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Posted: Sun Apr 21, 2013 8:51 pm
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Posted: Mon Apr 22, 2013 12:36 am
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Posted: Mon Apr 22, 2013 12:46 am
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Posted: Mon Apr 22, 2013 2:03 am
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Posted: Mon Apr 22, 2013 4:03 am
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Posted: Mon Apr 22, 2013 6:16 am
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Posted: Mon Apr 22, 2013 7:47 am
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Posted: Mon Apr 22, 2013 9:22 am
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Posted: Mon Apr 22, 2013 12:21 pm
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I don't think that qualifies you as being a psycho. x3 I don't really think anything qualifies on making someone a psycho; I mean, when I hear the word, I think of a certain kind of person, but really all a psycho is is just another person like any other, just different. And other people judge them for it. xP Oh my gosh, that was depressing. D: It was well written though; the only thing I noticed wrong with it was at first, like the first paragraph I think there were commas where they weren't suppose to be, but I'm not a grammar God so I'm probably wrong. xD There also wasn't really a lot of suspense which is very big, but it does make the reader's curious and want to finish it, like a good introduction that's just like "oh my glob, what happened" so that's good. c: Alrighty, and no problem~ cx
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