Custom Technique Submission

[Ephemeral Ozymandias]

My apologies to both of you for the delay.

NecroPlant

Denied
I am afraid that full custom styles are not permitted at this time. You may resubmit these techniques in a non-style format.

Kondo Kaicho

Approved  

[NecroPlant]

Ephemeral Ozymandias

My apologies to both of you for the delay.

NecroPlant

Denied
I am afraid that full custom styles are not permitted at this time. You may resubmit these techniques in a non-style format.

Kondo Kaicho

Approved

They're just techniques. Just formatted as a style to look nicer. Do you need the errata that the techniques don't qualify for bonuses that would otherwise be attributed to styles? Because there's absolutely no mechanical function changing. Unless the issue is ultimately the techniques which are 'training' in which case that's a much more straightforward mechanical issue than something being denied for aesthetic alone.  

[Ephemeral Ozymandias]

NecroPlant

Ephemeral Ozymandias

My apologies to both of you for the delay.

NecroPlant

Denied
I am afraid that full custom styles are not permitted at this time. You may resubmit these techniques in a non-style format.

Kondo Kaicho

Approved

They're just techniques. Just formatted as a style to look nicer. Do you need the errata that the techniques don't qualify for bonuses that would otherwise be attributed to styles? Because there's absolutely no mechanical function changing. Unless the issue is ultimately the techniques which are 'training' in which case that's a much more straightforward mechanical issue than something being denied for aesthetic alone.

No custom styles, period, unless you are using the teaching profession. That issue has been discussed and shot down multiple times in crew, including by you because creating a whole style unique to one RPC with techniques that grant bonuses and flow together was deemed unbalanced and cumbersome for the approval team in those discussions. We have also been telling members no custom styles for months and you will not be the exception. We also currently lack guidelines for what makes a custom style balanced and legitimate or not despite your intention of pure aesthetic flair. If the mods vote to include custom styles then I will reconsider this decision. If you want to resubmit the techniques then you are free to do so.  

[BIG GUCCI EDO]

▰ Character: Nanyo Uchiha
▰ Link to profile: [x]
▰ Curse of Treason ] | Rank S | Fuininjutsu [ Cursed Seal ]| Cost [ Spiritual ]
A curse Given to him for his crimes against Konoha, Nanyo was branded with a Powerful Yin Seal. with a debilitating curse which plagues him with nightmares and Tier 2 insanity as it activates.

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Mattysandwich

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[Evanescently Magnificent]

BIG GUCCI EDO

This is self inflicted?

Approved!  

[Evanescently Magnificent]

Way late resubmit due to my bloodline changing!

▰ Rip and Tear | Rank: S+ | Class: Bloodline | Cost: Chakra
The user can create a large 100 by 100 foot dome of stationary sanguine chakra around herself and any foes in the area. Those trapped in the dome, whether friend or foe a like, will have their blood slowly ripped from their bodies and gathered in any direction or manner Lahlil chooses ( Able to be used to fill her blood pool ). While fighting inside the dome all targets will suffer the full damage of this technique over time as if it were bleeding trauma. Meaning the trauma that would be deducted all at once as if this jutsu hit directly, is instead subtracted over a period of posts equal to a traditional bleed effect ( 5 posts as per the Ketsueki Clan page ). This bleed stacks in the same manner as other bleed based trauma can, but is only triggered on each enemy's second activation of their post. Allowing each a chance to either escape or defend by destroying the barrier. Lasts for [ 3 ] posts.

NecroPlant

I think you're sick so don't worry about this too much!

Mattysandwich

Ephemeral Ozymandias

Forgive me for quoting you so much!

 

[Bodhisattva Empress]

▰Character: Kaia Gaia Uzumaki
▰ Link to profile: [x]
▰ Kurama: Kaia Kiss & Caress!
▰Category: Enchantment
▰Rank: B-S+ Rank
▰Primary Sense: Chakra
▰Additional Senses: [ Sight, Sound, & Touch ]
▰Base Duration: 6 Posts
▰Upkeep: 50% of the rank in use
▰Trigger: A shift in mannerism that is not congruent with the context of the situation. IE: Smiling in the face of danger or even cringing at it.
▰Source: Ego
▰Status Effect: None
▰Description: In this genjutsu the user shifts in facial expression and/or body language. The user generates a frequency in the target's(s') body that arouses maximum pleasure causing them to lose all ambition. Once this technique is done, the target will permanently develop an unspoken loyalty to the user although they are not a slave in any sense. The user must apply this technique at the rank of the individual target or if used on a mass the user must apply this technique at the rank of the highest ranked target. The user must maintain the upkeep to satisfy the addict for whenever the upkeep is not paid it will cause all those effected to go into a rage with the user. All logic goes out the window for the fiend without their fix. The user or anyone else who stands in the way of this vice are subject to hostility, violence, and uncontrollable rage. The target must receive tier 3 pain for B-A Rank usage of this technique and tier 4 pain for S-S+ Rank usage of this technique in order to dispel this genjutsu. Must be of Kurama descent to learn this technique


