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AandOE

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PostPosted: Sat May 30, 2015 12:54 pm
AD Reaper Elyse


Character: Miko Tengoku
Link to profile: Profile

Puppet Name: Kounetsubyou [Yellow Fever]
Puppet Appearance: Yellow Fever is a 5’7 ft moderate built figure, that to some may seem like a normal man with a mask on. The Mask it wears is lightly skeletal and birdlike denoting some resemblance to an Anbu mask with no markings, but it’s lower jaw being a gasmask also defeats that deceptive angle to those savvy enough to know the difference. This figure is dressed like a tattered mercenary or possibly a weathered hobo. Beyond it’s appearance, the clothing are loose and baggy. Underneath its strapped tarp clock is the mark of Miko’s village. Visibly on its person are holsters and places to place weapons or scrolls if the “ninja” so choose to add them to their person. This would be the other slight assumption in appearance that might assume this figure to be a mercenary, or ex shinobi soldier.

Puppet Description:
Kounetsubyou is a Puppet once used by Miko’s father that he developed with the help of his father. The way of the shinobi didn’t quite work out for him, so as time wore one and Miko came to inherit the aspirations of her grandfather she used her own prodigious skills with puppets to further develop Kounetsubyou. Made of a titanium allow frame most of the other body is wooden with a silicone skin layer providing a mannequin base for the puppet. The joints and mobility is much loser and are more akin to that of a gymnast, though what restrictions in motion are to help in the illusion of it being human. Other than the frame the mechanisms of the puppet are built out of a chakra molded alloy or conventional materials. The Right arm is a senbon launcher; the left leg holds a whip like tether that the puppeteer had complete control over. The facemask is gasmask that is creates smokescreens. The puppet wears a charka sensing Jammer that acts by forming a cloud of chakra that acts to reflect or hamper the efforts of chakra sensing abilities. Rapped over it’s person for the most part are tattered clothing with holsters for ninja armament. Hidden under the black half of its cloak is a chained sickle. The yellow striped half is made of chakra infused threads that react to chakra feed into it by getting bigger and the threads create a powerful defensive material.

Mechanism Summary:

• Right-arm has a poison senbon needle launcher which fires form the palm. Stocked with 200 senbon needles. Poison is an anti-coagulant that causes sudden symptoms of the flu (shakes, fever, rigid breathing, etc.) for two [2] posts.

• Yellow Fevers Gasmask works in the reverse releasing a yellow smoke that hides the puppet and makes it hard to even see your hand in front of your face. This smoke is not lethal but the smoke is held in a one time re-loadable (trough Jutsu) canister of mild tear gas. This smoke screen can be held for ten [10] post nonstop. The cloud coverage is twenty [20] cubic feet, when cut off mist last for two [2] posts before dissipating..

• The skeletal frame of Yellow Fever has a titanium mechanical air-pressure based hydraulic system that makes it movements and attacks more powerful in short order as well and cushioning/quieting its motions when not pressing a offensive with boosted actions. It does this by building air pressure in the joints and then releasing it when the pressure in the joints is built up enough. This frame can on lock and break into segments if need be to fire any one of Yellow fevers limbs like a bottle rocket using the pressure from the hydraulics. [Takes one [1] post to build pressure in Joints]

• Yellow Fever‘s signature yellow striped tarp cloak is composed of numerous chakra infused fibers, allowing it to take on heavy hits by Level B-Rank Techniques of any charka affinity. The fibers also allow for the length of the tarp to be stretched and elongated cover the entire puppet or several others with an expense of C-Rank Chakra. [limit of 4 people.]

• Inside the shin of the left leg is a 2x2 centimeters thick 40 foot long prehensile segmented tether of with a bladed pincer claw tip that acts as a hose of a neurotoxin that’s dripped from the left thigh to cot the cord. In it’s housing in the leg, while the first 8 Ft are left outside the body to wrap around the figure of the puppet being hidden by the draped clothing it wears. The dripping canister can be connected to draw the (yellow) neurotoxin to spray in mist or jet for from the “mouth” of the pincer.

-_- This Neurotoxin isn’t instantly volatile; the process of its effect takes five [5] posts to prime the infected. It begins by causing one to feel their bodies start to shake in the first [1] post. The second [2] the infected feel their pulse rise, and to some it seem like the reeling boost of an adrenaline rush. By the thirds [3] post they begin to feel their body movements lose the force or effective motion they once did, and this rise then drop in prowess causes a subtle sense of dread. Genjutsu cast in the last two [2] posts of this toxins effect will take effect just by seeing yellow fever following the hands sings on the puppeteers part. These Jutsu gain a post in duration.

• Wields a chakra infused chain & sickle weapon that’s counter balanced by a hollow ball that holds mild poison smoke pellets that can be tactfully released from its bell appearance. These pellets are made from a (yellow) neurotoxin that increase fear inducing hormones priming genjutsu that requires any prefix of believable terror/fear trough all five sense outside of the jutsu description, it causes waking night terrors, that occur in flashes. These visions are not Chakra based or Genjutsu produced but a temporary mental imbalance form the pellets poison. They’re mostly a distraction and unbalancing mechanisms taking effect for only seconds. [30 pellets held, chain 20 feet, blade cuts like a C-rank vacuum blade]

• Worn around its waist Yellow Fever has a tool that works to disrupt sensing of chakra by causing an echo of the chakra it’s provided. For sensors this may only cause them to vaguely track down the position of the opponent, making their presence seem expanded rather than in one focused point. Even for doujutsu it can create a fog of reflective chakra that double to cause a static cling to clouds of mist or dust to help visually conceal Yellow Fever even when faced with techniques to clear the air (futon). This mechanisms Expends a single burst of C-rank chakra that can permeate and cling to smoke screens, but this only last for two [2] post per use. Reflective nature isolates sensing to the cloud when caught inside, and prevents sensing inside when outside, un-ranked sensing is hampered as well in limitation. [Sensing Jutsu abilities under B-rank are affected. ]


All non-puppet requests will be ignored, as this is a puppet request. This includes wanted poisons. Alright, aside from that, titanium and silicone are difficult to obtain: titanium only exists in miniscule quantities (so far found), and silicone hasn't been discovered yet. As such, I won't mind if the joints are plated in titanium, but there's not enough of the metal (ore or refined) around to do an entire skeleton.

Senbon launcher with a built-in poisoning chamber is fine.
A separate poisoning chamber for the mask (aerial-only poisons, as you've requested) is fine.
Titanium was already discussed, but a pressure system is fine.
The cloak appears to be a request for a custom jutsu; apply for the jutsu over in the custom jutsu thread please~ Otherwise, we can discuss perhaps having the cloak simply be laced with chakra metals?
Prehensile, segmented tether with a chamber for poisons is fine. As such, please see the second statement, up above, in regards to all poison requests.
Hollow chakra metal chain & sickle weapon itself is fine. Disregarding everything else.
This last tool also seems like a custom jutsu. If it were composed of an open-ended chakra node-like object (i.e. wastes a certain amount of all chakra fed to the puppet), it would be a static object, but its stated usage is closer to non-static.
 
PostPosted: Sun May 31, 2015 12:02 am
AandOE
AD Reaper Elyse


Character: Miko Tengoku
Link to profile: Profile

Puppet Name: Kounetsubyou [Yellow Fever]
Puppet Appearance: Yellow Fever is a 5’7 ft moderate built figure, that to some may seem like a normal man with a mask on. The Mask it wears is lightly skeletal and birdlike denoting some resemblance to an Anbu mask with no markings, but it’s lower jaw being a gasmask also defeats that deceptive angle to those savvy enough to know the difference. This figure is dressed like a tattered mercenary or possibly a weathered hobo. Beyond it’s appearance, the clothing are loose and baggy. Underneath its strapped tarp clock is the mark of Miko’s village. Visibly on its person are holsters and places to place weapons or scrolls if the “ninja” so choose to add them to their person. This would be the other slight assumption in appearance that might assume this figure to be a mercenary, or ex shinobi soldier.

Puppet Description:
Kounetsubyou is a Puppet once used by Miko’s father that he developed with the help of his father. The way of the shinobi didn’t quite work out for him, so as time wore one and Miko came to inherit the aspirations of her grandfather she used her own prodigious skills with puppets to further develop Kounetsubyou. Made of a steel allow frame with titanium joints most of the other body is wooden with a leather skin layer providing a mannequin base for the puppet. The joints and mobility is much looser and are more akin to that of a gymnast, though what restrictions in motion are to help in the illusion of it being human. Other than the frame the mechanisms of the puppet are built out of a chakra molded alloy or conventional materials. The right arm is a senbon launcher; the left leg holds a whip like tether that the puppeteer had complete control over. The face-mask is gasmask that is creates smokescreens. The puppet wears a charka sensing reflector that acts by forming a cloud of chakra from a personal reserve to reflect or hamper the efforts of chakra sensing abilities. Rapped over it’s person for the most part are tattered clothing with holsters for ninja armament. Hidden under the black half of its cloak is a chained sickle. The yellow striped half is made of chakra infused threads that increase defensive purposes.

Mechanism Summary:

• Right-arm has a poison senbon needle launcher which fires from the palm. Stocked with 200 senbon needles. Poison is an anti-coagulant that causes sudden symptoms of the flu (shakes, fever, rigid breathing, etc.) for two [2] posts.

• Yellow Fevers Gasmask works in the reverse releasing a yellow smoke that hides the puppet and makes it hard to even see your hand in front of your face. This smoke is not lethal but the smoke is held in a one time re-loadable (trough Jutsu) canister of mild tear gas. This smoke screen can be held for ten [10] post nonstop. The cloud coverage is twenty [20] cubic feet, when cut off mist last for two [2] posts before dissipating..

• The steel skeletal frame of Yellow Fever has a titanium joints and a mechanical air-pressure based hydraulic system that makes it movements and attacks more powerful in short order as well and cushioning/quieting its motions when not pressing a offensive with bolstered actions. It does this by building air pressure in the joints and then releasing it when the pressure in the joints is built up enough. This frame can on lock and break into segments if need be to fire any one of Yellow fevers limbs like a bottle rocket using the pressure from the hydraulics. [Takes one [1] post to build pressure in Joints]

• Yellow Fever‘s signature yellow striped tarp cloak is composed of numerous chakra infused fibers, allowing it to take on heavy hits by Level B-Rank Techniques of any charka affinity.

• Inside the shin of the left leg is a 2x2 centimeters thick 40 foot long prehensile segmented tether of with a bladed pincer claw tip that acts as a hose of a canister that can be filled with a liquid X_____X Poison that’s dripped from the left thigh to coat the cord. In it’s housing in the leg, while the first 8 Ft are left outside the body to wrap around the figure of the puppet being hidden by the draped clothing it wears. The dripping canister can be connected to draw the (X_____X) poison to spray in a mist or jet form from the “mouth” of the pincer if applied.

