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 Posted: Wed Jun 11, 2008 9:31 pm
 critique needed! Edit: Thanks a bunch!
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Posted: Fri Jun 13, 2008 4:51 am
Wow! That's really good! Just as a comment to help you (no offense intended) make her neck a bit thinner and maybe even out her boobs a little bit, they're slightly crooked. Maybe straighten up her shoulders, but you have amazing talent! Keep on drawing!
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Posted: Fri Jun 13, 2008 9:03 pm
free_river22 Wow! That's really good! Just as a comment to help you (no offense intended) make her neck a bit thinner and maybe even out her boobs a little bit, they're slightly crooked. Maybe straighten up her shoulders, but you have amazing talent! Keep on drawing!
AWESOME WORK, THOUGH!
-- hope this was helpful nd perhaps plump her lips a bit biggrin
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Posted: Fri Jun 13, 2008 9:05 pm
You draw better then me and I'm not trying to sound rude but the neck looks to thick and to long
sweatdrop
that makes me sound mean
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Posted: Sat Jun 14, 2008 7:26 am
omg thats realli good. i think the neck should b a tad bit thinner andd u should color the rest in :] thats all i got here it looks really good
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Posted: Sat Jun 14, 2008 3:33 pm
I think it's really great too! xD
I agree that the neck should be a bit shorter and thinner. Also, the top part of the hair looks kinda clumpy, so maybe add a bit more detail and drawing the hair in smaller strands? I hope this helps!
But seriously, it's way awesomer than anything I could draw. So good job! x]]]]
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Posted: Sat Jun 14, 2008 4:53 pm
I like the skin. Its great! heart 4.51 / 5! You should colour in the cloths. Unless you wanna keep it white, in which case you should shade it in more.
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Posted: Sun Jun 15, 2008 6:19 am
I think she is fine other than her mouth.
it kinda bugs me.... eek
but GOOD JOB, nicely done!
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Posted: Fri Jun 20, 2008 10:50 pm
i think its fine! i like it, and although i am working hard at getting better you have obviously won supiourity over me. the imperfections make it better.
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Posted: Thu Jun 26, 2008 2:58 pm
Critique=
The neck, as previously mentioned.
The mouth, I think it should be raised a little or something (if you need to then bring up the nose a little too, a little, like a mm at most). And there should be some depth to the mouth so it doesn't look like just a curved line thing (perhaps a small line to indicate the bottom of the bottom lip, as commonly used). Right now it just kinda looks WAY too close to the chin and a little too.... I dunno... strange.
The shoulders should be slightly more curved too 'cause shoulders don't (usually) go just straight down in lines. There will be a certain arch to them that will go back up into the rounded shoulders. I don't know why, but that kinda bothered me.
The arms are generally fine, but they look kinda (just a tad bit too thin), but you don't need to totally correct this since it's not too noticeable.
This picture is rather good! I really like it. Oh. And when coloring, the neck should have a little more depth where the sternocleidomastoid muscles are (ya know, those two angled muscles in your neck that you can generally see). But Good JOB! 3nodding
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Posted: Sun Jun 29, 2008 10:08 pm
It's very cute & i love the skin!
The..uh..i think right boob should kind over lap the arm & the neak should be thinner :]
l0lz
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Posted: Tue Jul 01, 2008 2:05 am
NICE! heart But why do I think that it somehow resembles Near from deth Note. haha xd
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