▰Character: Kaia Gaia Uzumaki
▰ Link to profile: [x]
▰ Uzumaki: BELIEVE IT!!! | Rank B-S+ | Fuuinjutsu [ Non-elemental ]| 40-320pts. [ Spiritual ]
In this Fuuinjutsu the user forms a seal at their finger tip, which they apply directly to a target preventing the victim from being freed from any genjutsu they were under at the time of contact without first removing the seal. The chakra applied to this technique must be equal or greater than the body rank of the target. Any Fuuinjutsu that removes a seal can remove this seal or applying chakra equivalent in rank. However, after removing the seal each genjutsu active will have to be deactivated and paid for individually.

▰Character: Kaia Gaia Uzumaki
▰ Link to profile: [x]
▰ Life Sense: Extendo Clip | Rank B-S+ | Sensory [ Non-elemental ]| 40-320pts. [ Spiritual ]
This sensory technique allows the user to sense both organic and inorganic subjects surrounding a subject that is within the range of, "Life Sense". This allows an accurate depiction of events and the further out a subject is in the limits of "Life Sense's" range, then the further the range potential of this technique. This technique requires a subject to actually be in range of, "Life Sense" and this technique's radius doubles in range per rank starting at Rank B [ 60 meters ]. At Rank S+ the technique's range continues to double as long as the doubled chakra cost is paid. The upkeep for this technique is a cost of 20 chakra at B-Rank and doubles every rank. Must be a Sakkakugan user of Scholar Class to use this technique.

▰Character: Kaia Gaia Uzumaki
▰ Link to profile: [x]
▰ Life Sense: Rolling Thunder Demi-Goddess | Rank B | Fuuinjutsu [ Non-elemental ]| 40 pts. [ Spiritual ]
This Fuinijutsu is the result of when an Uzumaki-Kurama crossbreed uses the sensory range of, "Life Sense" and plays with the "Flying Thunder God" concept. The user touches the subject sending it to any desired area within the range of "Life Sense" and "Life Sense: Extendo Clip". To use this technique, "Life Sense: Extendo Clip" must be active. This technique is exclusive to Scholar class: Erudite Academic Uzumaki-Kurama. Although this technique relies on, "Life Sense" it is not passive and may not be used to auto-hit.

▰Character: Kaia Gaia Uzumaki
▰ Link to profile: [x]
▰ Life Sense: Clapped | Rank B-S+ | Fuuinjutsu [ Non-elemental ]| 40-320pts. [ Spiritual ]
This Fuinijutsu is used after using, "Life Sense: Rolling Thunder Demi-Goddess. Once the target is in mid transmission to their next location the user activates a handseal causing the transmitted subject to experience extreme compression in all directions. This technique must be used at the same rank as the target's body rank to cripple them before they reappear.

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Mattysandwich

Evanescently Magnificent

 

[Evanescently Magnificent]

VIII-IX-MCMXCI

Just a few things!

So first off this is just really easy but change all your simples into spirituals! A good rule of thumb is that if you're using nothing but chakra to cast it then it's a spiritual or 'ninjutsu' whereas if it's nothing but stamina (using you're body to hit or run) it's a simple tag!

Second, for the Kaia Kiss & Caress! the pain breaking the gen is going to have to follow the rank it was used at. B + A = tier 3, S + S+ = tier 4. Also I'll just need you to make a note the upkeep so that it's always equal half of the cost you put into the jutsu as per the upkeep rules with other gen. Finally just to make sure you know becaue I noticed you used the word injury and not pain, breaking gen by pain uses the pain system in the gen section and not trauma.

Now thirdly, Rolling Thunder Demi-Goddess just needs it be clear that this is an attack action. Meaning you can't just auto hit someone with it even if it is something as simple as a touch.

The rest should be good to go!  

[Bodhisattva Empress]

All edited and added a technique at the end.

