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 Posted: Fri Jun 26, 2009 11:14 pm
I wanted to draw from another point of view, so I would like some critique... One thing I had a problem with was the girl on the right... her but seems huge, but I don't know how else to draw her from that angle... crying HELP PLEASE~! 
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Posted: Sat Jun 27, 2009 12:34 pm
Hmm... Actually it looks really good, if your wanting help on this though, i'll throw whatever I think in. The left leg on the girl on the right, seems a little .. Wide? That might be right, but i'm not to sure. ^^;; At the very least, I hope I helped some.
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Posted: Tue Jun 30, 2009 6:38 am
This is some epic drawing on MS paint! I for one am inspired to try again. Did you use a graphics tablet, or is this a mouse?
So, what I was going to say is yes, I agree with you that something needs to be changed on her butt, but I can't quite think what would improve it. Perhaps try putting a longer top on her, and again making her left leg a little narrower... or changing the angle to be more horizontal?
Ooh, on second thoughts I've just looked and her neck looks a little over twisted too... but then that's only after close inspection, I think you can get away with it.
Amazing clothes skills though, and their eyes are very expressional. (is that even a word?)
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Posted: Tue Jun 30, 2009 8:11 pm
opiel16 This is some epic drawing on MS paint! I for one am inspired to try again. Did you use a graphics tablet, or is this a mouse? So, what I was going to say is yes, I agree with you that something needs to be changed on her butt, but I can't quite think what would improve it. Perhaps try putting a longer top on her, and again making her left leg a little narrower... or changing the angle to be more horizontal? Ooh, on second thoughts I've just looked and her neck looks a little over twisted too... but then that's only after close inspection, I think you can get away with it. Amazing clothes skills though, and their eyes are very expressional. (is that even a word?) Wow~ thanks so much for pointing out all these things I wouldn't even have noticed them (thats why you get others to look at it) And I drew with a mouse. hehe that I'm proud of. I would use the word expressionalistic but I don't even know if that's a word or not. XD THANK YOU!
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Posted: Wed Jul 01, 2009 2:39 am
AppleStreet Wow~ thanks so much for pointing out all these things I wouldn't even have noticed them (thats why you get others to look at it) And I drew with a mouse. hehe that I'm proud of. I would use the word expressionalistic but I don't even know if that's a word or not. XD THANK YOU! Aaaw you made me all happy for being helpful! You're welcomes!!! And it deserves another reiteration of how awesome your mouse drawing skills are, I was (and still am) truly amazed. T.T can't do it myself...
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Posted: Wed Jul 01, 2009 4:12 pm
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Posted: Wed Jul 15, 2009 3:28 pm
Holy crabs their faces look sweet~
On to the butt problem! Considering the angle/perspective, I think you cold actually make it bigger. That will make her seem curvier and that would justify the leg 3nodding
I don't know how tight those pants are supposed to be, but either poke her butt out a notch from the leg on the right side or add some wrinkles so we see that the pant are a bit loose. Of course, 'poke her butt out' is in this case (in my eyes) same thing as 'pull the leg in so that I can see the butt'
I know you didn't ask for comments on the shoulders - but you know... they are sexy shoulders.
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Posted: Sun Jul 19, 2009 1:07 pm
This is just amazing. I'm serious. I can't put my feelings into words with this art.  And you did this all with a mouse? INCREDIBLE. scream I agree with Aryllia, either add wrinkles to the pants, or poke out the butt a little...
Gah. I'm so immature. I started giggling like a little kid when I saw the word "butt." gonk
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Posted: Tue Jul 28, 2009 2:06 pm
The_Witch_Aryllia Holy crabs their faces look sweet~ On to the butt problem! Considering the angle/perspective, I think you cold actually make it bigger. That will make her seem curvier and that would justify the leg 3nodding I don't know how tight those pants are supposed to be, but either poke her butt out a notch from the leg on the right side or add some wrinkles so we see that the pant are a bit loose. Of course, 'poke her butt out' is in this case (in my eyes) same thing as 'pull the leg in so that I can see the butt' I know you didn't ask for comments on the shoulders - but you know... they are sexy shoulders. Poke the butt out! okay! XD hahaha...poke the butt out... When I first saw that I imagined drawing a hand poking the butt...dirty XD but since you explained it okay! Thank you so much.
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Posted: Tue Jul 28, 2009 4:42 pm
Wow, a mouse, hun, that's really impressive!
Because of the extreme foreshortening on the girl of the right, I actually think that you need to make the butt a bit bigger, and especially wider because it is so much closer to the viewer. If you do that to the butt, then the legs should look correct.
With cases such as these, in the future I recommend getting some reference for the foreshortening, or using some perspective lines and fitting the figure into those. Usually they'll get you results that look correct as well as imply space.
Awesome job, though, I am very impressed~!
PS. These should, hopefully, illustrate what I mean by foreshortening:
Foreshortening Tips
and
*WARNING: NUDITY* (look at the photo on the lower left corner, and see how much larger her butt is compared to her head and torso)
or if you can't view that because of nudity filters...
the same thing applies here (sort of).
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