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 Posted: Thu Aug 07, 2008 6:03 pm
Heres my first attempt at an anime...It may look kind of plain, i based it loosely off of Kingdom Hearts Organization XIII. But without the boring coat they all usually have on.  Constructive Criticism is always good...
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Posted: Fri Aug 08, 2008 8:01 am
Your shading is really good!
all I would worry about know is maybe the proportion of the character and this is a win! biggrin
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Posted: Fri Aug 08, 2008 8:05 am
His set of legs are smaller than his upper body. The hand gripping the keyblade is too smal. Other than that, I feel you'll just get better with time. The fact that you shade and add wrinkles is very ambitious of you- even making it fullbody! It won't take you long to get good. heart
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Posted: Fri Aug 08, 2008 2:34 pm
Thank you very much! 3nodding I was also wondering....about the feet.. Do they seem strange at all? Maybe it's just my imagination....but...
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Posted: Fri Aug 08, 2008 6:22 pm
gravee2 Thank you very much! 3nodding I was also wondering....about the feet.. Do they seem strange at all? Maybe it's just my imagination....but... it does, but i am still trying to work on feet myself (from those angles) >.<
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Posted: Fri Aug 08, 2008 6:33 pm
gravee2 Thank you very much! 3nodding I was also wondering....about the feet.. Do they seem strange at all? Maybe it's just my imagination....but...
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Posted: Sat Aug 09, 2008 7:04 pm
RuPaul Charles gravee2 Thank you very much! 3nodding I was also wondering....about the feet.. Do they seem strange at all? Maybe it's just my imagination....but... Yea...I wasn't really trying to make them all perfectly equal. I would have busted out a ruler or some sort of straight-edge so i could do that. I like my drawings to have a bit of error in them on purpose, usually it mkae ths piece unique.
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Posted: Wed Aug 27, 2008 1:02 pm
i see the kingdom hearts thing with the key and stuff :] the only thing i would really recomend is to fix up the boots. [they look like platform boots or something xd ] u got the form down its probably just the position or w.e. then again i really shouldnt be talking bcause i dont even bother drawing feet lol mrgreen
the face looks really good for ur first attempt at anime....looks alot better then my first attempt...ALOT better. trust on that :]
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Posted: Sat Sep 20, 2008 1:44 pm
oxellebellxo i see the kingdom hearts thing with the key and stuff :] the only thing i would really recomend is to fix up the boots. [they look like platform boots or something xd ] u got the form down its probably just the position or w.e. then again i really shouldnt be talking bcause i dont even bother drawing feet lol mrgreen the face looks really good for ur first attempt at anime....looks alot better then my first attempt...ALOT better. trust on that :] Weeeeell..Originally, Those 'boots' you pointed out were sandels. Like the old smaurai cool stand-on-little-pieces-of-wood sandels (Even though there only supposed to have two pieces of wood to increase balance..). Though, after i got done shading over it, it all kind of began to combine til' it's hard to see...
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Posted: Tue Sep 30, 2008 1:32 pm
It's awesome!
Even if you don't like it, other people do
(sure as hell i do XD)
i like your shaidng, could you teach me that?
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Posted: Mon Oct 06, 2008 9:17 pm
Very good shading, although the legs look like planks. Work on those more.
Plus you've already heard this but the legs need to be much longer (or the torso smaller).
And yeah, the hand. But you're probably tired of people pointing that out.
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