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Critique? Red lines appreciated...

StephenTangerineAi

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Posted: Wed Sep 03, 2008 8:39 pm

uh this is some random person i drew...
thanx for critiques.

http://xnightslasherx.deviantart.com/art/first-deviation-O-o-94954124
how do you post a pic? O.o

Posted: Wed Sep 03, 2008 10:29 pm

Hey this drawing is pretty well done. The hands do need a little work though they are definitely defined and they aren't too small as the problem tends to be. The only other thing I really see that may need improvement is the left elbow. It seems a little too creased, maybe...for lack of a better word. The twist just looks a little off. Oh and maybe define his back side a little more (not to be weird) but it looks...flat. Maybe a few curves for definition will give it a little more volume and help express the twisting of his torso.

Other than that, I'd say darken it and it would be really nice...maybe even add some shading.

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ChrisJS

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Posted: Wed Sep 03, 2008 10:31 pm

oh and as far as I know, to post a pic you copy and paste the URL and put [/img] directly after it and User Image - Blocked by "Display Image" Settings. Click to show.

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Posted: Mon Sep 08, 2008 4:32 pm

thank you!
i just wanted to make sure that it's ok before i lineart. thx biggrin

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Majin Paul

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Posted: Tue Sep 09, 2008 3:43 am

Yeah, the hands need working on, but they do seem to be difficult. D:
I think his right shoulder could be looked at, it looks strange when looked at with the rest of the body, though maybe that's just me.
But overall I think it looks good. 3nodding

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