[If you're going to give honest critique, I'd prefer it on the deviation itself or via a PM. Of course, this is a bit of an inconvenience, so feel free to post it here P: )
Manatees by a Raspberry Patch
Lyricism is nothing to this
A kiss on the lips,
And a pull at the gown
What emotion wonts our action
But lust?
I hand him the coffee
A prize of a tense morning ritual--
Smiles, lingering hazes, laughs at the sudden shock that the liquid is hot.
Recalls of mornings before this.
And I want.
The dark disguise could not come fast enough;
Our friends...must not know.
Danger is in the eye of the beholder.
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