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The first one looks great, but the shoulder is a little...squared. And the ribbon looks a bit strange in the way it's flowing in the wind, sorta unrealistic. The space neck to the left side of her neck that disappears into the collar also looks awkward. Pretty good overall. In the second one, her torso really doesn't match her legs. And her clothes have unnecessary creases. You should try concentrating a bit more on her body-shape first before you do the clothes. Pretty good though.

wow these r really nice drawings. i actually like the hair white lol :]
well for critique for the first one im gonna have to say the ribbon looks like out of place. mayb rap it more around her finger or make her hair blowing more in the wind so theres more winds so the ribbons like that. idk. ur choice. but actually i like the sholder kinda square. u know u see those jackets with the squareness to them? ok ill stop im rambling now.
for the second one, the sholders kinda look big for her considering shes a little kid, or its just hte shirt. well, either way, mayb add like some more wrinkles or something to the shirt because u see the pants and they have wrinkles and the shirt is perfectly...urm...flat? idk. wat ever word u wanna use but yea u get wat im saying i hope. other then that the second picture looks good.
ok last one. *phew* lol
his position looks kinda awkward because hes like lieing down and like leaning up at the same time. thats it tho. the rest is good :]

so just keep up the good workk mrgreen