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 Posted: Sun Dec 28, 2008 6:12 am
Can you pleaze critique my art!
http://zombiekatt44.deviantart.com/art/Hawkeye-The-Chimera-110624654
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Posted: Sun Dec 28, 2008 7:59 am
zombiekatt44 Can you pleaze critique my art! http://zombiekatt44.deviantart.com/ You can learn a lot more if you pick out one or two of your most recent or best then trying to get a general idea. So I suggest choosing two of what you think are your best and posting them in this topic for us to critique
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Posted: Sun Dec 28, 2008 1:19 pm
*GASP* I don't wanna infect you with the Bubonic Plague; I wanna give you Salmonella! Hahahahahaha! rofl Kidding. I just thought that was funny. Anyway, since I can't possibly critique them all, I'll talk about "Beta" since I clicked on that one first. *clears throat*
The head is a bit big for her body. See, our bodies are the length of about seven or eight of our own heads (depending on your gender). I don't know why, but it's true. DaVinci figured that one out; at least, I think it was him. sweatdrop Anyway, here are some deviations I found that might help explain:
http://meli-ichigo.deviantart.com/art/Tutorial-Proportion-82525062
http://ink-myopia.deviantart.com/art/Proportion-Tutorial-26773622 <-- I have used this one before when my proportions were screwed up. rofl
The shoulders are also a little bit too small, as well as the legs (and the arms are just a tad too long). Okay! This is good! Your main problems seem to be with anatomy, so those deviation/tutorial thingies up there (the links! mad d ) should help.
Oh! Before I forget, you should maybe give her some eyebrows. rofl Those are the symbols of expression, and eyebrows can help make a big forehead seem a little less... uh... big. Yeah... mrgreen Whelp! That's pretty much it. I mean, the clothes wrinkles and the hair could be a little more flowy and natural but nobody's perfect (at least, I'm not, and I'll be damned if I'm going down alone! ninja ).
You've got the creativity though, and you can create attractive pictures even without the anatomy thing so keep on working at it. I'd like to see more of your stuff as you progress... That reminds me... Nevermind, thinking aloud to myself... on paper... Anyway, hope I helped! blaugh Wow! It's great to be back!
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Posted: Wed Dec 31, 2008 6:48 pm
Tarff *GASP* I don't wanna infect you with the Bubonic Plague; I wanna give you Salmonella! Hahahahahaha! rofl Kidding. I just thought that was funny. Anyway, since I can't possibly critique them all, I'll talk about "Beta" since I clicked on that one first. *clears throat*
The head is a bit big for her body. See, our bodies are the length of about seven or eight of our own heads (depending on your gender). I don't know why, but it's true. DaVinci figured that one out; at least, I think it was him. sweatdrop Anyway, here are some deviations I found that might help explain:
http://meli-ichigo.deviantart.com/art/Tutorial-Proportion-82525062
http://ink-myopia.deviantart.com/art/Proportion-Tutorial-26773622 <-- I have used this one before when my proportions were screwed up. rofl
The shoulders are also a little bit too small, as well as the legs (and the arms are just a tad too long). Okay! This is good! Your main problems seem to be with anatomy, so those deviation/tutorial thingies up there (the links! mad d ) should help.
Oh! Before I forget, you should maybe give her some eyebrows. rofl Those are the symbols of expression, and eyebrows can help make a big forehead seem a little less... uh... big. Yeah... mrgreen Whelp! That's pretty much it. I mean, the clothes wrinkles and the hair could be a little more flowy and natural but nobody's perfect (at least, I'm not, and I'll be damned if I'm going down alone! ninja ).
You've got the creativity though, and you can create attractive pictures even without the anatomy thing so keep on working at it. I'd like to see more of your stuff as you progress... That reminds me... Nevermind, thinking aloud to myself... on paper... Anyway, hope I helped! blaugh Wow! It's great to be back! Thank ya!!! *smiles, and then rushes to the nearest source of utensils/paper for drawing and starts a-thinkin
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Posted: Sat Jan 10, 2009 8:42 pm
ahhhh to many to comment all at onceee lol mrgreen well im just gonna have to say in general work on like muscle tones and jsut like the shape of the body. also, with ur clothing, try adding more folds and creases and wrinkles and stuff like that. dont go crazy tho. learned that the hard way...doesnt look good lol.
well so yea just work on body anatomy and u should b good to goo
keep up the good workk biggrin
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Posted: Thu Jan 15, 2009 4:57 am
well, you might want to experiment some with shadowing, especially when it comes to the clothing. Wrinkles and other places where the clothing is bent would catch the light differently and add to the depth of the drawings.
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Posted: Sun Feb 01, 2009 6:10 pm
oxellebellxo ahhhh to many to comment all at onceee lol mrgreen well im just gonna have to say in general work on like muscle tones and jsut like the shape of the body. also, with ur clothing, try adding more folds and creases and wrinkles and stuff like that. dont go crazy tho. learned that the hard way...doesnt look good lol. well so yea just work on body anatomy and u should b good to goo keep up the good workk biggrin thank you!
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