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Moar Human like & looking for advice,

MissDeerFace

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Posted: Thu Jul 03, 2008 10:06 am

:3 you've seen my chibi style so I wanted to show my more realistic,

The only problem is theres a huge difreance between my Digital art and my hand drawn.

Even my own art teacher has told me this. My proportions just seem odd when I try and draw on my oekaki my proportions just seem so much more off I don't know why..

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^^^^^ Please Ignore my hands...I prefered the face anyway..^^^^

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Posted: Thu Jul 03, 2008 11:31 am

Hey, your last one isn't bad. I really like it actually; it's really cute. And the middle one is fairly cute as well. The first one is sweatdrop kinda worse than the others when it comes to proportion. I don't really know what kind of advice you want. But I can say that:
For the second one, obviously, the hands are off. You knew that. Here's a hand tutorial: http://odduckoasis.deviantart.com/art/Hands-Tutorial-23565813
'Case you wanted to fix those.
For the first one, Here's a body tutorial: http://kitten-chan.deviantart.com/art/Tutorial-Human-Figure-36369693

Although, if you already know how to do proportions and stuff on normal paper then I don't know how necessary those things'll be. I don't really have any tips to help you do stuff better on the computer vs. paper 'cause I don't know your comparative skills. Did that make sense? I dunno. Well, even if you do know how to do those things, perhaps you could use those tutorials as reference anyway. They're pretty useful.

By the way, for the first girl, her arm looks stiff. And if her head is thrown back like that, her hair would be too so we wouldn't be able to see as much hair as you have showing on the other side of her head; that could be worked on (and that one part of the hair kinda makes it look like she's got a small patch of hair on her chin; facial hair). That was critique for you.

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MissDeerFace

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Posted: Thu Jul 03, 2008 9:15 pm

Thank you...That was Exactly What I was hoping for X3

When I can get a scanner in my hand Ill show off some of my better proportions in my Traditonal work.. I promise =3

And I'll make sure to work on my proportions, and study the tutorials you linked for me.

Thank you

Posted: Fri Jul 04, 2008 1:22 am

OH good. Glad I helped. mrgreen

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Hayashi Kiko

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Posted: Sat Jul 05, 2008 9:50 pm

I like your last pic! Look so kawaii~! Nya~ 3nodding

Posted: Mon Jul 07, 2008 2:11 pm

thank you... :3

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