▰Character: Kaia Gaia Uzumaki
▰ Link to profile: [x]
▰ Kurama: Kaia Kiss & Caress!
▰Category: Enchantment
▰Rank: B-S+ Rank
▰Primary Sense: Chakra
▰Additional Senses: [ Sight, Sound, & Touch ]
▰Base Duration: 6 Posts
▰Upkeep: 50% of the rank in use
▰Trigger: A shift in mannerism that is not congruent with the context of the situation. IE: Smiling in the face of danger or even cringing at it.
▰Source: Ego
▰Status Effect: None
▰Description: In this genjutsu the user shifts in facial expression and/or body language. The user generates a frequency in the target's(s') body that arouses maximum pleasure causing them to lose all ambition. Once this technique is done, the target will permanently develop an unspoken loyalty to the user although they are not a slave in any sense. The user must apply this technique at the rank of the individual target or if used on a mass the user must apply this technique at the rank of the highest ranked target. The user must maintain the upkeep to satisfy the addict for whenever the upkeep is not paid it will cause all those effected to go into a rage with the user. All logic goes out the window for the fiend without their fix. The user or anyone else who stands in the way of this vice are subject to hostility, violence, and uncontrollable rage. The target must receive tier 3 pain for B-A Rank usage of this technique and tier 4 pain for S-S+ Rank usage of this technique in order to dispel this genjutsu. Must be of Kurama descent to learn this technique


▰Character: Kaia Gaia Uzumaki
▰ Link to profile: [x]
▰ Uzumaki: BELIEVE IT!!! | Rank B-S+ | Fuuinjutsu [ Non-elemental ]| 40-320pts. [ Spiritual ]
In this Fuuinjutsu the user forms a seal at their finger tip, which they apply directly to a target preventing the victim from being freed from any genjutsu they were under at the time of contact without first removing the seal. The chakra applied to this technique must be equal or greater than the body rank of the target. Any Fuuinjutsu that removes a seal can remove this seal or applying chakra equivalent in rank. However, after removing the seal each genjutsu active will have to be deactivated and paid for individually.

▰Character: Kaia Gaia Uzumaki
▰ Link to profile: [x]
▰ Life Sense: Extendo Clip | Rank B-S+ | Sensory [ Non-elemental ]| 40-320pts. [ Spiritual ]
This sensory technique allows the user to sense both organic and inorganic subjects surrounding a subject that is within the range of, "Life Sense". This allows an accurate depiction of events and the further out a subject is in the limits of "Life Sense's" range, then the further the range potential of this technique. This technique requires a subject to actually be in range of, "Life Sense" and this technique's radius doubles in range per rank starting at Rank B [ 60 meters ]. At Rank S+ the technique's range continues to double as long as the doubled chakra cost is paid. The upkeep for this technique is a cost of 20 chakra at B-Rank and doubles every rank. Must be a Sakkakugan user of Scholar Class to use this technique.

▰Character: Kaia Gaia Uzumaki
▰ Link to profile: [x]
▰ Life Sense: Rolling Thunder Demi-Goddess | Rank B | Fuuinjutsu [ Non-elemental ]| 40 pts. [ Spiritual ]
This Fuinijutsu is the result of when an Uzumaki-Kurama crossbreed uses the sensory range of, "Life Sense" and plays with the "Flying Thunder God" concept. The user touches the subject sending it to any desired area within the range of "Life Sense" and "Life Sense: Extendo Clip". To use this technique, "Life Sense: Extendo Clip" must be active. This technique is exclusive to Scholar class: Erudite Academic Uzumaki-Kurama. Although this technique relies on, "Life Sense" it is not passive and may not be used to auto-hit.

▰Character: Kaia Gaia Uzumaki
▰ Link to profile: [x]
▰ Life Sense: Clapped | Rank B-S+ | Fuuinjutsu [ Non-elemental ]| 40-320pts. [ Spiritual ]
This Fuinijutsu is used after using, "Life Sense: Rolling Thunder Demi-Goddess. Once the target is in mid transmission to their next location the user activates a handseal causing the transmitted subject to experience extreme compression in all directions. This technique must be used at the same rank as the target's body rank to cripple them before they reappear.

▰Character: Kaia Gaia Uzumaki
▰ Link to profile: [x]
▰ Chakra Chains: IKeepDatMfk'nThangOnMe | Rank S+ | Fuuinjutsu [ Non-elemental ]| 320pts. [ Spiritual ]
After using "Chakra Chains: Barrier [ Kemono Fuuin: Kekkai ]" the user goes to the epicenter of the barrier and forms a handseal that turns the barrier walls into devastating implosive power that will destroy everything inside the barrier stopping perfectly to leave a 20 foot radius around the user. If the user is killed this small area will be destroyed as well.

