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A semi portrait, and a matrix...you know you wanna see!

The_Brightest_Moon

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Posted: Thu Apr 09, 2009 1:59 pm

Hi peoples! After AGES of not drawing anything good I finally have good artwork biggrin biggrin biggrin

http://animehotaru19.deviantart.com/art/Semi-Self-Portrait-118672278

http://animehotaru19.deviantart.com/art/Matrix-118671913

So like yeah.... critique please!!!!!!!

Posted: Thu Apr 09, 2009 5:54 pm

Shocking...

With the portrait, all the pops out to me as off is how the eyes, nose, and lips aren't at the same angle.

I really like the Matrix one. I like the intricate patterns.

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The_Brightest_Moon

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Posted: Fri Apr 10, 2009 7:01 am

Tenko72

Shocking...

With the portrait, all the pops out to me as off is how the eyes, nose, and lips aren't at the same angle.

I really like the Matrix one. I like the intricate patterns.

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Hm.... I'm not really seeing the angle thing but I knew something was off >.< I just couldn't figure out what. If anyone could redline it that'd be helpful.

Posted: Fri Apr 10, 2009 8:22 am

The second picture is very interesting. I like it a lot. I think you should try cleaning up some scribbles in the designs and you'll have a great graphic design. The first one is good as well. It's got potential. You've done a good job with shading, the anatomy and placing the facial components in the right place is a tiny bit off. Aside from that, really nice.

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