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 Posted: Sat Jun 27, 2009 11:42 am
Okay, first off - I'm new here, totally just joined, this is my first post, and hi.
Anyway I draw my art mostly on printer paper as most do, but I do not posses a scanner, for the past few months all my art has been done in MSPaint and drawn by mouse. ( By choice. ) And, well, I guess I just want some critique. ^^;;
I'll post two for now ... ( Both are avitar arts. )
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Posted: Sat Jun 27, 2009 7:49 pm
For a few months that's good! But it's the clotheing, wayy too puffy, and too edgy! Try to free-handly sketch, then curve-sketch, so you have 2 sketches. Then go over with your line art~ But a hint... use different, neon colors... Thheenn do the eraser trick, which if you don't know... right-click~
Um, lemme see. After you have the neon line art, make it all black biggrin Purdy *w* Who said you can't make purdy arts on paint? >_> IDIOTS! XD You have even screen-tone on paint~ It's awsome :3 Uhh, let's see... Heads are tooo wide... No, bad o-o Too fat, remember... CIRCLES BUDDY! Lol, but over all that's real good for starting out biggrin I use mouse too x]
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Posted: Sat Jun 27, 2009 8:14 pm
Yeah .. XD I have very big headed people. Thanks! ^^
And yes, this is pretty much my style.. A chibi-ish type of thing, an I luv it jus as much as I luv paint. <3 Thanks so much. C:
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Posted: Sat Jun 27, 2009 10:14 pm
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Posted: Sat Jun 27, 2009 10:42 pm
Hey, thanks alot! ^^
How bout this ? ( Yes, I messed up horribly on the wing. )
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Posted: Sun Jun 28, 2009 10:23 pm
Okay so, I was going for alot of things when I drew this, the duck, the cave-ish type of backround, extremely dark colors that I found hard to get and still don't really look right, the shadows, the steam, and last, the body.
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Posted: Wed Jul 15, 2009 2:22 pm
Lunar Yugu Hey, thanks alot! ^^
How bout this ? ( Yes, I messed up horribly on the wing. )
I'd like to comment on her face. Everything seems to be too far down really, if consider how much cheeks she got. I'm dong some redlining to show what I mean (English is my second language, so I'm horrible at explaining)  I'd say those eyes needs to be a bit bigger and higher placed (which leads to a higher placement of the hair) to match the face - the option is to re-draw the whole head to fit the eyes XP Oh, and try avoid page stretching by either cropping or resizing :] Except that detail, the drawing looks wonderful!
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Posted: Wed Jul 15, 2009 2:32 pm
Bah. Why draw it by mouse?!?! Its unsteady and inacurate. A tablet is soooooooo much better.
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Posted: Tue Jul 21, 2009 3:09 pm
I don't know what using a mouse or tablet has to do with this subject, but it's because I prefer to use the mouse, an believe it or not all my pics on paint look exactly how they'd look when I draw them on paper. =p My style is no way at all altared or funny looking from what it would normally look like on paper.
Yes, my characters are big and .. somebody actually said it was "fluffy".
( lol. ) But thats just my unique thing.. Although my anatomy is pretty well off as stated before, the redlining that was done an all, yeah I probably should of fixed that ^^;; But my style is.. Hmm.. Hard to explain. >.> Lets say you take a manga like Full Metal and compare it to something like Lucky Star.
So yes, I do have alot of work to do on my anatomy, but they are indeed susposed to look "fluffy" Cus I think it looks cute an awesome. :b
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Posted: Tue Jul 21, 2009 9:12 pm
HEY HEY HEY!
I also draw on mS paint^^ you should check out my post sometime^^ it has my name in it. (silver)
cool drawings, not many ppl use MS. paint considering its child's play. but i think that's the more reason to use it. The materials are simple and easy to use, tho it doesn't have a wide range of colors available and these screen and skin tones like other programs that are fancier... I like it.
AGAIN, nice drawings you should practice more tho, you're somewhat good^^
silver
peace out
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Posted: Tue Sep 01, 2009 6:08 pm
Haha, yeah that's true, always room to inprove. cool
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