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 Posted: Fri Mar 06, 2009 7:24 pm
This would be my knew OC Sui. I'm currently working on an outfit design for her but I'm afraid that I am having difficulties trying to get her gloves to flow correctly. I also have a feeling that there is something wrong with her head as well. (besides the fact that it's not connected to the body. XD) Any Advice? Redlines are much loved. 
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Posted: Fri Mar 06, 2009 9:55 pm
looks pretty good!
here are some suggestions tho:
the ear is a bit big compared to the head and the bottom of the ear shouldnt seem to connect with the jaw bone. plus the head looks a bit big.
for the other drawing the sholders look a bit small but thats it tho
other then from those little things it looks great!
keep up the great worrk mrgreen
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Posted: Wed Mar 11, 2009 7:19 am
^^ Thanks for the tip about the ear, I'll get right on to fixing that.
Though sadly I'm not so sure about working with her shoulders.
((Though that's just beacuse of some buddies of mine at school telling me that if I made them any bigger they looked too much like male shoulders.))
Thank you so very much for the advice. ^^
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Posted: Sun Mar 15, 2009 2:24 pm
Black Hearted Shadow ^^ Thanks for the tip about the ear, I'll get right on to fixing that.
Though sadly I'm not so sure about working with her shoulders.
((Though that's just beacuse of some buddies of mine at school telling me that if I made them any bigger they looked too much like male shoulders.))
Thank you so very much for the advice. ^^ I'd be more tempted to say that it's less to do with shoulders that would make her masculine than the lack of curve in her body. Men are wider at the shoulders then narrow and straighten, thick of women as an hour glass...you can safely make her shoulders slighly broader if you also make her hips wider.
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Posted: Sun Mar 15, 2009 7:36 pm
Not so much on the collar bones (not so long), and also, Collar bones (from what I've seen) are generally more straight out or upward then downward. Unless you are slumping down a lot.
I love the outfit though. twisted twisted *steals outfit for my own drawing* MWAHAHA!!! twisted twisted
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Posted: Thu Mar 19, 2009 5:39 pm
@Judziah: Thanks so much for the adivce. It makes a lot of sence. I'll start working on that. Hopfully I'll have Sui all fixed up by next week. ^^
@Caliber: Ahhhh!!!! *Chases after you to get outfit back* Nuuuuuuuuus!
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Posted: Tue Mar 24, 2009 9:33 pm
Here's my suggestions: You should change the pose to her having one hand on her hip and the other a little toward the back this enables her to show a little better on the proportions and you can work on the gloves in two diff angles or at least that always helps moi. heart
I like her face it seems kinda innocent and kinda makes me focus more on the clothing if your trying to just model the dress.
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Posted: Wed Mar 25, 2009 12:18 am
Hmm the head looks fine if you'll change the ear a bit like people already said , I also would move her cheekbone a little more up.
And for the feminine thingie , like someone else already said , don't worry to much about the shoulders CONCENTRATE ON HER CURVES ; her hips should be wider and you should define her breasts some as well.
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Posted: Wed Jul 15, 2009 7:55 am
her neck is just a littlllee bit thick, try thining it up a bit, but other than that the hair and facial structure looks great!
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