• Wields a chakra metal chain & sickle weapon that’s counter balanced by a hollow ball that holds smoke pellets that can be tactfully released from its round bell shaped appearance. The smoke pellets are mostly a distraction and unbalancing mechanisms taking effect for only seconds ( an instance in a post goes unseen by no doujutsu) [30 pellets held, chain 20 feet, blade cuts like a C-rank vacuum blade]

• Worn around its waist Yellow Fever holds a tool that works to disrupt sensing of chakra by causing an echo of the chakra it’s provided via personal chamber for chakra concealment in its lower abdomen. For sensors this may only cause them to vaguely track down the position of the opponent, making their presence seem expanded rather than in one focused point. Even for doujutsu it can create a fog of reflective chakra that doubles to cause a static cling to clouds of mist or dust to help visually conceal Yellow Fever even when faced with techniques to clear the air (futon). This mechanisms expends a single burst of C-rank chakra that can permeate and cling to smoke screens, but this only last for two [2] post per use. Reflective nature isolates sensing to the cloud when caught inside, and prevents sensing inside when outside, un-ranked sensing is hampered as well in limitation. [Sensing Jutsu abilities under B-rank are affected. ]


All non-puppet requests will be ignored, as this is a puppet request. This includes wanted poisons. Alright, aside from that, titanium and silicone are difficult to obtain: titanium only exists in miniscule quantities (so far found), and silicone hasn't been discovered yet. As such, I won't mind if the joints are plated in titanium, but there's not enough of the metal (ore or refined) around to do an entire skeleton.

Senbon launcher with a built-in poisoning chamber is fine.
A separate poisoning chamber for the mask (aerial-only poisons, as you've requested) is fine.
Titanium was already discussed, but a pressure system is fine.
The cloak appears to be a request for a custom jutsu; apply for the jutsu over in the custom jutsu thread please~ Otherwise, we can discuss perhaps having the cloak simply be laced with chakra metals?
Prehensile, segmented tether with a chamber for poisons is fine. As such, please see the second statement, up above, in regards to all poison requests.
Hollow chakra metal chain & sickle weapon itself is fine. Disregarding everything else.
This last tool also seems like a custom jutsu. If it were composed of an open-ended chakra node-like object (i.e. wastes a certain amount of all chakra fed to the puppet), it would be a static object, but its stated usage is closer to non-static.


  • So the silicone will have to be either invented by me at some point or scraped for now? Which is fine and the edits to the skeleton having titanium joints is fine too.

  • The cloak being laced with chakra metals was the gist of what it is the suggested tech part would be a function that could be activated though the medium between mechanism and jutsu when it comes to the kugutsu class is something I'm still trying to divine the placement of. Getting a better idea. so dropping that it's a tarp that can take B-rank attacks.

  • As for all of my various poisons I'm fine with applying and building them, but so far the system presented hasn't been given a place to submit these poisons or if I'm to purchase the means to make them etc. Also is the poisons senbon just simply tame enough to pass with out requiring the hazard system? As well does poison in general if used in this guild need to be reprocessed/ reinvented to fit the new standard? [You don't have to answer these here since they're outside of the puppets concern I'd just like to know in Pm if possible]

  • What if the last item worked off a system in which it held it's own personal chakra tank and/or held some means to siphon chakra to power and conduct its mechanism? Meaning prior siphon or depletion of chakra tank in it's own personal reserve, kinda like opening a valve of gas into a lamp. [Pm extended thoughts if any]


[Edits above]  

AD Reaper Elyse

Enduring Vet



AandOE

Captain

Star-Crossed Astronomer

17,000 Points
  • Partygoer 500
  • Perfect Attendance 400
  • Full closet 200
PostPosted: Fri Jun 05, 2015 2:13 pm
AD Reaper Elyse
AandOE
AD Reaper Elyse


Character: Miko Tengoku
Link to profile: Profile

Puppet Name: Kounetsubyou [Yellow Fever]
Puppet Appearance: Yellow Fever is a 5’7 ft moderate built figure, that to some may seem like a normal man with a mask on. The Mask it wears is lightly skeletal and birdlike denoting some resemblance to an Anbu mask with no markings, but it’s lower jaw being a gasmask also defeats that deceptive angle to those savvy enough to know the difference. This figure is dressed like a tattered mercenary or possibly a weathered hobo. Beyond it’s appearance, the clothing are loose and baggy. Underneath its strapped tarp clock is the mark of Miko’s village. Visibly on its person are holsters and places to place weapons or scrolls if the “ninja” so choose to add them to their person. This would be the other slight assumption in appearance that might assume this figure to be a mercenary, or ex shinobi soldier.

Puppet Description:
Kounetsubyou is a Puppet once used by Miko’s father that he developed with the help of his father. The way of the shinobi didn’t quite work out for him, so as time wore one and Miko came to inherit the aspirations of her grandfather she used her own prodigious skills with puppets to further develop Kounetsubyou. Made of a steel allow frame with titanium joints most of the other body is wooden with a leather skin layer providing a mannequin base for the puppet. The joints and mobility is much looser and are more akin to that of a gymnast, though what restrictions in motion are to help in the illusion of it being human. Other than the frame the mechanisms of the puppet are built out of a chakra molded alloy or conventional materials. The right arm is a senbon launcher; the left leg holds a whip like tether that the puppeteer had complete control over. The face-mask is gasmask that is creates smokescreens. The puppet wears a charka sensing reflector that acts by forming a cloud of chakra from a personal reserve to reflect or hamper the efforts of chakra sensing abilities. Rapped over it’s person for the most part are tattered clothing with holsters for ninja armament. Hidden under the black half of its cloak is a chained sickle. The yellow striped half is made of chakra infused threads that increase defensive purposes.

Mechanism Summary:

• Right-arm has a poison senbon needle launcher which fires from the palm. Stocked with 200 senbon needles. Poison is an anti-coagulant that causes sudden symptoms of the flu (shakes, fever, rigid breathing, etc.) for two [2] posts.

• Yellow Fevers Gasmask works in the reverse releasing a yellow smoke that hides the puppet and makes it hard to even see your hand in front of your face. This smoke is not lethal but the smoke is held in a one time re-loadable (trough Jutsu) canister of mild tear gas. This smoke screen can be held for ten [10] post nonstop. The cloud coverage is twenty [20] cubic feet, when cut off mist last for two [2] posts before dissipating..

• The steel skeletal frame of Yellow Fever has a titanium joints and a mechanical air-pressure based hydraulic system that makes it movements and attacks more powerful in short order as well and cushioning/quieting its motions when not pressing a offensive with bolstered actions. It does this by building air pressure in the joints and then releasing it when the pressure in the joints is built up enough. This frame can on lock and break into segments if need be to fire any one of Yellow fevers limbs like a bottle rocket using the pressure from the hydraulics. [Takes one [1] post to build pressure in Joints]

• Yellow Fever‘s signature yellow striped tarp cloak is composed of numerous chakra infused fibers, allowing it to take on heavy hits by Level B-Rank Techniques of any charka affinity.

• Inside the shin of the left leg is a 2x2 centimeters thick 40 foot long prehensile segmented tether of with a bladed pincer claw tip that acts as a hose of a canister that can be filled with a liquid X_____X Poison that’s dripped from the left thigh to coat the cord. In it’s housing in the leg, while the first 8 Ft are left outside the body to wrap around the figure of the puppet being hidden by the draped clothing it wears. The dripping canister can be connected to draw the (X_____X) poison to spray in a mist or jet form from the “mouth” of the pincer if applied.

• Wields a chakra metal chain & sickle weapon that’s counter balanced by a hollow ball that holds smoke pellets that can be tactfully released from its round bell shaped appearance. The smoke pellets are mostly a distraction and unbalancing mechanisms taking effect for only seconds ( an instance in a post goes unseen by no doujutsu) [30 pellets held, chain 20 feet, blade cuts like a C-rank vacuum blade]

• Worn around its waist Yellow Fever holds a tool that works to disrupt sensing of chakra by causing an echo of the chakra it’s provided via personal chamber for chakra concealment in its lower abdomen. For sensors this may only cause them to vaguely track down the position of the opponent, making their presence seem expanded rather than in one focused point. Even for doujutsu it can create a fog of reflective chakra that doubles to cause a static cling to clouds of mist or dust to help visually conceal Yellow Fever even when faced with techniques to clear the air (futon). This mechanisms expends a single burst of C-rank chakra that can permeate and cling to smoke screens, but this only last for two [2] post per use. Reflective nature isolates sensing to the cloud when caught inside, and prevents sensing inside when outside, un-ranked sensing is hampered as well in limitation. [Sensing Jutsu abilities under B-rank are affected. ]


All non-puppet requests will be ignored, as this is a puppet request. This includes wanted poisons. Alright, aside from that, titanium and silicone are difficult to obtain: titanium only exists in miniscule quantities (so far found), and silicone hasn't been discovered yet. As such, I won't mind if the joints are plated in titanium, but there's not enough of the metal (ore or refined) around to do an entire skeleton.

Senbon launcher with a built-in poisoning chamber is fine.
A separate poisoning chamber for the mask (aerial-only poisons, as you've requested) is fine.
Titanium was already discussed, but a pressure system is fine.
The cloak appears to be a request for a custom jutsu; apply for the jutsu over in the custom jutsu thread please~ Otherwise, we can discuss perhaps having the cloak simply be laced with chakra metals?
Prehensile, segmented tether with a chamber for poisons is fine. As such, please see the second statement, up above, in regards to all poison requests.
Hollow chakra metal chain & sickle weapon itself is fine. Disregarding everything else.
This last tool also seems like a custom jutsu. If it were composed of an open-ended chakra node-like object (i.e. wastes a certain amount of all chakra fed to the puppet), it would be a static object, but its stated usage is closer to non-static.


  • So the silicone will have to be either invented by me at some point or scraped for now? Which is fine and the edits to the skeleton having titanium joints is fine too.

  • The cloak being laced with chakra metals was the gist of what it is the suggested tech part would be a function that could be activated though the medium between mechanism and jutsu when it comes to the kugutsu class is something I'm still trying to divine the placement of. Getting a better idea. so dropping that it's a tarp that can take B-rank attacks.

  • As for all of my various poisons I'm fine with applying and building them, but so far the system presented hasn't been given a place to submit these poisons or if I'm to purchase the means to make them etc. Also is the poisons senbon just simply tame enough to pass with out requiring the hazard system? As well does poison in general if used in this guild need to be reprocessed/ reinvented to fit the new standard? [You don't have to answer these here since they're outside of the puppets concern I'd just like to know in Pm if possible]

  • What if the last item worked off a system in which it held it's own personal chakra tank and/or held some means to siphon chakra to power and conduct its mechanism? Meaning prior siphon or depletion of chakra tank in it's own personal reserve, kinda like opening a valve of gas into a lamp. [Pm extended thoughts if any]


[Edits above][/spoier]


Apologies for the delay. It seems Fridays are my best day to do moderations. For silicone, yes. For poisons, we have a way to augment, and thus change, existing poisons to suit one's needs. As with any plant/fungi/etc growing, it takes a while, but the rewards for doing so are immense. Further information is listed under the label of Botany, and Botany's ... hm.... it seems that the Pharmaceutical Chemist smithing never made it out, as intended. I'll be posting the Pharmaceutical Chemist under the smithing thread's post in a few moments.

As for the last request, any chakra that goes into the puppet has to be that of Kugutsu. So, for example, if someone were to put down a chakra well fuuin onto the puppet, it could either draw in (from you) kugutsu chakra, or draw out (per its conditions) kugutsu chakra.
 
