Did He Really Have to Die?

[YourGuardianAngel18]

Well I'm not going to post the actual story because it's 12 chapters long. So here is the link to it.
Comments are always appreciated!
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2737317/1/Did_He_Really_Have_to_Die  

[catt725]

I'll have to read that... i haven't gotten around to it, but when i get the chance, i will.  

[YourGuardianAngel18]

You better! I haven't had a comment on that story in over a year.  

[xX Kaede-chan Xx]

I'll be sure to read it one of these days! And I'll leave a comment too.  

[YourGuardianAngel18]

-waits for comments-  

[katt725]

so far it's good... it keeps saying "Bad Response From Server", so it'll take me awhile to get past the third chapter...  

[catt725]

I read the whole thing... it's so good! sad in the end, but good.  

[_oXo_Rose_of_Death_oXo_]

Too many deaths...
Too friggin' short...
Occasional mistakes...
(I complain a lot, really,
So don't mind me.)
Other than that,
It's pretty good.
-peace-  

[hiramekiyuri]

hahahahh. I'm just starting to read it, and when you said "Lt. Hawkeye," I immediately realized it was fma characters...since there was Roy too....
I love them, so I like it so far... it seems to be pretty good o_o
okay, I'll keep reading.  

[hiramekiyuri]

Well, it's good. And seriously sad. I liked the last line. It totally ended it.
Hmm
The situation doesn't...seem likely though. XD
but that doesn't really matter since it's called fanfiction for a reason.
It is short, but that's why I read it. o_o  

[The Rockbell Girl]

Wow that's really sad.  

[hiramekiyuri]

Yep >: