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gun_girl

PostPosted: Sat Jan 03, 2009 7:17 am


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So yeah, took me a while to get the arm looking that good but it was worth it. I thought I would line art it and I think it looks pretty nice.. :]

Please anatomy critiques and what not c:

and the explination for the title is below if you want to read it




Ten years have past since the day people are calling “Judgment Day”
On this day much of the human race either ascended or died from the many natural disasters. Most of which who ascended were children, leaving millions behind on earth. The day after which was named “Day of Demons,” the only logical explanation for this day is the merging of Hell with Earth. Many mountains exploded, exhaling clouds of ash and rivers of lava. The more evil of creatures became possessed and holocaust spread around the glob.
Many unexplainable evils who have been named “The Devils Guards” rose to power this day and sought the slavery of the Human race.
A small group of scientists were gathered as well as generals to devise some sort of plan to save as many as they could. Eventually they had to escape to a church located in Midwest America because it seemed untouchable to the demons. In this church was a young girl, around the age of four who’s left arm and part of her left ear had ben torn off. Next to her lay a demon’s bones holding the arm.
The Scientist realized that the girl was untouchable and utilized her as a way to save as many people as possible and gather what supplies was needed to build around the church. Astonished that the girl had survived what she did, they felt there was some hope in her for the salvation of the human race.
They built her a robotic arm and around the age of 10 they began to equip her with weapons and train her in combat. Unfortunately she wasn’t mentally develop to understand her situation which resulted in the death of many soldiers as she trained. Some even seen her as a psychopath and ordered for her death.
As the years past the developing society known as “The Arch” grew but the dome which they were stuck in could only hold so many which soon resulted in banishment. The governmental officials held so much power the people lived in fear.
“Gun Girl” is seen as the forgotten angel that many of the ordinary people believe is “His” hope for the human race.
When people refer to Him, they mean whatever being it is that is controlling their fate.
PostPosted: Sun Jan 04, 2009 10:46 am


i like this alot. the detail is pretty good and the face is very nice for so few lines. i think you have a slight problem with proportion tho. both the hands and feet are too small. the foot only needs to be a touch bigger, but the mechanical hand could do with being almost twice as big. i think itd be cool as a stylistic approach to make it about 1.5 times a normal hand (kinda like battle chasers artwork) but yeah abit bigger would be anatomically correct even bigger then that would probably look pretty special biggrin . anyways man good work biggrin

Sanos Touchstone


Iris Silver

PostPosted: Sun Jan 04, 2009 4:40 pm


I would have to agree with Sanos. Feet is a tad small and the hands are small in proportion even if you were going for a more skeletal approach. But the clean lines and intricate details really makes this picture stands out.
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