PostPosted: Fri Jun 05, 2015 11:37 pm
AandOE
AD Reaper Elyse
AandOE
AD Reaper Elyse


Character: Miko Tengoku
Link to profile: Profile

Puppet Name: Kounetsubyou [Yellow Fever]
Puppet Appearance: Yellow Fever is a 5’7 ft moderate built figure, that to some may seem like a normal man with a mask on. The Mask it wears is lightly skeletal and birdlike denoting some resemblance to an Anbu mask with no markings, but it’s lower jaw being a gasmask also defeats that deceptive angle to those savvy enough to know the difference. This figure is dressed like a tattered mercenary or possibly a weathered hobo. Beyond it’s appearance, the clothing are loose and baggy. Underneath its strapped tarp clock is the mark of Miko’s village. Visibly on its person are holsters and places to place weapons or scrolls if the “ninja” so choose to add them to their person. This would be the other slight assumption in appearance that might assume this figure to be a mercenary, or ex shinobi soldier.

Puppet Description:
Kounetsubyou is a Puppet once used by Miko’s father that he developed with the help of his father. The way of the shinobi didn’t quite work out for him, so as time wore one and Miko came to inherit the aspirations of her grandfather she used her own prodigious skills with puppets to further develop Kounetsubyou. Made of a steel allow frame with titanium joints most of the other body is wooden with a leather skin layer providing a mannequin base for the puppet. The joints and mobility is much looser and are more akin to that of a gymnast, though what restrictions in motion are to help in the illusion of it being human. Other than the frame the mechanisms of the puppet are built out of a chakra molded alloy or conventional materials. The right arm is a senbon launcher; the left leg holds a whip like tether that the puppeteer had complete control over. The face-mask is gasmask that is creates smokescreens. The puppet wears a charka sensing reflector that acts by forming a cloud of chakra from a personal fuuin regulated reserve to reflect or hamper the efforts of chakra sensing abilities. Wrapped over it’s person for the most part are tattered clothing with holsters for ninja armament. Hidden under the black half of its cloak is a chained sickle. The yellow striped half is made of chakra infused threads that increase defensive purposes.

Mechanism Summary:

• Right-arm has a poison senbon needle launcher which fires from the palm. Stocked with 200 senbon needles. Poison is an anti-coagulant that causes sudden symptoms of the flu (shakes, fever, rigid breathing, etc.) for two [2] posts.

• Yellow Fevers Gasmask works in the reverse releasing a yellow smoke that hides the puppet and makes it hard to even see your hand in front of your face. This smoke is not lethal but the smoke is held in a one time re-loadable (trough Jutsu) canister of mild tear gas. This smoke screen can be held for ten [10] post nonstop. The cloud coverage is twenty [20] cubic feet, when cut off mist last for two [2] posts before dissipating..

• The steel skeletal frame of Yellow Fever has titanium joints and a mechanical air-pressure based hydraulic system that makes it movements and attacks more powerful in short order as well and cushioning/quieting its motions when not pressing a offensive with bolstered actions. It does this by building air pressure in the joints and then releasing it when the pressure in the joints is built up enough. This frame can on lock and break into segments if need be to fire any one of Yellow fevers limbs like a bottle rocket using the pressure from the hydraulics. [Takes one [1] post to build pressure in Joints]

• Yellow Fever‘s signature yellow striped tarp cloak is composed of numerous chakra infused fibers, allowing it to take on heavy hits by Level B-Rank Techniques of any charka affinity.

• Inside the shin of the left leg is a 2x2 centimeters thick 40 foot long prehensile segmented tether with a bladed pincer claw tip that acts as a hose of a canister that can be filled with a liquid X_____X Poison that’s dripped from the left thigh to coat the cord. In it’s housing in the leg, while the first 8 Ft are left outside the body to wrap around the figure of the puppet being hidden by the draped clothing it wears. The dripping canister can be connected to draw the (X_____X) poison to spray in a mist or jet form from the “mouth” of the pincer if applied.

• Wields a chakra metal chain & sickle weapon that’s counter balanced by a hollow ball that holds smoke pellets that can be tactfully released from its round bell shaped appearance. The smoke pellets are mostly a distraction and unbalancing mechanisms taking effect for only seconds ( an instance in a post goes unseen by no doujutsu) [30 pellets held, chain 20 feet, blade cuts like a C-rank vacuum blade]

• Worn around its waist Yellow Fever holds a tool that works to disrupt sensing of chakra by causing an echo of the chakra it’s provided via personal chakra metal chamber that correlates with Fuuin jutsu seal together it's supply (provided the jutsu is known by the shinobi) in its lower abdomen which holds up to [160 Chakra]. This Kugutsu chakra chamber is provided from the Puppeteer in the puppets preparation, and restocked by increments of 20 chakra point per post (outside of battle).
For sensors this mechanisms may only cause them to vaguely sense the position of the opponent, making their presence seem expanded rather than in one fixed point. Even for doujutsu it can create a fog of reflective chakra that doubles to cause a static cling to clouds of mist or dust to help visually conceal Yellow Fever even when faced with techniques to clear the air (futon). This mechanisms expends a single burst of C-rank chakra [-20] from it's reserve, that can permeates and cling to smoke screens, but this only last for two [2] post per use. The reflective nature isolates sensing to the cloud when caught inside, and prevents sensing inside when outside, un-ranked sensing is hampered as well in limitation. On it's own the cloud of chakra is only 30 cubic feet. [Sensing Jutsu abilities under B-rank are affected. ]


All non-puppet requests will be ignored, as this is a puppet request. This includes wanted poisons. Alright, aside from that, titanium and silicone are difficult to obtain: titanium only exists in miniscule quantities (so far found), and silicone hasn't been discovered yet. As such, I won't mind if the joints are plated in titanium, but there's not enough of the metal (ore or refined) around to do an entire skeleton.

Senbon launcher with a built-in poisoning chamber is fine.
A separate poisoning chamber for the mask (aerial-only poisons, as you've requested) is fine.
Titanium was already discussed, but a pressure system is fine.
The cloak appears to be a request for a custom jutsu; apply for the jutsu over in the custom jutsu thread please~ Otherwise, we can discuss perhaps having the cloak simply be laced with chakra metals?
Prehensile, segmented tether with a chamber for poisons is fine. As such, please see the second statement, up above, in regards to all poison requests.
Hollow chakra metal chain & sickle weapon itself is fine. Disregarding everything else.
This last tool also seems like a custom jutsu. If it were composed of an open-ended chakra node-like object (i.e. wastes a certain amount of all chakra fed to the puppet), it would be a static object, but its stated usage is closer to non-static.


  • So the silicone will have to be either invented by me at some point or scraped for now? Which is fine and the edits to the skeleton having titanium joints is fine too.

  • The cloak being laced with chakra metals was the gist of what it is the suggested tech part would be a function that could be activated though the medium between mechanism and jutsu when it comes to the kugutsu class is something I'm still trying to divine the placement of. Getting a better idea. so dropping that it's a tarp that can take B-rank attacks.

  • As for all of my various poisons I'm fine with applying and building them, but so far the system presented hasn't been given a place to submit these poisons or if I'm to purchase the means to make them etc. Also is the poisons senbon just simply tame enough to pass with out requiring the hazard system? As well does poison in general if used in this guild need to be reprocessed/ reinvented to fit the new standard? [You don't have to answer these here since they're outside of the puppets concern I'd just like to know in Pm if possible]

  • What if the last item worked off a system in which it held it's own personal chakra tank and/or held some means to siphon chakra to power and conduct its mechanism? Meaning prior siphon or depletion of chakra tank in it's own personal reserve, kinda like opening a valve of gas into a lamp. [Pm extended thoughts if any]


[Edits above]


Apologies for the delay. It seems Fridays are my best day to do moderations. For silicone, yes. For poisons, we have a way to augment, and thus change, existing poisons to suit one's needs. As with any plant/fungi/etc growing, it takes a while, but the rewards for doing so are immense. Further information is listed under the label of Botany, and Botany's ... hm.... it seems that the Pharmaceutical Chemist smithing never made it out, as intended. I'll be posting the Pharmaceutical Chemist under the smithing thread's post in a few moments.

As for the last request, any chakra that goes into the puppet has to be that of Kugutsu. So, for example, if someone were to put down a chakra well fuuin onto the puppet, it could either draw in (from you) kugutsu chakra, or draw out (per its conditions) kugutsu chakra.


Okay from what you've given me I can make chamber for kugutsu chakra from with in the puppet that I stock pile chakra for later release on a mechanism. It's just understood this chakra has to come from me or some other source of "kugutsu chakra".

Though for further inquiry, what would be the nature or specific befits or restrictions kugutsu chaka as you coined it has over normal chakra? I know puppeteers use chakra strings but I never thought it was an entirely different chakra nature before. If it is, would it be something like it's the only type of chakra that can animate the inanimate, or is it something else? EDITED
 

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PostPosted: Sat Jun 13, 2015 8:57 am
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Character: Miko Tengoku
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Puppet Name: Kounetsubyou [Yellow Fever]
Puppet Appearance: Yellow Fever is a 5’7 ft moderate built figure, that to some may seem like a normal man with a mask on. The Mask it wears is lightly skeletal and birdlike denoting some resemblance to an Anbu mask with no markings, but it’s lower jaw being a gasmask also defeats that deceptive angle to those savvy enough to know the difference. This figure is dressed like a tattered mercenary or possibly a weathered hobo. Beyond it’s appearance, the clothing are loose and baggy. Underneath its strapped tarp clock is the mark of Miko’s village. Visibly on its person are holsters and places to place weapons or scrolls if the “ninja” so choose to add them to their person. This would be the other slight assumption in appearance that might assume this figure to be a mercenary, or ex shinobi soldier.

Puppet Description:
Kounetsubyou is a Puppet once used by Miko’s father that he developed with the help of his father. The way of the shinobi didn’t quite work out for him, so as time wore one and Miko came to inherit the aspirations of her grandfather she used her own prodigious skills with puppets to further develop Kounetsubyou. Made of a steel allow frame with titanium joints most of the other body is wooden with a leather skin layer providing a mannequin base for the puppet. The joints and mobility is much looser and are more akin to that of a gymnast, though what restrictions in motion are to help in the illusion of it being human. Other than the frame the mechanisms of the puppet are built out of a chakra molded alloy or conventional materials. The right arm is a senbon launcher; the left leg holds a whip like tether that the puppeteer had complete control over. The face-mask is gasmask that is creates smokescreens. The puppet wears a charka sensing reflector that acts by forming a cloud of chakra from a personal reserve to reflect or hamper the efforts of chakra sensing abilities. Rapped over it’s person for the most part are tattered clothing with holsters for ninja armament. Hidden under the black half of its cloak is a chained sickle. The yellow striped half is made of chakra infused threads that increase defensive purposes.

Mechanism Summary:

• Right-arm has a poison senbon needle launcher which fires from the palm. Stocked with 200 senbon needles. Poison is an anti-coagulant that causes sudden symptoms of the flu (shakes, fever, rigid breathing, etc.) for two [2] posts.

• Yellow Fevers Gasmask works in the reverse releasing a yellow smoke that hides the puppet and makes it hard to even see your hand in front of your face. This smoke is not lethal but the smoke is held in a one time re-loadable (trough Jutsu) canister of mild tear gas. This smoke screen can be held for ten [10] post nonstop. The cloud coverage is twenty [20] cubic feet, when cut off mist last for two [2] posts before dissipating..