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Mattysandwich

Evanescently Magnificent

 

[Bodhisattva Empress]

▰Character: Kaia Gaia Uzumaki
▰ Link to profile: [x]
▰ Uzumaki: F#%k'N Barrage!!! | S+ | Fuuinjutsu [ Non-elemental ]| 320pts. [ Spiritual ]
In this Fuuinjutsu the user creates handseals and forms miniature "Defense of the Vortex [ Uzu no Mamoru ]" seals at the end of their extremities and joints to take on the the same properties as it's parent technique. Upkeep of this technique is a cost of 160 chakra.

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▰ Defense of the Vortex [ Uzu no Mamoru ] | Rank A
The Uzumaki will either create a seal on the ground, or perform a small string of handseals. Immediately after, a spiraling shield of 'water' - truthfully a sealing barrier - will appear before the Uzumaki, defending them from attacks and swiveling to their flank and back to protect them from any direction necessary. The dimensions of the shield can be changed, and it can be picked up and wielded. Finally, by paying the additional cost, the shield can become a different sealing technique of the user's choice for no additional activation.

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Mattysandwich

Evanescently Magnificent

 

[Ichengo Angelus]

▰ Character: Iksinisius Alkinysisius
▰ Link to profile: [x]

▰ Embrace [ Ukeireru ] | Rank X | Keystone [ N/A ]| Cost [ Ninjutsu ]
This ability can only be activated after Iksin has used 6 or more jutsu. When activated chakra seems to begin to visibly flow from Iksin's body in an almost serene state. His tenketsu are more lax, and allow chakra to flow through his body easier and as such allow him to use chakra in a more efficient way, and generally move in a more efficient way. While active his Speed and Agility are increased by 1 per rank, based on activation rank used. [i.e. at E +1 to each at C +3 to each.] In addition to this, Ninjutsu do not require hand seals in order to activate, however chakra that flows from him visibly shifts and takes the same time hand seals would take to form jutsu he would be using. Iksin also becomes able to shift the trajectory of projectile ninjutsu by expending an E-Rank amount of chakra. The trajectory shift can be as drastic as completely turning around. When this is activated while Overload is activated, the chakra cloak covering seems to almost calm, lighten, and become more translucent and makes Iksin seem almost ethereal. This jutsu gains an additional effect if it's been activated while Overload is activated, and Iksin has used 6 or more jutsu while Overload was activated, allowing Iksin to, for the duration that both Overload and Embrace are activated, extend the maximum range of ninjutsu based on the activation rank of this jutsu. [ie, if this is activated as a C-Rank he can extend jutsu range by 80 feet.] This jutsu lasts 3 posts per rank based on it's activation rank, with an upkeep of 2 ranks below activation rank. [ie. activation at B-Rank lasts 12 posts, and has a D-Rank upkeep cost.]

▰ Overload [ Oobaa Roodo ] | Rank X | Keystone [ N/A ]| Cost [ Ninjutsu ]
This ability can only be activated after Iksin has used 6 or more jutsu. When activated chakra practically bursts forth from his body, covering him in a layer of visible chakra and making his human form unable to be seen under the chakra as his chakra flow seems to increase exponentially as if ready to burst, enhancing his physicality. This chakra cloak of sorts also covers any weaponry. While active his Strength and Endurance are increased by 1 per rank, based on activation rank used. [i.e. at E +1 to each at C +3 to each.] In addition to this, while active Iksin will levitate a few inches off the ground at all times unless he chooses not to and descends from jumps much slower than normal. Iksin also causes Taijutsu and Bukijutsu simple techniques to be considered Complex while this is active due to the chakra cloak covering of his body and weaponry. When this is active while Embrace is active the almost tranquil flowing chakra from Iksin's body becomes more erratic seeming, yet remains in control almost stormlike. This jutsu gains an additional effect if it's been activated while Embrace is activated, and Iksin has used 6 or more jutsu while Embrace was activated. Upon activation with those conditions met, Overload causes a chakra explosion with a radius based on it's activation rank. [ie, D-Rank is a 40 foot chakra explosion.] This jutsu lasts 3 posts per rank based on it's activation rank, with an upkeep of 2 ranks below activation rank. [ie. activation at B-Rank lasts 12 posts, and has a D-Rank upkeep cost.]

