I started this a long time ago as a comic and gave up on that and decided to turn it into a story. I'd love to see how you think about it.

http://wondering-souls.deviantart.com/art/ZWorld-Ch1-124723036

That's chapter one. Chapter two is in my gallery if you want to read more. I'd prefer comments about it on my actual dA account seeing as how I rarely come on here. Thank you!

-Sam