• The steel skeletal frame of Yellow Fever has a titanium joints and a mechanical air-pressure based hydraulic system that makes it movements and attacks more powerful in short order as well and cushioning/quieting its motions when not pressing a offensive with bolstered actions. It does this by building air pressure in the joints and then releasing it when the pressure in the joints is built up enough. This frame can on lock and break into segments if need be to fire any one of Yellow fevers limbs like a bottle rocket using the pressure from the hydraulics. [Takes one [1] post to build pressure in Joints]

• Yellow Fever‘s signature yellow striped tarp cloak is composed of numerous chakra infused fibers, allowing it to take on heavy hits by Level B-Rank Techniques of any charka affinity.

• Inside the shin of the left leg is a 2x2 centimeters thick 40 foot long prehensile segmented tether of with a bladed pincer claw tip that acts as a hose of a canister that can be filled with a liquid X_____X Poison that’s dripped from the left thigh to coat the cord. In it’s housing in the leg, while the first 8 Ft are left outside the body to wrap around the figure of the puppet being hidden by the draped clothing it wears. The dripping canister can be connected to draw the (X_____X) poison to spray in a mist or jet form from the “mouth” of the pincer if applied.

• Wields a chakra metal chain & sickle weapon that’s counter balanced by a hollow ball that holds smoke pellets that can be tactfully released from its round bell shaped appearance. The smoke pellets are mostly a distraction and unbalancing mechanisms taking effect for only seconds ( an instance in a post goes unseen by no doujutsu) [30 pellets held, chain 20 feet, blade cuts like a C-rank vacuum blade]

• Worn around its waist Yellow Fever holds a tool that works to disrupt sensing of chakra by causing an echo of the chakra it’s provided via personal chakra metal chamber in its lower abdomen which holds up to [160 Chakra]. This Kugutsu chakra chamber is provided from the Puppeteer in the puppets preparation, and restocked by increments of 20 chakra point per post (outside of battle).
For sensors this mechanisms may only cause them to vaguely sense the position of the opponent, making their presence seem expanded rather than in one fixed point. Even for doujutsu it can create a fog of reflective chakra that doubles to cause a static cling to clouds of mist or dust to help visually conceal Yellow Fever even when faced with techniques to clear the air (futon). This mechanisms expends a single burst of C-rank chakra [-20] from it's reserve, that can permeates and cling to smoke screens, but this only last for two [2] post per use. The reflective nature isolates sensing to the cloud when caught inside, and prevents sensing inside when outside, un-ranked sensing is hampered as well in limitation. On it's own the cloud of chakra is only 30 cubic feet. [Sensing Jutsu abilities under B-rank are affected. ]


All non-puppet requests will be ignored, as this is a puppet request. This includes wanted poisons. Alright, aside from that, titanium and silicone are difficult to obtain: titanium only exists in miniscule quantities (so far found), and silicone hasn't been discovered yet. As such, I won't mind if the joints are plated in titanium, but there's not enough of the metal (ore or refined) around to do an entire skeleton.

Senbon launcher with a built-in poisoning chamber is fine.
A separate poisoning chamber for the mask (aerial-only poisons, as you've requested) is fine.
Titanium was already discussed, but a pressure system is fine.
The cloak appears to be a request for a custom jutsu; apply for the jutsu over in the custom jutsu thread please~ Otherwise, we can discuss perhaps having the cloak simply be laced with chakra metals?
Prehensile, segmented tether with a chamber for poisons is fine. As such, please see the second statement, up above, in regards to all poison requests.
Hollow chakra metal chain & sickle weapon itself is fine. Disregarding everything else.
This last tool also seems like a custom jutsu. If it were composed of an open-ended chakra node-like object (i.e. wastes a certain amount of all chakra fed to the puppet), it would be a static object, but its stated usage is closer to non-static.


  • So the silicone will have to be either invented by me at some point or scraped for now? Which is fine and the edits to the skeleton having titanium joints is fine too.

  • The cloak being laced with chakra metals was the gist of what it is the suggested tech part would be a function that could be activated though the medium between mechanism and jutsu when it comes to the kugutsu class is something I'm still trying to divine the placement of. Getting a better idea. so dropping that it's a tarp that can take B-rank attacks.

  • As for all of my various poisons I'm fine with applying and building them, but so far the system presented hasn't been given a place to submit these poisons or if I'm to purchase the means to make them etc. Also is the poisons senbon just simply tame enough to pass with out requiring the hazard system? As well does poison in general if used in this guild need to be reprocessed/ reinvented to fit the new standard? [You don't have to answer these here since they're outside of the puppets concern I'd just like to know in Pm if possible]

  • What if the last item worked off a system in which it held it's own personal chakra tank and/or held some means to siphon chakra to power and conduct its mechanism? Meaning prior siphon or depletion of chakra tank in it's own personal reserve, kinda like opening a valve of gas into a lamp. [Pm extended thoughts if any]


[Edits above]


Apologies for the delay. It seems Fridays are my best day to do moderations. For silicone, yes. For poisons, we have a way to augment, and thus change, existing poisons to suit one's needs. As with any plant/fungi/etc growing, it takes a while, but the rewards for doing so are immense. Further information is listed under the label of Botany, and Botany's ... hm.... it seems that the Pharmaceutical Chemist smithing never made it out, as intended. I'll be posting the Pharmaceutical Chemist under the smithing thread's post in a few moments.

As for the last request, any chakra that goes into the puppet has to be that of Kugutsu. So, for example, if someone were to put down a chakra well fuuin onto the puppet, it could either draw in (from you) kugutsu chakra, or draw out (per its conditions) kugutsu chakra.


Okay from what you've given me I can make chamber for kugutsu chakra from with in the puppet that I stock pile chakra for later release on a mechanism. It's just understood this chakra has to come from me or some other source of "kugutsu chakra".

Though for further inquiry, what would be the nature or specific befits or restrictions kugutsu chaka as you coined it has over normal chakra? I know puppeteers use chakra strings but I never thought it was an entirely different chakra nature before. If it is, would it be something like it's the only type of chakra that can animate the inanimate, or is it something else? EDITED


Kugutsu itself is a mix of Inton and Yoton, much like the variances of Maruton, but without its associated elemental weakness. So while normal Maruton jutsu are defeated by same ranked elementals, Kugutsu is not. (they'd simply be at an impasse) This is also why other types of chakra cannot be passed down along the kugutsu strings, or be used inside the puppets, as the various lines would shatter.

As for the 'chamber', yes, so long as you have someone with the proper fuuin write it down for you, on the part necessary.
 
PostPosted: Sat Jun 13, 2015 9:10 am
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Character: Miko Tengoku
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Puppet Name: Kounetsubyou [Yellow Fever]
Puppet Appearance: Yellow Fever is a 5’7 ft moderate built figure, that to some may seem like a normal man with a mask on. The Mask it wears is lightly skeletal and birdlike denoting some resemblance to an Anbu mask with no markings, but it’s lower jaw being a gasmask also defeats that deceptive angle to those savvy enough to know the difference. This figure is dressed like a tattered mercenary or possibly a weathered hobo. Beyond it’s appearance, the clothing are loose and baggy. Underneath its strapped tarp clock is the mark of Miko’s village. Visibly on its person are holsters and places to place weapons or scrolls if the “ninja” so choose to add them to their person. This would be the other slight assumption in appearance that might assume this figure to be a mercenary, or ex shinobi soldier.

Puppet Description:
Kounetsubyou is a Puppet once used by Miko’s father that he developed with the help of his father. The way of the shinobi didn’t quite work out for him, so as time wore one and Miko came to inherit the aspirations of her grandfather she used her own prodigious skills with puppets to further develop Kounetsubyou. Made of a steel allow frame with titanium joints most of the other body is wooden with a leather skin layer providing a mannequin base for the puppet. The joints and mobility is much looser and are more akin to that of a gymnast, though what restrictions in motion are to help in the illusion of it being human. Other than the frame the mechanisms of the puppet are built out of a chakra molded alloy or conventional materials. The right arm is a senbon launcher; the left leg holds a whip like tether that the puppeteer had complete control over. The face-mask is gasmask that is creates smokescreens. The puppet wears a charka sensing reflector that acts by forming a cloud of chakra from a personal reserve to reflect or hamper the efforts of chakra sensing abilities. Rapped over it’s person for the most part are tattered clothing with holsters for ninja armament. Hidden under the black half of its cloak is a chained sickle. The yellow striped half is made of chakra infused threads that increase defensive purposes.

Mechanism Summary:

• Right-arm has a poison senbon needle launcher which fires from the palm. Stocked with 200 senbon needles. Poison is an anti-coagulant that causes sudden symptoms of the flu (shakes, fever, rigid breathing, etc.) for two [2] posts.

• Yellow Fevers Gasmask works in the reverse releasing a yellow smoke that hides the puppet and makes it hard to even see your hand in front of your face. This smoke is not lethal but the smoke is held in a one time re-loadable (trough Jutsu) canister of mild tear gas. This smoke screen can be held for ten [10] post nonstop. The cloud coverage is twenty [20] cubic feet, when cut off mist last for two [2] posts before dissipating..

• The steel skeletal frame of Yellow Fever has a titanium joints and a mechanical air-pressure based hydraulic system that makes it movements and attacks more powerful in short order as well and cushioning/quieting its motions when not pressing a offensive with bolstered actions. It does this by building air pressure in the joints and then releasing it when the pressure in the joints is built up enough. This frame can on lock and break into segments if need be to fire any one of Yellow fevers limbs like a bottle rocket using the pressure from the hydraulics. [Takes one [1] post to build pressure in Joints]

• Yellow Fever‘s signature yellow striped tarp cloak is composed of numerous chakra infused fibers, allowing it to take on heavy hits by Level B-Rank Techniques of any charka affinity.

• Inside the shin of the left leg is a 2x2 centimeters thick 40 foot long prehensile segmented tether of with a bladed pincer claw tip that acts as a hose of a canister that can be filled with a liquid X_____X Poison that’s dripped from the left thigh to coat the cord. In it’s housing in the leg, while the first 8 Ft are left outside the body to wrap around the figure of the puppet being hidden by the draped clothing it wears. The dripping canister can be connected to draw the (X_____X) poison to spray in a mist or jet form from the “mouth” of the pincer if applied.

• Wields a chakra metal chain & sickle weapon that’s counter balanced by a hollow ball that holds smoke pellets that can be tactfully released from its round bell shaped appearance. The smoke pellets are mostly a distraction and unbalancing mechanisms taking effect for only seconds ( an instance in a post goes unseen by no doujutsu) [30 pellets held, chain 20 feet, blade cuts like a C-rank vacuum blade]

• Worn around its waist Yellow Fever holds a tool that works to disrupt sensing of chakra by causing an echo of the chakra it’s provided via personal chakra metal chamber in its lower abdomen which holds up to [160 Chakra]. This Kugutsu chakra chamber is provided from the Puppeteer in the puppets preparation, and restocked by increments of 20 chakra point per post (outside of battle).
For sensors this mechanisms may only cause them to vaguely sense the position of the opponent, making their presence seem expanded rather than in one fixed point. Even for doujutsu it can create a fog of reflective chakra that doubles to cause a static cling to clouds of mist or dust to help visually conceal Yellow Fever even when faced with techniques to clear the air (futon). This mechanisms expends a single burst of C-rank chakra [-20] from it's reserve, that can permeates and cling to smoke screens, but this only last for two [2] post per use. The reflective nature isolates sensing to the cloud when caught inside, and prevents sensing inside when outside, un-ranked sensing is hampered as well in limitation. On it's own the cloud of chakra is only 30 cubic feet. [Sensing Jutsu abilities under B-rank are affected. ]


All non-puppet requests will be ignored, as this is a puppet request. This includes wanted poisons. Alright, aside from that, titanium and silicone are difficult to obtain: titanium only exists in miniscule quantities (so far found), and silicone hasn't been discovered yet. As such, I won't mind if the joints are plated in titanium, but there's not enough of the metal (ore or refined) around to do an entire skeleton.

