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This is one of the first pictures i uploaded so far. I would appreciate any redlines and advice anyone has. Oh yeah I posted this for a sticky in the main forums so you might catch there like on page 1789 I think. Well basically its a thread where you attack other avis so i did this one. I know its horrible and needs a lot of work. So anyone at all

hmm. theres alot of work here, so a redline would be of little to no use if you ask me. first off i (personally) dont think you should ever have to use words to describe whats going on in a drawing. if you need to annotate the piece youve not done it well enough!

theres alot of problems with perspective here. the characters dont fit in 3d space. this is an entirley 2d drawing with no illusion of 3d.

anatomy. for instance the hgand thats 'clutching' the cigarette has the thumb on the wrong side. theres problems with the shoulder too. that joint isnt a ball and socket like a knee join. it float sin space and the hole thing moves with the arm, so the shoulder needs to be moved up.

your proportions however arent far off at all and thats something thats not easy so well done for that.

all in all, and this may sound harsh, but it may be worth redrawing and attempting to make the image 3d. then i may be able to redline abit more

thast where the best drawings come from razz . thin air

green line biggrin
ok so the legs looked a bit awkward so i attempted to fix them on both characters. for the one thats standing, the claf is a bit small compared to the thigh. as for the one laying down, u drew them backward wen shes forward X/ o well biggrin
need some more arm muscle so i added that. added some fluff to the tail and the boobs looked a bit big.
but other then that nothing seemed wrong with it

keep up the good work :]