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Yush?
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 66%  [ 4 ]
Yesssss!
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Total Votes : 6


[S]ilver[C]haos

PostPosted: Fri May 02, 2008 7:27 am


Okay i havent been in here for a rather long time (we're talking years LOL)

So i thought id better post something because i miss it.

Here's some vampire gal or a very strict teacher? i dunno but ive just got a new paint shop pro and i wanna see what you think? the nose and lips dont even go there LOL wonky as hell.

Oh and this is like my second try on PsP so be gentle with me redface domokun

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PostPosted: Fri May 02, 2008 9:46 am


confused

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[S]ilver[C]haos

PostPosted: Fri May 02, 2008 12:33 pm


dum de dum dum


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OOps sorry. i gots bored.
 
PostPosted: Fri May 02, 2008 12:47 pm


The guild forums move very slowly (especially when it's not the weekend >_< ). Please do not bump your topic unless it is about to fall off the first page.

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hollisterlovee

PostPosted: Fri May 02, 2008 7:47 pm


i like it, overall. if its a vampire maybe you could have had a little bit of a fang poking over the lip. haha and the nose does look like a bit queer, but not really noticeably bad.
PostPosted: Sat May 03, 2008 2:33 pm


yah the nose is totally Oh gosh! i was doing it without ym glasses on and at the end i was like woman what have you done to her, shes going to have a nose complex for the rest of her life!!!

but ty. domokun  

[S]ilver[C]haos


Frostii

PostPosted: Sat May 03, 2008 6:42 pm


Why is she so shiny? D: He boobs, her necktie, and red sleeve things have a shine to them. It looks like she's wearing red plastic. > w< She's not shaded, but theres plenty of light on her.

I don't suggest showing fang on the lip. Unless her fangs stick wayway out, they wouldn't show at all. Her lips bight be pushed from behind, but I doubt it.

I do like that you took light and everything into account, though.
PostPosted: Sun May 04, 2008 5:50 am


thats because she has plastic fetish duh! and like i said in the first post i dont know what to call her ie (vampire strict teacher i dunoo) but thanks anyway.



Lol @ plastic.

[S]ilver[C]haos


ShadowyRainbow

PostPosted: Tue May 06, 2008 6:01 pm


as stated before if its a vampire i think there should be maybe a fang sticking out of here lips and in my opinion it looks to me like the clothes in the torso are too tight, unless they were ment to be like that.
PostPosted: Wed May 07, 2008 4:13 pm


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Overall, I think it's pretty nice. She does look shiny... O.O
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xChanel


NamiKennedy

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PostPosted: Wed Jun 30, 2010 1:56 pm


the nose is BLEH and the mouth is lopsided but other than that i like it biggrin {no fangs PLEASE i think it would look cheesy}
PostPosted: Wed Jun 30, 2010 4:49 pm


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