Senbon launcher with a built-in poisoning chamber is fine.
A separate poisoning chamber for the mask (aerial-only poisons, as you've requested) is fine.
Titanium was already discussed, but a pressure system is fine.
The cloak appears to be a request for a custom jutsu; apply for the jutsu over in the custom jutsu thread please~ Otherwise, we can discuss perhaps having the cloak simply be laced with chakra metals?
Prehensile, segmented tether with a chamber for poisons is fine. As such, please see the second statement, up above, in regards to all poison requests.
Hollow chakra metal chain & sickle weapon itself is fine. Disregarding everything else.
This last tool also seems like a custom jutsu. If it were composed of an open-ended chakra node-like object (i.e. wastes a certain amount of all chakra fed to the puppet), it would be a static object, but its stated usage is closer to non-static.


  • So the silicone will have to be either invented by me at some point or scraped for now? Which is fine and the edits to the skeleton having titanium joints is fine too.

  • The cloak being laced with chakra metals was the gist of what it is the suggested tech part would be a function that could be activated though the medium between mechanism and jutsu when it comes to the kugutsu class is something I'm still trying to divine the placement of. Getting a better idea. so dropping that it's a tarp that can take B-rank attacks.

  • As for all of my various poisons I'm fine with applying and building them, but so far the system presented hasn't been given a place to submit these poisons or if I'm to purchase the means to make them etc. Also is the poisons senbon just simply tame enough to pass with out requiring the hazard system? As well does poison in general if used in this guild need to be reprocessed/ reinvented to fit the new standard? [You don't have to answer these here since they're outside of the puppets concern I'd just like to know in Pm if possible]

  • What if the last item worked off a system in which it held it's own personal chakra tank and/or held some means to siphon chakra to power and conduct its mechanism? Meaning prior siphon or depletion of chakra tank in it's own personal reserve, kinda like opening a valve of gas into a lamp. [Pm extended thoughts if any]


[Edits above]


Apologies for the delay. It seems Fridays are my best day to do moderations. For silicone, yes. For poisons, we have a way to augment, and thus change, existing poisons to suit one's needs. As with any plant/fungi/etc growing, it takes a while, but the rewards for doing so are immense. Further information is listed under the label of Botany, and Botany's ... hm.... it seems that the Pharmaceutical Chemist smithing never made it out, as intended. I'll be posting the Pharmaceutical Chemist under the smithing thread's post in a few moments.

As for the last request, any chakra that goes into the puppet has to be that of Kugutsu. So, for example, if someone were to put down a chakra well fuuin onto the puppet, it could either draw in (from you) kugutsu chakra, or draw out (per its conditions) kugutsu chakra.


Okay from what you've given me I can make chamber for kugutsu chakra from with in the puppet that I stock pile chakra for later release on a mechanism. It's just understood this chakra has to come from me or some other source of "kugutsu chakra".

Though for further inquiry, what would be the nature or specific befits or restrictions kugutsu chaka as you coined it has over normal chakra? I know puppeteers use chakra strings but I never thought it was an entirely different chakra nature before. If it is, would it be something like it's the only type of chakra that can animate the inanimate, or is it something else? EDITED


Kugutsu itself is a mix of Inton and Yoton, much like the variances of Maruton, but without its associated elemental weakness. So while normal Maruton jutsu are defeated by same ranked elementals, Kugutsu is not. (they'd simply be at an impasse) This is also why other types of chakra cannot be passed down along the kugutsu strings, or be used inside the puppets, as the various lines would shatter.

As for the 'chamber', yes, so long as you have someone with the proper fuuin write it down for you, on the part necessary.

Alright, but as for the fuuin, is that really the only way to make the chamber I've seen different version made before, and if it is, wouldn't the takumi shop keep be the one to install it since per my request trough the normal customs system. Or is everything routing towards a more personally made system than before where I have to acquire more skills before having a number of mechanisms. If so then It'll effect how long between puppets I submit another here since I'd have to work out all the pieces and skills before making another.  

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PostPosted: Sat Jun 13, 2015 9:31 am
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  • So the silicone will have to be either invented by me at some point or scraped for now? Which is fine and the edits to the skeleton having titanium joints is fine too.

  • The cloak being laced with chakra metals was the gist of what it is the suggested tech part would be a function that could be activated though the medium between mechanism and jutsu when it comes to the kugutsu class is something I'm still trying to divine the placement of. Getting a better idea. so dropping that it's a tarp that can take B-rank attacks.

  • As for all of my various poisons I'm fine with applying and building them, but so far the system presented hasn't been given a place to submit these poisons or if I'm to purchase the means to make them etc. Also is the poisons senbon just simply tame enough to pass with out requiring the hazard system? As well does poison in general if used in this guild need to be reprocessed/ reinvented to fit the new standard? [You don't have to answer these here since they're outside of the puppets concern I'd just like to know in Pm if possible]

  • What if the last item worked off a system in which it held it's own personal chakra tank and/or held some means to siphon chakra to power and conduct its mechanism? Meaning prior siphon or depletion of chakra tank in it's own personal reserve, kinda like opening a valve of gas into a lamp. [Pm extended thoughts if any]


[Edits above]


Apologies for the delay. It seems Fridays are my best day to do moderations. For silicone, yes. For poisons, we have a way to augment, and thus change, existing poisons to suit one's needs. As with any plant/fungi/etc growing, it takes a while, but the rewards for doing so are immense. Further information is listed under the label of Botany, and Botany's ... hm.... it seems that the Pharmaceutical Chemist smithing never made it out, as intended. I'll be posting the Pharmaceutical Chemist under the smithing thread's post in a few moments.

As for the last request, any chakra that goes into the puppet has to be that of Kugutsu. So, for example, if someone were to put down a chakra well fuuin onto the puppet, it could either draw in (from you) kugutsu chakra, or draw out (per its conditions) kugutsu chakra.


Okay from what you've given me I can make chamber for kugutsu chakra from with in the puppet that I stock pile chakra for later release on a mechanism. It's just understood this chakra has to come from me or some other source of "kugutsu chakra".

Though for further inquiry, what would be the nature or specific befits or restrictions kugutsu chaka as you coined it has over normal chakra? I know puppeteers use chakra strings but I never thought it was an entirely different chakra nature before. If it is, would it be something like it's the only type of chakra that can animate the inanimate, or is it something else? EDITED


Kugutsu itself is a mix of Inton and Yoton, much like the variances of Maruton, but without its associated elemental weakness. So while normal Maruton jutsu are defeated by same ranked elementals, Kugutsu is not. (they'd simply be at an impasse) This is also why other types of chakra cannot be passed down along the kugutsu strings, or be used inside the puppets, as the various lines would shatter.

As for the 'chamber', yes, so long as you have someone with the proper fuuin write it down for you, on the part necessary.

Alright, but as for the fuuin, is that really the only way to make the chamber I've seen different version made before, and if it is, wouldn't the takumi shop keep be the one to install it since per my request trough the normal customs system. Or is everything routing towards a more personally made system than before where I have to acquire more skills before having a number of mechanisms. If so then It'll effect how long between puppets I submit another here since I'd have to work out all the pieces and skills before making another.

If you're referring to Shadow's chakra dispersal cannon, it was created to not house kugutsu for other techniques, but only for the dispersal technique. For general chakra usage, yes; the fuuin 'well' is mentioned in the Souzousaisei, which is among the S-ranks listed in eiseijutsu. However, some members, over time and through exposure to being around the technique, have made their own via customs.

The main use for the customs approval threads is now one for shortcuts, that is to be sure, as almost everything can be made in-rp with enough oomph. For instance, asking for a custom puppet before having the ability to create one yourself is wise, and then when you're able to simply create one, you'll essentially free up a slot all on your own. This is especially nifty, considering the amount of Variable Marbles and mechanisms you'd be able to pack into a single puppet!
 
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  • So the silicone will have to be either invented by me at some point or scraped for now? Which is fine and the edits to the skeleton having titanium joints is fine too.

  • The cloak being laced with chakra metals was the gist of what it is the suggested tech part would be a function that could be activated though the medium between mechanism and jutsu when it comes to the kugutsu class is something I'm still trying to divine the placement of. Getting a better idea. so dropping that it's a tarp that can take B-rank attacks.

  • As for all of my various poisons I'm fine with applying and building them, but so far the system presented hasn't been given a place to submit these poisons or if I'm to purchase the means to make them etc. Also is the poisons senbon just simply tame enough to pass with out requiring the hazard system? As well does poison in general if used in this guild need to be reprocessed/ reinvented to fit the new standard? [You don't have to answer these here since they're outside of the puppets concern I'd just like to know in Pm if possible]

  • What if the last item worked off a system in which it held it's own personal chakra tank and/or held some means to siphon chakra to power and conduct its mechanism? Meaning prior siphon or depletion of chakra tank in it's own personal reserve, kinda like opening a valve of gas into a lamp. [Pm extended thoughts if any]


[Edits above]


Apologies for the delay. It seems Fridays are my best day to do moderations. For silicone, yes. For poisons, we have a way to augment, and thus change, existing poisons to suit one's needs. As with any plant/fungi/etc growing, it takes a while, but the rewards for doing so are immense. Further information is listed under the label of Botany, and Botany's ... hm.... it seems that the Pharmaceutical Chemist smithing never made it out, as intended. I'll be posting the Pharmaceutical Chemist under the smithing thread's post in a few moments.

As for the last request, any chakra that goes into the puppet has to be that of Kugutsu. So, for example, if someone were to put down a chakra well fuuin onto the puppet, it could either draw in (from you) kugutsu chakra, or draw out (per its conditions) kugutsu chakra.


Okay from what you've given me I can make chamber for kugutsu chakra from with in the puppet that I stock pile chakra for later release on a mechanism. It's just understood this chakra has to come from me or some other source of "kugutsu chakra".

Though for further inquiry, what would be the nature or specific befits or restrictions kugutsu chaka as you coined it has over normal chakra? I know puppeteers use chakra strings but I never thought it was an entirely different chakra nature before. If it is, would it be something like it's the only type of chakra that can animate the inanimate, or is it something else? EDITED


Kugutsu itself is a mix of Inton and Yoton, much like the variances of Maruton, but without its associated elemental weakness. So while normal Maruton jutsu are defeated by same ranked elementals, Kugutsu is not. (they'd simply be at an impasse) This is also why other types of chakra cannot be passed down along the kugutsu strings, or be used inside the puppets, as the various lines would shatter.

As for the 'chamber', yes, so long as you have someone with the proper fuuin write it down for you, on the part necessary.

