki's bones in a way. it comes with 15 hidden compartments for his hearts to be stored and protected in steel balls the same size as his hearts. the compartments open and close at his will. they have to be open for him to be able to gather there elements chakra and use said element.each compartment has a cool down once there opened or closed.Aki simply hides the hearts of his choosing in them to protect them better from damage. additionally it also acts as a resistance barrier that prevents his body from being cut away. limbs can't be cut away easily. tendril threaders lose there limbs easily but with this there way harder to be severed. each joint is detachable but once done they have a cool down for the exoskeleton to be able to reattach them.basically all Aki does is use a common bloodline jutsu where he detaches his limbs and the armor breaks away with the limb as if it was never there. the only draw back is the wait to reattach it back. the chest cavity is more of a trap than any thing else . if something were to pierced it the exoskeleton would either pierced or wrap around it holding it firmly. there is a heart compartment in each major bone. one in the upper leg and lower. another in the lower and upper arms. two in the head and five in the chest cavity. these are just the exoskeletons basic properties. it makes its own chakra and makes it where any bloodline based jutsu only uses half the required chakra. E ranks are refunded back to the user. along with that it also assists in repairing Aki's body mid combat. light damage is restitched in 2 posts. heavy cuts 4 posts and complete limb stripping of tendrils is repaired in 10.all though this ability takes ten chakra a post of healing. the armor has its own mind and can advise Aki in his life helping him know when his is under genjutsu.
Ability Summary:.
• compartments in the body two post cool down for opening or closing them. element of that heart can not be used while the compartment is sealed.
• joint detachments. 2 post cool down to reattach.
• bloodline based jutsu's only require half chakra normally needed.
•healing ability that repairs light damage in 2 post deep damage in 4 posts and in the event tendrils are burned or striped away they grow back in ten posts. this ability would 15 chakra a post of healing to do.
• structure and compartments are like steel not unbreakable but steel like.
• armor speaks and helps Aki know when he is in a genjutsu.  

[Yo-ko]

Character: Sebastian Crane
Link to profile: http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?t=21957707

Weapon Name: Deaths all consuming
Weapon Type: Gladuis/Scythe

Weapon Height: 26 inches/ 6foot (blade 3 feet)
Weapon Weight: 4 pounds/ 10pounds

Description: Deaths all consuming was created by a group of Kiri trying to rival the seven swordsman. Were the seven swordsman usually met on the battle field, these assassins these "Death dealers" would deal their trade in the silent of night, in ways no one would ever consider possible. To do this, they needed a weapon that was concealable, but also to take out large groups in a single swipe if needed. Thus Deaths all consuming was crafted. Its original, unreleased form is a gladius made of a strong, light, yet durable metal that would allow for knife like actions but give the range similar to a sword. When needed, it can be released into the version of a silver scythe with a serrated blade made for cutting and tearing the enemy...so they are never the same again.

The released scythe has a few perks, being bigger and less hidden then the gladius form. When thrown, the blade can be recalled at will, returning on the same or similar trajectory that it was released at. Yet this is not the most powerful perk of the blade. Being gifted and made directly under the reflective full Moon, blessed the ability to reflect all on it giving it a form of active camoflauge when thrown or held. After any impact however, the camo is undone and needs to be set again.

Ability Summary:
• Has 2 forms: Gladius and Scythe. Are changed at cost of 5 chakra
• Scythe has 2 extra perks, the ability to be recalled at the cost of 5 chakra and hav active camo at cost of 20 (10?) chakra
 

[Grand Chevalier Haji]

Character: Noctis Lucis Shinsetsu
Link to profile: Profile

Weapon Name: Retsukaze
Weapon Type: Black Katana

Weapon Height: 65 cm
Weapon Weight: 3 lbs

Description: The sword has the ability to store chakra. Which it uses to mix the Chakra elements of the user into an attack usually a wave of elemental chakra. For Noctis it mixes his Wind and Snow Chakra that sends of waves of wind chakra infused with the cold which does blunt damage and numbs the pain in the area where the victim is hit. Making them think they were dealt no damage. How much Chakra can be stored in the sword depends on the user's rank. Chakra can be reabsorbed if the user wishes.

Ability Summary:
•Store Chakra for attacks
Genin- 50 Chakra
Chuunin-70 Chakra
Jounin-90 Chakra
Anbu/Oinin-120 Chakra
Kage-150 Chakra
Sannin-200 Chakra
•Unleash wave of element attacks fused together.

 

[Mana_ecl Zetsuya]

Drizzit1121

Well, just be sure to note rather than half chakra, bloodline techniques are one rank less in cost (same thing, just sounds a lot less worry some).

Yo-Ko

I'm gonna have to say nay on the scythe reclamation skill, unless you give me a really good reason as to how it works, and why it would make sense.
As for your camo, I want a better description as to how good this camo is. Probable flaws in it. Twenty chakra won't fly for perfect camo, either.

Grand Chevalier Haji

Mmm... I don't believe I can condone elemental chakra mixing, really, as you're getting into territory that heads into advanced chakra.  

[Grand Chevalier Haji]

Mana_ecl Zetsuya

And this is bad why >.>?

and does anyone else notice something messed up with the page?