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PostPosted: Sun Jul 06, 2008 4:24 pm


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PostPosted: Sun Jul 06, 2008 6:51 pm


ish cute 3nodding
i think you should've added more neck nd maybe some of the shoulder so it didn't look so much as a floating head but i like it so, good yob

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PostPosted: Sun Jul 06, 2008 11:13 pm


It's pretty well done. I really like the blindfold and the skin and the text is very professional looking. 3nodding
However, it feels like you used the smudge tool for most of her. I mean, that's fine if you don't overdo it. In this picture, it just feels like the lines blended too much, like with the hair and the crown or the hair and the face. It was mostly the hair that got me actually. Maybe if they were a little less calculated (like swifter lines) with sharper lines (not such a soft brush for painting, more hardness). Then, you would maximize your abilities I think. It is pretty good even with these things. mrgreen Keep it up! (Gah! I sound like a teacher). rofl
PostPosted: Mon Jul 07, 2008 2:20 pm


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It's pretty well done. I really like the blindfold and the skin and the text is very professional looking. 3nodding
However, it feels like you used the smudge tool for most of her. I mean, that's fine if you don't overdo it. In this picture, it just feels like the lines blended too much, like with the hair and the crown or the hair and the face. It was mostly the hair that got me actually. Maybe if they were a little less calculated (like swifter lines) with sharper lines (not such a soft brush for painting, more hardness). Then, you would maximize your abilities I think. It is pretty good even with these things. mrgreen Keep it up! (Gah! I sound like a teacher). rofl


Thanks^_^ It was actually my first time using the program and I was just fooling around and ended with this outcome^_^

I did however, love to outcome, and have been working with texture in the hair, etc etc.

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PostPosted: Mon Jul 07, 2008 3:03 pm


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It's pretty well done. I really like the blindfold and the skin and the text is very professional looking. 3nodding
However, it feels like you used the smudge tool for most of her. I mean, that's fine if you don't overdo it. In this picture, it just feels like the lines blended too much, like with the hair and the crown or the hair and the face. It was mostly the hair that got me actually. Maybe if they were a little less calculated (like swifter lines) with sharper lines (not such a soft brush for painting, more hardness). Then, you would maximize your abilities I think. It is pretty good even with these things. mrgreen Keep it up! (Gah! I sound like a teacher). rofl


Thanks^_^ It was actually my first time using the program and I was just fooling around and ended with this outcome^_^

I did however, love to outcome, and have been working with texture in the hair, etc etc.

Ahhh.... I see. Well, Good Job! It's fun playin' around with stuff, huh? rofl
PostPosted: Thu Jul 10, 2008 7:05 am


Nice! But I feel that her hair is 'squashing' her face. haha. xd

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