Alright, but as for the fuuin, is that really the only way to make the chamber I've seen different version made before, and if it is, wouldn't the takumi shop keep be the one to install it since per my request trough the normal customs system. Or is everything routing towards a more personally made system than before where I have to acquire more skills before having a number of mechanisms. If so then It'll effect how long between puppets I submit another here since I'd have to work out all the pieces and skills before making another.

If you're referring to Shadow's chakra dispersal cannon, it was created to not house kugutsu for other techniques, but only for the dispersal technique. For general chakra usage, yes; the fuuin 'well' is mentioned in the Souzousaisei, which is among the S-ranks listed in eiseijutsu. However, some members, over time and through exposure to being around the technique, have made their own via customs.

The main use for the customs approval threads is now one for shortcuts, that is to be sure, as almost everything can be made in-rp with enough oomph. For instance, asking for a custom puppet before having the ability to create one yourself is wise, and then when you're able to simply create one, you'll essentially free up a slot all on your own. This is especially nifty, considering the amount of Variable Marbles and mechanisms you'd be able to pack into a single puppet!


The Genesis Seal doesn't exist so far as i can see in the Fuuin jutsu list. So having someone else apply the seal other than what's custom would be difficult in terms of me having to look and ask around for assistance with something my character wouldn't know even existed, which would promote me making the jutsu it's self, but all around I'd assume the short-cut of the customs system to work in my favor here.So can it be approved or, no?  

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Okay from what you've given me I can make chamber for kugutsu chakra from with in the puppet that I stock pile chakra for later release on a mechanism. It's just understood this chakra has to come from me or some other source of "kugutsu chakra".

Though for further inquiry, what would be the nature or specific befits or restrictions kugutsu chaka as you coined it has over normal chakra? I know puppeteers use chakra strings but I never thought it was an entirely different chakra nature before. If it is, would it be something like it's the only type of chakra that can animate the inanimate, or is it something else? EDITED


Kugutsu itself is a mix of Inton and Yoton, much like the variances of Maruton, but without its associated elemental weakness. So while normal Maruton jutsu are defeated by same ranked elementals, Kugutsu is not. (they'd simply be at an impasse) This is also why other types of chakra cannot be passed down along the kugutsu strings, or be used inside the puppets, as the various lines would shatter.

As for the 'chamber', yes, so long as you have someone with the proper fuuin write it down for you, on the part necessary.

Alright, but as for the fuuin, is that really the only way to make the chamber I've seen different version made before, and if it is, wouldn't the takumi shop keep be the one to install it since per my request trough the normal customs system. Or is everything routing towards a more personally made system than before where I have to acquire more skills before having a number of mechanisms. If so then It'll effect how long between puppets I submit another here since I'd have to work out all the pieces and skills before making another.

If you're referring to Shadow's chakra dispersal cannon, it was created to not house kugutsu for other techniques, but only for the dispersal technique. For general chakra usage, yes; the fuuin 'well' is mentioned in the Souzousaisei, which is among the S-ranks listed in eiseijutsu. However, some members, over time and through exposure to being around the technique, have made their own via customs.

The main use for the customs approval threads is now one for shortcuts, that is to be sure, as almost everything can be made in-rp with enough oomph. For instance, asking for a custom puppet before having the ability to create one yourself is wise, and then when you're able to simply create one, you'll essentially free up a slot all on your own. This is especially nifty, considering the amount of Variable Marbles and mechanisms you'd be able to pack into a single puppet!


The Genesis Seal doesn't exist so far as i can see in the Fuuin jutsu list. So having someone else apply the seal other than what's custom would be difficult in terms of me having to look and ask around for assistance with something my character wouldn't know even existed, which would promote me making the jutsu it's self, but all around I'd assume the short-cut of the customs system to work in my favor here.So can it be approved or, no?

Other than looking for either an advanced medical nin with the Souzousaisei, or one of those folks that's experienced it off-hand--to create their own version--you'd have to do the same, yeah. In the long run, I ask that the storage technique be a fuuin custom, and not particularly of the puppet. Hm... this is for your Kumo-nin, yes? I believe Azeiel has one of these fuuin customs on his character there, if you'd like to skip the approval process for it and gain from him in-rp. Without skirting the edges of the auto-know 'no-no', I'd just hold a good long conversation with him there, and mention how taxing it is to keep using chakra all day long.

If, instead, you'd like for a copy of Shadow's dispersal mechanism, which holds up to 100 chakra and has several stipulations, we can do that.
 
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Puppet Name: Kounetsubyou [Yellow Fever]
Puppet Appearance: Yellow Fever is a 5’7 ft moderate built figure, that to some may seem like a normal man with a mask on. The Mask it wears is lightly skeletal and birdlike denoting some resemblance to an Anbu mask with no markings, but it’s lower jaw being a gasmask also defeats that deceptive angle to those savvy enough to know the difference. This figure is dressed like a tattered mercenary or possibly a weathered hobo. Beyond it’s appearance, the clothing are loose and baggy. Underneath its strapped tarp clock is the mark of Miko’s village. Visibly on its person are holsters and places to place weapons or scrolls if the “ninja” so choose to add them to their person. This would be the other slight assumption in appearance that might assume this figure to be a mercenary, or ex shinobi soldier.

Puppet Description:
Kounetsubyou is a Puppet once used by Miko’s father that he developed with the help of his father. The way of the shinobi didn’t quite work out for him, so as time wore one and Miko came to inherit the aspirations of her grandfather she used her own prodigious skills with puppets to further develop Kounetsubyou. Made of a steel allow frame with titanium joints most of the other body is wooden with a leather skin layer providing a mannequin base for the puppet. The joints and mobility is much looser and are more akin to that of a gymnast, though what restrictions in motion are to help in the illusion of it being human. Other than the frame the mechanisms of the puppet are built out of a chakra molded alloy or conventional materials. The right arm is a senbon launcher; the left leg holds a whip like tether that the puppeteer had complete control over. The face-mask is gasmask that is creates smokescreens. The puppet wears a charka sensing reflector that acts by forming a cloud of chakra from a personal (Fuuin sealed) reserve to reflect or hamper the efforts of chakra sensing abilities. Wraapped over it’s person for the most part are tattered clothing with holsters for ninja armament. Hidden under the black half of its cloak is a chained sickle. The yellow striped half is made of chakra infused threads that increase defensive purposes.

Mechanism Summary:

• Right-arm has a poison senbon needle launcher which fires from the palm. Stocked with 200 senbon needles. Poison is an anti-coagulant that causes sudden symptoms of the flu (shakes, fever, rigid breathing, etc.) for two [2] posts.

• Yellow Fevers Gasmask works in the reverse releasing a yellow smoke that hides the puppet and makes it hard to even see your hand in front of your face. This smoke is not lethal but the smoke is held in a one time re-loadable (trough Jutsu) canister of mild tear gas. This smoke screen can be held for ten [10] post nonstop. The cloud coverage is twenty [20] cubic feet, when cut off mist last for two [2] posts before dissipating..

• The steel skeletal frame of Yellow Fever has a titanium joints and a mechanical air-pressure based hydraulic system that makes it movements and attacks more powerful in short order as well and cushioning/quieting its motions when not pressing a offensive with bolstered actions. It does this by building air pressure in the joints and then releasing it when the pressure in the joints is built up enough. This frame can on lock and break into segments if need be to fire any one of Yellow fevers limbs like a bottle rocket using the pressure from the hydraulics. [Takes one [1] post to build pressure in Joints]

• Yellow Fever‘s signature yellow striped tarp cloak is composed of numerous chakra infused fibers, allowing it to take on heavy hits by Level B-Rank Techniques of any charka affinity.

• Inside the shin of the left leg is a 2x2 centimeters thick 40 foot long prehensile segmented tether of with a bladed pincer claw tip that acts as a hose of a canister that can be filled with a liquid X_____X Poison that’s dripped from the left thigh to coat the cord. In it’s housing in the leg, while the first 8 Ft are left outside the body to wrap around the figure of the puppet being hidden by the draped clothing it wears. The dripping canister can be connected to draw the (X_____X) poison to spray in a mist or jet form from the “mouth” of the pincer if applied.

• Wields a chakra metal chain & sickle weapon that’s counter balanced by a hollow ball that holds smoke pellets that can be tactfully released from its round bell shaped appearance. The smoke pellets are mostly a distraction and unbalancing mechanisms taking effect for only seconds ( an instance in a post goes unseen by no doujutsu) [30 pellets held, chain 20 feet, blade cuts like a C-rank vacuum blade]

• Worn around its waist Yellow Fever holds a tool that works to disrupt sensing of chakra by causing an echo of the chakra it’s provided via a chakra metal chamber intended to be sealed by a Fuuin jutsu seal to better regulate the opening and closing of the released Kugutsu chakra. (provided the jutsu is known by the shinobi)Otherwise this hold for chakra s only temporary and is limited in the size and use of the chakra stored. Where in only 20 chakra from the user can be stored and is released all at once.

The chamber is found in the lower abdomen and intended hold a surplus of kugutsu chakra.. The Kugutsu chakra chamber is provided from the Puppeteer in the puppets preparation, and restocked by increments of 20 chakra point per post (outside of battle).
For sensors this mechanisms may only cause them to vaguely sense the position of the opponent, making their presence seem expanded rather than in one fixed point. Even for doujutsu it can create a fog of reflective chakra that doubles to cause a static cling to clouds of mist or dust to help visually conceal Yellow Fever even when faced with techniques to clear the air (futon). This mechanisms expends a single burst of ranked from it's reserve, that can permeates and cling to smoke screens, but this only last for two [2] post per use. The reflective nature isolates sensing to the cloud when caught inside, and prevents sensing inside when outside, un-ranked sensing is hampered as well in limitation. On it's own the cloud of chakra is only 30 cubic feet.


Other than looking for either an advanced medical nin with the Souzousaisei, or one of those folks that's experienced it off-hand--to create their own version--you'd have to do the same, yeah. In the long run, I ask that the storage technique be a fuuin custom, and not particularly of the puppet. Hm... this is for your Kumo-nin, yes? I believe Azeiel has one of these fuuin customs on his character there, if you'd like to skip the approval process for it and gain from him in-rp. Without skirting the edges of the auto-know 'no-no', I'd just hold a good long conversation with him there, and mention how taxing it is to keep using chakra all day long.

If, instead, you'd like for a copy of Shadow's dispersal mechanism, which holds up to 100 chakra and has several stipulations, we can do that.


I guess I'll just put in that it needs a fuuin seal to work properly but right now it's a incomplete space where I can pour in the kugutsu chakra required for the mechanism to work, but it can only be used once and once I do it's dead. to me unless I complete the chamber with the help of the supporting fuuin technique. So right now it's a one and done mechanism to do what i intended and requires to be restocked for it's one shot with my prepping of my puppet. Edited

Also when i do retain the means to outfit my puppet as I'd intended do i need to resubmit it for approval or do i just upgrade and apply as I please as long as i have the skill. Which also reminds me, is there any limit to how many puppets you make outside of the custom system and trough the jobs system?
 