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[Hurrak]

Updating - Description, name, and colored bits are different from the original design
▰ Elemental Extension | Rank B - S+| Kugutsu [ Lightning, Water, Earth]
Duration [2] posts, Upkeep [-2 ranks below initial activation amount of chakra] upon every [3] Posts
Activation, without chakra, required to change elements.

tab On active, deployed puppets this technique will add a slight coat of chakra generally invisible to the naked eye. Initial activation requires an element selected and . Only one element may be present on a single puppet at a time. Swapping elements requires Sadayo to use an activation per single puppet [1 activation - 1 puppet, 2 activation - 2 puppet]. However, only a total of 3 puppets may share a single element.
Active elements are only as strong as the basic attacks used by participating puppets and their weapons, accessories, etc and supplement a physical attack with an effect. Ninjutsu and genjutsu used through the puppet may not receive any benefits from this effect. This technique also functions on willing auto-attached characters (RPCS/NPCS). If connections from strings are lost on protected puppets then this effect is terminated immediately.
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B :Adds an element up to 3 controlled puppets
A :Adds an element up to 6 controlled puppets
S :Adds an element up to 9 controlled puppets
S+: Adds an element to 12 or more puppets.
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Lightning Effect : Shock. Paralysis application possible at either T2 or T3 based on the applied rank and potency of the technique. Spreads throughout the puppet naturally due to the composition of metal features on Sadayo’s puppets. Up to 10 feet range.
Earth Effect : Earth Effect : Ability to deflect projectiles at or below the applied rank and potency of the technique. Successful physical attacks knock [20] points of stamina out of the target once per activation of the puppet with this effect active.
Water Effect: Ability to strike through incoming fire attacks up to one rank higher than the executed technique's rank. Lightning techniques cost [10] more for opponents to evade.

Evanescently Magnificent

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Fixed up the earth a little.
Sorry, double quote.
I didn't realize I was editing this post when I actually edited and DELETED the other technique being approved

▰ Character: Sadayo Soga
▰ Link to profile: [x]
▰ Last Resort, Major Elemental Buffer| Rank B-S+ | Kugutsu [ Maruton ]| Cost [ Spiritual
Upkeep [-2 ranks below initial activation amount of chakra] to be paid upon every [3] Posts.
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A layer of ranked elemental chakra, intertwined with her strings, covers active puppets to temporarily protect their composition from abilities designed to break down, melt, or passively damage through offensive elemental in order to deteriorate their form and mechanisms. If connections from strings are lost on protected puppets then this effect lasts [2] posts before expiring and becoming exposed to the harsh elements. Functions through puppets only. May stack with the custom Elemental Extension.  

[Evanescently Magnificent]

VIII-IX-MCMXCI

Approved!

Ichengo Angelus

Just one problem with Overload! Nothing of custom make may apply overwhelming! It's a rule we have in place to prevent mimicking of disciplines sweatdrop Also just something to make you aware of, when increasing your stats you are still limited by class caps!

Hurrak

Just one small thing! For the earth effect it just needs to follow our rules of only applying per activation and not per each individual 'hit' (since we have jutsu that can do like upwards of twenty punches at once). If you like though you can absolutely increase that amount deduced to make up for that!  

[Ichengo Angelus]

Evanescently Magnificent

Just one problem with Overload! Nothing of custom make may apply overwhelming! It's a rule we have in place to prevent mimicking of disciplines sweatdrop Also just something to make you aware of, when increasing your stats you are still limited by class caps!

My apologies, I think I just worded it wrong. The custom isn't meant to be worded as if it's giving overwhelming to something, more like overwhelming affects that part of the custom. So if it's used as directed, adding C-Rank resource to a jutsu instead of +20 it'd be +30. I've edited the wording to reflect that, and if that's also not acceptable I'll just remove it next time.  

[Evanescently Magnificent]

Ichengo Angelus

Evanescently Magnificent

Just one problem with Overload! Nothing of custom make may apply overwhelming! It's a rule we have in place to prevent mimicking of disciplines sweatdrop Also just something to make you aware of, when increasing your stats you are still limited by class caps!

My apologies, I think I just worded it wrong. The custom isn't meant to be worded as if it's giving overwhelming to something, more like overwhelming affects that part of the custom. So if it's used as directed, adding C-Rank resource to a jutsu instead of +20 it'd be +30. I've edited the wording to reflect that, and if that's also not acceptable I'll just remove it next time.

Ah I think I just need further clarification, you mean to say that this would simply turn your jutsu into X ranked techniques useable up to the rank overload was used at then? Because adding resources while not changing a jutsu's rank is just essentially what overwhelming is ^ ^