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omg so much!!! lol
might as well get started
with the head, like u said the forehead was a bit big but u noticed that which is good :]
for the kento with the new style [my personal fave of the five] i give u major props for u being able to draw a pistol. all i have to say is mayb more hair detail [but not needed in my opinion] and for the side view the hair looks kinda bigger then it actually is. just work on proportions for the hair and u should b fine.
now its mario time! X]
i give u more props for not looking at anything for this drawing. all i have to say is mayb more detail on the clothes and remember that mario is a bit shorter the luigi right?
plus, bowser and peach can use some more detail but other then that it looks great! biggrin
ok now for my second fave, the kento head shot line.
i love the first head on the top. the eye style and expression are great. second head on the first line looks a bit awkward. is he trying to look back or to the side or...idk!! lol 3rd one i couldnt see that well...damn computer lol. im sure it was fine. first one on the second line the nose looks a bit awkward bcause there is no line, just like two dots. it looks fine but knowing where the structue is would look good too! then again its just my way of drawing the nose. :] and here u go with the puffy hair again....lol. mayb its just the angles. idk. last head, expression looks great! just work on the side bangs and ur good.
*phew* last drawing....lol
ok for the guy standing, his torso looks a bit small but i think u might b able to get away with that.
the guys sitting u cant tell where his lap or knees are...they are lost in what ever hes wearing! X] and everything else looks good for there
nice details!

thats it for now! great job!! keep up the good work! mrgreen

ps. try to make like one pic per post thing, might b easier to focus on one pic at a time but w.e. floats ur boat is good for me! :]

I agree with the above, the anatomy needs some polish but the works are likable.

One thing I should point is that on the new style Kento and a few others, the hair is very angular. The triangular shapes fit together too geometrically, and the bangs on the one side are very straight. Its anime, so its understandable if there are some weird hairstyles, but I'd practice making the hair less static on another sheet or sheets.