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PostPosted: Sun Jun 14, 2015 10:50 am
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Puppet Name: Kounetsubyou [Yellow Fever]
Puppet Appearance: Yellow Fever is a 5’7 ft moderate built figure, that to some may seem like a normal man with a mask on. The Mask it wears is lightly skeletal and birdlike denoting some resemblance to an Anbu mask with no markings, but it’s lower jaw being a gasmask also defeats that deceptive angle to those savvy enough to know the difference. This figure is dressed like a tattered mercenary or possibly a weathered hobo. Beyond it’s appearance, the clothing are loose and baggy. Underneath its strapped tarp clock is the mark of Miko’s village. Visibly on its person are holsters and places to place weapons or scrolls if the “ninja” so choose to add them to their person. This would be the other slight assumption in appearance that might assume this figure to be a mercenary, or ex shinobi soldier.

Puppet Description:
Kounetsubyou is a Puppet once used by Miko’s father that he developed with the help of his father. The way of the shinobi didn’t quite work out for him, so as time wore one and Miko came to inherit the aspirations of her grandfather she used her own prodigious skills with puppets to further develop Kounetsubyou. Made of a steel allow frame with titanium joints most of the other body is wooden with a leather skin layer providing a mannequin base for the puppet. The joints and mobility is much looser and are more akin to that of a gymnast, though what restrictions in motion are to help in the illusion of it being human. Other than the frame the mechanisms of the puppet are built out of a chakra molded alloy or conventional materials. The right arm is a senbon launcher; the left leg holds a whip like tether that the puppeteer had complete control over. The face-mask is gasmask that is creates smokescreens. The puppet wears a charka sensing reflector that acts by forming a cloud of chakra from a personal (Fuuin sealed) reserve to reflect or hamper the efforts of chakra sensing abilities. Wraapped over it’s person for the most part are tattered clothing with holsters for ninja armament. Hidden under the black half of its cloak is a chained sickle. The yellow striped half is made of chakra infused threads that increase defensive purposes.

Mechanism Summary:

• Right-arm has a poison senbon needle launcher which fires from the palm. Stocked with 200 senbon needles. Poison is an anti-coagulant that causes sudden symptoms of the flu (shakes, fever, rigid breathing, etc.) for two [2] posts.

• Yellow Fevers Gasmask works in the reverse releasing a yellow smoke that hides the puppet and makes it hard to even see your hand in front of your face. This smoke is not lethal but the smoke is held in a one time re-loadable (trough Jutsu) canister of mild tear gas. This smoke screen can be held for ten [10] post nonstop. The cloud coverage is twenty [20] cubic feet, when cut off mist last for two [2] posts before dissipating..

• The steel skeletal frame of Yellow Fever has a titanium joints and a mechanical air-pressure based hydraulic system that makes it movements and attacks more powerful in short order as well and cushioning/quieting its motions when not pressing a offensive with bolstered actions. It does this by building air pressure in the joints and then releasing it when the pressure in the joints is built up enough. This frame can on lock and break into segments if need be to fire any one of Yellow fevers limbs like a bottle rocket using the pressure from the hydraulics. [Takes one [1] post to build pressure in Joints]

• Yellow Fever‘s signature yellow striped tarp cloak is composed of numerous chakra infused fibers, allowing it to take on heavy hits by Level B-Rank Techniques of any charka affinity.

• Inside the shin of the left leg is a 2x2 centimeters thick 40 foot long prehensile segmented tether of with a bladed pincer claw tip that acts as a hose of a canister that can be filled with a liquid X_____X Poison that’s dripped from the left thigh to coat the cord. In it’s housing in the leg, while the first 8 Ft are left outside the body to wrap around the figure of the puppet being hidden by the draped clothing it wears. The dripping canister can be connected to draw the (X_____X) poison to spray in a mist or jet form from the “mouth” of the pincer if applied.

• Wields a chakra metal chain & sickle weapon that’s counter balanced by a hollow ball that holds smoke pellets that can be tactfully released from its round bell shaped appearance. The smoke pellets are mostly a distraction and unbalancing mechanisms taking effect for only seconds ( an instance in a post goes unseen by no doujutsu) [30 pellets held, chain 20 feet, blade cuts like a C-rank vacuum blade]

• Worn around its waist Yellow Fever holds a tool that works to disrupt sensing of chakra by causing an echo of the chakra it’s provided via a chakra metal chamber intended to be sealed by a Fuuin jutsu seal to better regulate the opening and closing of the released Kugutsu chakra. (provided the jutsu is known by the shinobi)Otherwise this hold for chakra s only temporary and is limited in the size and use of the chakra stored. Where in only 20 chakra from the user can be stored and is released all at once.

The chamber is found in the lower abdomen and intended hold a surplus of kugutsu chakra.. The Kugutsu chakra chamber is provided from the Puppeteer in the puppets preparation, and restocked by increments of 20 chakra point per post (outside of battle).
For sensors this mechanisms may only cause them to vaguely sense the position of the opponent, making their presence seem expanded rather than in one fixed point. Even for doujutsu it can create a fog of reflective chakra that doubles to cause a static cling to clouds of mist or dust to help visually conceal Yellow Fever even when faced with techniques to clear the air (futon). This mechanisms expends a single burst of ranked from it's reserve, that can permeates and cling to smoke screens, but this only last for two [2] post per use. The reflective nature isolates sensing to the cloud when caught inside, and prevents sensing inside when outside, un-ranked sensing is hampered as well in limitation. On it's own the cloud of chakra is only 30 cubic feet.


Other than looking for either an advanced medical nin with the Souzousaisei, or one of those folks that's experienced it off-hand--to create their own version--you'd have to do the same, yeah. In the long run, I ask that the storage technique be a fuuin custom, and not particularly of the puppet. Hm... this is for your Kumo-nin, yes? I believe Azeiel has one of these fuuin customs on his character there, if you'd like to skip the approval process for it and gain from him in-rp. Without skirting the edges of the auto-know 'no-no', I'd just hold a good long conversation with him there, and mention how taxing it is to keep using chakra all day long.

If, instead, you'd like for a copy of Shadow's dispersal mechanism, which holds up to 100 chakra and has several stipulations, we can do that.


I guess I'll just put in that it needs a fuuin seal to work properly but right now it's a incomplete space where I can pour in the kugutsu chakra required for the mechanism to work, but it can only be used once and once I do it's dead. to me unless I complete the chamber with the help of the supporting fuuin technique. So right now it's a one and done mechanism to do what i intended and requires to be restocked for it's one shot with my prepping of my puppet. Edited

Also when i do retain the means to outfit my puppet as I'd intended do i need to resubmit it for approval or do i just upgrade and apply as I please as long as i have the skill. Which also reminds me, is there any limit to how many puppets you make outside of the custom system and trough the jobs system?


No need to resubmit, just upgrade and apply when you have the necessary skills. No limit through the jobs system~  
PostPosted: Sun Jun 14, 2015 11:05 am
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Puppet Name: Kounetsubyou [Yellow Fever]
Puppet Appearance: Yellow Fever is a 5’7 ft moderate built figure, that to some may seem like a normal man with a mask on. The Mask it wears is lightly skeletal and birdlike denoting some resemblance to an Anbu mask with no markings, but it’s lower jaw being a gasmask also defeats that deceptive angle to those savvy enough to know the difference. This figure is dressed like a tattered mercenary or possibly a weathered hobo. Beyond it’s appearance, the clothing are loose and baggy. Underneath its strapped tarp clock is the mark of Miko’s village. Visibly on its person are holsters and places to place weapons or scrolls if the “ninja” so choose to add them to their person. This would be the other slight assumption in appearance that might assume this figure to be a mercenary, or ex shinobi soldier.

Puppet Description:
Kounetsubyou is a Puppet once used by Miko’s father that he developed with the help of his father. The way of the shinobi didn’t quite work out for him, so as time wore one and Miko came to inherit the aspirations of her grandfather she used her own prodigious skills with puppets to further develop Kounetsubyou. Made of a steel allow frame with titanium joints most of the other body is wooden with a leather skin layer providing a mannequin base for the puppet. The joints and mobility is much looser and are more akin to that of a gymnast, though what restrictions in motion are to help in the illusion of it being human. Other than the frame the mechanisms of the puppet are built out of a chakra molded alloy or conventional materials. The right arm is a senbon launcher; the left leg holds a whip like tether that the puppeteer had complete control over. The face-mask is gasmask that is creates smokescreens. The puppet wears a charka sensing reflector that acts by forming a cloud of chakra from a personal (Fuuin sealed) reserve to reflect or hamper the efforts of chakra sensing abilities. Wraapped over it’s person for the most part are tattered clothing with holsters for ninja armament. Hidden under the black half of its cloak is a chained sickle. The yellow striped half is made of chakra infused threads that increase defensive purposes.

Mechanism Summary:

• Right-arm has a poison senbon needle launcher which fires from the palm. Stocked with 200 senbon needles. Poison is an anti-coagulant that causes sudden symptoms of the flu (shakes, fever, rigid breathing, etc.) for two [2] posts.

• Yellow Fevers Gasmask works in the reverse releasing a yellow smoke that hides the puppet and makes it hard to even see your hand in front of your face. This smoke is not lethal but the smoke is held in a one time re-loadable (trough Jutsu) canister of mild tear gas. This smoke screen can be held for ten [10] post nonstop. The cloud coverage is twenty [20] cubic feet, when cut off mist last for two [2] posts before dissipating..

• The steel skeletal frame of Yellow Fever has a titanium joints and a mechanical air-pressure based hydraulic system that makes it movements and attacks more powerful in short order as well and cushioning/quieting its motions when not pressing a offensive with bolstered actions. It does this by building air pressure in the joints and then releasing it when the pressure in the joints is built up enough. This frame can on lock and break into segments if need be to fire any one of Yellow fevers limbs like a bottle rocket using the pressure from the hydraulics. [Takes one [1] post to build pressure in Joints]

• Yellow Fever‘s signature yellow striped tarp cloak is composed of numerous chakra infused fibers, allowing it to take on heavy hits by Level B-Rank Techniques of any charka affinity.

• Inside the shin of the left leg is a 2x2 centimeters thick 40 foot long prehensile segmented tether of with a bladed pincer claw tip that acts as a hose of a canister that can be filled with a liquid X_____X Poison that’s dripped from the left thigh to coat the cord. In it’s housing in the leg, while the first 8 Ft are left outside the body to wrap around the figure of the puppet being hidden by the draped clothing it wears. The dripping canister can be connected to draw the (X_____X) poison to spray in a mist or jet form from the “mouth” of the pincer if applied.

• Wields a chakra metal chain & sickle weapon that’s counter balanced by a hollow ball that holds smoke pellets that can be tactfully released from its round bell shaped appearance. The smoke pellets are mostly a distraction and unbalancing mechanisms taking effect for only seconds ( an instance in a post goes unseen by no doujutsu) [30 pellets held, chain 20 feet, blade cuts like a C-rank vacuum blade]

• Worn around its waist Yellow Fever holds a tool that works to disrupt sensing of chakra by causing an echo of the chakra it’s provided via a chakra metal chamber intended to be sealed by a Fuuin jutsu seal to better regulate the opening and closing of the released Kugutsu chakra. (provided the jutsu is known by the shinobi)Otherwise this hold for chakra s only temporary and is limited in the size and use of the chakra stored. Where in only 20 chakra from the user can be stored and is released all at once.

