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 Posted: Tue Dec 23, 2008 9:29 pm
Please critique. This is the only decent thing I have done in a long time , though I don't like the eyes.... >.> Say whatever you like.  The pic won't get colored anytime soon..... my photoshop isn't working and I can't find the install cd >< So yeah...... ^^ Oh and her right leg when looking at the pic is suppose to be slightly behind the left leg..... Just thought Id mention that.....
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Posted: Tue Dec 23, 2008 10:48 pm
It's very cute. The eyes do look a little...buggy tho'...The dress design is really great. Oh, her left hand is a little weird looking.
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Posted: Tue Dec 23, 2008 11:03 pm
Thanks ^^
Yeah Im always bad with hands..... I have a tendency to hide them ll the time xD..... and for some reason I just cant draw eyes anymore..... Eyes were the first thing I learned how to draw when I got into anime..... and I still suck at them >.>
Thanks for the critique!
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Posted: Wed Dec 24, 2008 9:48 am
strange but cute in somehow~
hmm... how should i say it~
a little "to the right" u know~ like it bends?
and her eyes is cute but "..." u place it way too down
also, dirty
sry if this hurt u, but i didn't mean to
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Posted: Wed Dec 24, 2008 9:49 am
Black Rose LoLita strange but cute in somehow~ hmm... how should i say it~ a little "to the right" u know~ like it bends? and her eyes is cute but "..." u place it way too down also, dirty sry if this hurt u, but i didn't mean toand the dress line is too un-natural
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Posted: Wed Dec 24, 2008 11:03 am
I like your drawing; it's cute.
But you're missing eyebrows, her right hand is disproportionate.
If you are going to show that her right leg is slightly behind the other, shade it a little so that it shows. But cute drawing overall :] I like the ruffles on her dress; I can't draw ruffles at all.
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Posted: Wed Dec 24, 2008 1:48 pm
Thanks for all the advice.
Its a little dirty looking because I haven't done anything to it but scan it in and enhance the colors in the pic. For some reason my photoshop won't open and I can't find the installation disk xD (thats what happens when you live in 2 places ><)
I probably wont fix it, but thanks again for your opinions!
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Posted: Sun Jan 18, 2009 9:14 pm
Wow, It's very cute.
I love Loli girls style ^^.
You did a very cute eyes and her dress and apron are cute. You can change a bit her legs rotating them to the left. Also, adding eyebrows will make her look cuter, and doing the nose vertically will make it better :3
But I like her hair and I'd love to see it colored n___n <3
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Posted: Wed Jan 21, 2009 6:06 pm
Ah. Just popping back in, with the eyes, it would help if you showed the lids more. Like, lengthen the line a bit so it sticks out from the iris.
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Posted: Tue Jan 27, 2009 10:25 pm
wow thats really cute! give her some eyebrows, lower the nose, bring the collar bones together a bit, and I'm more than happy wink
I love your style heart
reminds me of http://Milliuth.deviantart.com/art/Haru-109401585 's work
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Posted: Fri Jan 30, 2009 2:15 pm
Very cute! If you like drawing this kind of thing you should go to this site, it can give you lots of great ideas. "avant gouche" just type it into any search engine and it should pop up.
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