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Caliber Mengsk

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Posted: Tue Mar 10, 2009 8:40 pm

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http://calibermengsk.com/gaia/candc/hoodedGirl.png

So, I got bored while working, and looked up some reference pics on deviant art. Liked this one, so I drew it. Not much study on this one, just felt like doing it.

I did space the eyes out, and made them larger then usual, problem is, they are at most a half an eye away from the side of the face... razz Still need to work on heads quite a bit.

Also, her left arm (our right) probably curves in too much too fast. Is the size of the hands right? They were much small, and it looked funky like that so I made the hands bigger. Does it look right?

Just a quick note to all of those who have helped with redlines and such in the past. ^_^ I really appreciate it.

Anyway, thanks, and have a good day razz

Oh, here is the link to the original image:
http://girltripped.deviantart.com/art/Banished-85929644

Posted: Wed Mar 11, 2009 7:24 pm

muwahahhaha a blue line for ya:
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lol X]
ok so first thing i fixed up is the face shape. remember its like a miror image, same on both sides. except if theres a defect, thats a different situation lol
the eye style i relli like but one is further down then the other
is it like a slight turn view or just face foward view...i coudlnt telll lol
next problem came up in the cleavage area. i have these problems all the time trust me but im just gonna say it...THOSE BOOBS R HUGE...lol. if u like them that big its fine but its alittle bit big if u get wat im sayin lol XD
next the left [her right] arm is a bit thin so i fixed that up [not the best line but bare with me]
last problem i saw was the torso was a bit short so i fixed that up a bit. but like i always say, wat ever floats ur boat.

ur stuff is turning out great. keep up the good work and u'll get even better! biggrin

ps. omg this is so bad, i can draw people better wen im redlining then actually drawing free hand. some one save me lol
or just keep drawing and keep me entertained...lol XD

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Caliber Mengsk

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Posted: Wed Mar 11, 2009 10:30 pm

razz If it makes you feel any better, I do much better on stuff that I use the pen tool on. XD I can get much better muscle tone and shape from the pen tool then from any drawing I can currently do. razz That's not the goal though.

I am thinking of taking just some drawing classes again at college. 2-3 nights a week isn't that bad, and it helped quite a bit to do it for a semester in college. (though we did still life, and I know that Drawing 2 is based on the human body.)

^_^ Thanks for the critique. XD I really need to work on the shape of the head. My main focus so far has been on the body, which I don't think I was too far off on. (was I? O-o aside from the boobage... which could actually be...)

Posted: Fri Mar 13, 2009 1:54 am

I find the face shape a bit iffy...And to practice with the cloak, how about throwing a sheet over someone's head so you can see how it hangs and folds?
Keep up the good work.

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oxellebellxo

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Posted: Sat Mar 14, 2009 9:47 pm

yea i have to say if ur focusing on the body u did fine, just the torso was a bit short, but nothing to relli worry aboutt

Posted: Tue Mar 17, 2009 7:41 pm

About her head, the only real thing I see that needs a fix, is the eyes, they are not close enough, or rather, they are to close to the edge of her head. Her left eye would be perfect if she tilted her head away from us and towards her left though. Also the highlights are a bit off, as if they are coming from different, though smiler, light sources. I end up goofing them two though, just somthing else to look at :3

Good work ^_^

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Caliber Mengsk

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Posted: Wed Mar 18, 2009 8:35 pm

Well, normally my issue with eyes is getting the too close together...

XD So this time too far apart... Well, I actually got them apart this time, so that's promising.

Posted: Fri Mar 20, 2009 1:07 am

Caliber Mengsk

Well, normally my issue with eyes is getting the too close together...

XD So this time too far apart... Well, I actually got them apart this time, so that's promising.

I get that too. ^^
Well, it's not really promising, it's like you've started walking but in the wrong direction? When you have a problem like that, it's best to go back to basics and draw faces with guidelines.

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