The chamber is found in the lower abdomen and intended hold a surplus of kugutsu chakra.. The Kugutsu chakra chamber is provided from the Puppeteer in the puppets preparation, and restocked by increments of 20 chakra point per post (outside of battle).
For sensors this mechanisms may only cause them to vaguely sense the position of the opponent, making their presence seem expanded rather than in one fixed point. Even for doujutsu it can create a fog of reflective chakra that doubles to cause a static cling to clouds of mist or dust to help visually conceal Yellow Fever even when faced with techniques to clear the air (futon). This mechanisms expends a single burst of ranked from it's reserve, that can permeates and cling to smoke screens, but this only last for two [2] post per use. The reflective nature isolates sensing to the cloud when caught inside, and prevents sensing inside when outside, un-ranked sensing is hampered as well in limitation. On it's own the cloud of chakra is only 30 cubic feet.


Other than looking for either an advanced medical nin with the Souzousaisei, or one of those folks that's experienced it off-hand--to create their own version--you'd have to do the same, yeah. In the long run, I ask that the storage technique be a fuuin custom, and not particularly of the puppet. Hm... this is for your Kumo-nin, yes? I believe Azeiel has one of these fuuin customs on his character there, if you'd like to skip the approval process for it and gain from him in-rp. Without skirting the edges of the auto-know 'no-no', I'd just hold a good long conversation with him there, and mention how taxing it is to keep using chakra all day long.

If, instead, you'd like for a copy of Shadow's dispersal mechanism, which holds up to 100 chakra and has several stipulations, we can do that.


I guess I'll just put in that it needs a fuuin seal to work properly but right now it's a incomplete space where I can pour in the kugutsu chakra required for the mechanism to work, but it can only be used once and once I do it's dead. to me unless I complete the chamber with the help of the supporting fuuin technique. So right now it's a one and done mechanism to do what i intended and requires to be restocked for it's one shot with my prepping of my puppet. Edited

Also when i do retain the means to outfit my puppet as I'd intended do i need to resubmit it for approval or do i just upgrade and apply as I please as long as i have the skill. Which also reminds me, is there any limit to how many puppets you make outside of the custom system and trough the jobs system?


No need to resubmit, just upgrade and apply when you have the necessary skills. No limit through the jobs system~
Good to know, Anyway for officiating and all that now, is the puppet approved now?  

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PostPosted: Tue Jun 16, 2015 1:47 pm
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Puppet Name: Kounetsubyou [Yellow Fever]
Puppet Appearance: Yellow Fever is a 5’7 ft moderate built figure, that to some may seem like a normal man with a mask on. The Mask it wears is lightly skeletal and birdlike denoting some resemblance to an Anbu mask with no markings, but it’s lower jaw being a gasmask also defeats that deceptive angle to those savvy enough to know the difference. This figure is dressed like a tattered mercenary or possibly a weathered hobo. Beyond it’s appearance, the clothing are loose and baggy. Underneath its strapped tarp clock is the mark of Miko’s village. Visibly on its person are holsters and places to place weapons or scrolls if the “ninja” so choose to add them to their person. This would be the other slight assumption in appearance that might assume this figure to be a mercenary, or ex shinobi soldier.

Puppet Description:
Kounetsubyou is a Puppet once used by Miko’s father that he developed with the help of his father. The way of the shinobi didn’t quite work out for him, so as time wore one and Miko came to inherit the aspirations of her grandfather she used her own prodigious skills with puppets to further develop Kounetsubyou. Made of a steel allow frame with titanium joints most of the other body is wooden with a leather skin layer providing a mannequin base for the puppet. The joints and mobility is much looser and are more akin to that of a gymnast, though what restrictions in motion are to help in the illusion of it being human. Other than the frame the mechanisms of the puppet are built out of a chakra molded alloy or conventional materials. The right arm is a senbon launcher; the left leg holds a whip like tether that the puppeteer had complete control over. The face-mask is gasmask that is creates smokescreens. The puppet wears a charka sensing reflector that acts by forming a cloud of chakra from a personal (Fuuin sealed) reserve to reflect or hamper the efforts of chakra sensing abilities. Wraapped over it’s person for the most part are tattered clothing with holsters for ninja armament. Hidden under the black half of its cloak is a chained sickle. The yellow striped half is made of chakra infused threads that increase defensive purposes.

Mechanism Summary:

• Right-arm has a poison senbon needle launcher which fires from the palm. Stocked with 200 senbon needles. Poison is an anti-coagulant that causes sudden symptoms of the flu (shakes, fever, rigid breathing, etc.) for two [2] posts.

• Yellow Fevers Gasmask works in the reverse releasing a yellow smoke that hides the puppet and makes it hard to even see your hand in front of your face. This smoke is not lethal but the smoke is held in a one time re-loadable (trough Jutsu) canister of mild tear gas. This smoke screen can be held for ten [10] post nonstop. The cloud coverage is twenty [20] cubic feet, when cut off mist last for two [2] posts before dissipating..

• The steel skeletal frame of Yellow Fever has a titanium joints and a mechanical air-pressure based hydraulic system that makes it movements and attacks more powerful in short order as well and cushioning/quieting its motions when not pressing a offensive with bolstered actions. It does this by building air pressure in the joints and then releasing it when the pressure in the joints is built up enough. This frame can on lock and break into segments if need be to fire any one of Yellow fevers limbs like a bottle rocket using the pressure from the hydraulics. [Takes one [1] post to build pressure in Joints]

• Yellow Fever‘s signature yellow striped tarp cloak is composed of numerous chakra infused fibers, allowing it to take on heavy hits by Level B-Rank Techniques of any charka affinity.

• Inside the shin of the left leg is a 2x2 centimeters thick 40 foot long prehensile segmented tether of with a bladed pincer claw tip that acts as a hose of a canister that can be filled with a liquid X_____X Poison that’s dripped from the left thigh to coat the cord. In it’s housing in the leg, while the first 8 Ft are left outside the body to wrap around the figure of the puppet being hidden by the draped clothing it wears. The dripping canister can be connected to draw the (X_____X) poison to spray in a mist or jet form from the “mouth” of the pincer if applied.

• Wields a chakra metal chain & sickle weapon that’s counter balanced by a hollow ball that holds smoke pellets that can be tactfully released from its round bell shaped appearance. The smoke pellets are mostly a distraction and unbalancing mechanisms taking effect for only seconds ( an instance in a post goes unseen by no doujutsu) [30 pellets held, chain 20 feet, blade cuts like a C-rank vacuum blade]

• Worn around its waist Yellow Fever holds a tool that works to disrupt sensing of chakra by causing an echo of the chakra it’s provided via a chakra metal chamber intended to be sealed by a Fuuin jutsu seal to better regulate the opening and closing of the released Kugutsu chakra. (provided the jutsu is known by the shinobi)Otherwise this hold for chakra s only temporary and is limited in the size and use of the chakra stored. Where in only 20 chakra from the user can be stored and is released all at once.

The chamber is found in the lower abdomen and intended hold a surplus of kugutsu chakra.. The Kugutsu chakra chamber is provided from the Puppeteer in the puppets preparation, and restocked by increments of 20 chakra point per post (outside of battle).
For sensors this mechanisms may only cause them to vaguely sense the position of the opponent, making their presence seem expanded rather than in one fixed point. Even for doujutsu it can create a fog of reflective chakra that doubles to cause a static cling to clouds of mist or dust to help visually conceal Yellow Fever even when faced with techniques to clear the air (futon). This mechanisms expends a single burst of ranked from it's reserve, that can permeates and cling to smoke screens, but this only last for two [2] post per use. The reflective nature isolates sensing to the cloud when caught inside, and prevents sensing inside when outside, un-ranked sensing is hampered as well in limitation. On it's own the cloud of chakra is only 30 cubic feet.


Other than looking for either an advanced medical nin with the Souzousaisei, or one of those folks that's experienced it off-hand--to create their own version--you'd have to do the same, yeah. In the long run, I ask that the storage technique be a fuuin custom, and not particularly of the puppet. Hm... this is for your Kumo-nin, yes? I believe Azeiel has one of these fuuin customs on his character there, if you'd like to skip the approval process for it and gain from him in-rp. Without skirting the edges of the auto-know 'no-no', I'd just hold a good long conversation with him there, and mention how taxing it is to keep using chakra all day long.

If, instead, you'd like for a copy of Shadow's dispersal mechanism, which holds up to 100 chakra and has several stipulations, we can do that.


I guess I'll just put in that it needs a fuuin seal to work properly but right now it's a incomplete space where I can pour in the kugutsu chakra required for the mechanism to work, but it can only be used once and once I do it's dead. to me unless I complete the chamber with the help of the supporting fuuin technique. So right now it's a one and done mechanism to do what i intended and requires to be restocked for it's one shot with my prepping of my puppet. Edited

Also when i do retain the means to outfit my puppet as I'd intended do i need to resubmit it for approval or do i just upgrade and apply as I please as long as i have the skill. Which also reminds me, is there any limit to how many puppets you make outside of the custom system and trough the jobs system?


No need to resubmit, just upgrade and apply when you have the necessary skills. No limit through the jobs system~
Good to know, Anyway for officiating and all that now, is the puppet approved now?

Mhm, yup.  
PostPosted: Mon Nov 30, 2015 10:50 am

Character: Elizabeth Lange
Link to profile: http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?page=3&t=23971705#369674251
Puppet Name: Deployable Countermeasures
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Puppet Description: Elizabeth being part of the uhv had to study the gear of her faction as part of her basic training. She knew how it functioned for detecting chakra adepts and decided that she would need a way to counter this in the future. Working hard and with many headaches and smashed fingers she eventually figured out two complex mechanisms that would allow her to engage in guerrilla warfare with both adepts and soldiers at her desecration. Hence this deployable immobile puppet. The unit houses a homemade battery based on the uhv's own batterys that needs to be recharged after every use regardless of how long the unit is actually deployed.

Mechanism Summary:
• Chakra based countermeasure: The device pulses a single wide area pulse to map its surroundings taking up one turn of its deployment before blanketing the area in false chakra signals equal to that of the shinobi that built the device. The system calibrates this false chakra reading through its initial scan when the user touches the device, completing a minor circuit. These readings are visible to dojutsu users as ghosts of the person the reading is showing, the false signals hiding behind various bits of cover and occasionally moving this way and that based on a random algorithm. This is designed to entirely fool sensors and the few eye techniques used for tracking.
• Electronic countermeasure: The second of the countermeasures, this particular setting was designed to fool uhv thermals and various sensor gear. It mimics the chakra countermeasure but specifically targets the helmets of the uhv in general, giving false readings in a large area to any uhv soldier attempting to track her down. This mode also has the benefit of scrambling any communication gear to the point of indescribable static and squelching. Every three turns the various filters on uhv gear will wash over with static with this device setting active.
• Scorched Earth: The final failsafe of this device. If tampered with; without being deactivated by liz specificly, the device will cook off with the force of an A ranked blast. This should be considered non-elemental and players will have to deal with the actual effects of an explosion. The charge is based on a demolition charge in use currently by the UHV shock troopers. This blast encompasses a primary 18 meter radius, with a 36 meter secondary radius.

Rules:
• Once activated the device lasts 10 posts before the battery is completely drained and will need to be charged.
• Only one device may be on the field at a time.
• If the devices modes are switched it must be done through manually activating a switch and will take an additional post of calibration before the effects are active.
• The range of the effected zone for the device is in a 150 meter radius.
 

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