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 Posted: Sun Nov 16, 2008 7:54 pm
http://dakata.deviantart.com/art/Steampunk-Merboyyyy-3-103799657
Yeahhh, I usually draw dragons and I'm not used to drawing human faces/heads, so I drew this up.
But I'm a perfectionist and I know (I KNOOWWWW) there's mistakes, but I can't find them. >:C
Help me and critique, guys. sad I'll try not to cry.
Tell me about:
- Anatomy errors
- Parts that look flat and not "3d" enough
- Blah blah blah, other stuff
I know that the fingers I draw are kinda "fat" and that I only draw four instead of five. :C When I draw five normal fingers, it looks wrooong. ;_;
Thanks heart
And would my style count as manga? It's not exactly the regular bishie boy style pretty much every mangaka uses, but eh.
And if you want, critique other stuff in my gallery too~. Go ahead and post your critique here (With a link or the title, of course, so I know what you're talkin' about) or post a comment on the picture. I don't really care. *Shrug*
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Posted: Sun Nov 16, 2008 8:07 pm
I can't find no mistakes on my behalf because i am not a furry artist but i can give out a tip that i picked up from a magazine "Advance PhotoShop" i forgot what issue but it is best to flip the image around because it gives you "fresh-eyes" and you can find a lot more mistakes.
Awesome job.
-edit-
If you want more things to be more "3-d" the fish net need to have more lines where it curves. Well, for me it will look better but try it out.
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Posted: Sun Nov 16, 2008 8:13 pm
Thanks DNB. :3 I'll try that. Hopefully it'll help a little...
And hmm, that thing about the fishnets would probably help. I might try that too. I'm just used to drawing fishnets like that. XP
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Posted: Fri Nov 21, 2008 9:41 pm
Wow! That's really good! I can't find any outstanding mistakes but maybe try fixing the left eye a bit, or maybe that's just me. Anyway, great work keep it up!
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Posted: Tue Nov 25, 2008 7:23 pm
Ok, I had to look really hard to find anything but I did find a couple.
His back is at to sharp of an angle it looks broken. The front paw seems to be at a bad angle, and the lens furthest away needs to be adjusted. Other then that I think it looks good.
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Posted: Mon Dec 01, 2008 2:14 pm
First impressions, can I pet him? He's soooooo cute!!! I want one as a pet! Sweeeeeettt!!!!!
Anyway, no wait... we need more awwwww! Bless! He's amazing!
So then, as you've probably guessed I adore this little guy, I agree with the curved fishnet thing and what you said about his back. His fingers though, they look right with the rest of the picture - the cat-pawsness justifies 4 fingers (I think) since (I think) cats have four front toes. Probably. Love the fluffy tail too!
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