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Doctor Nitrus Brio

PostPosted: Sat Aug 15, 2009 1:47 pm


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Top is original and bottom is the one I you can draw your red lines.

Anyways, I having troubles with the cape. I need it long, to the knee. I am terrible at drawing them. Will someone help guide me. I have looked at images and they don't help me.

The 2nd image is more up to date as it has the neck line that i've forgot in original. Anyways. On the left side of her neck is her shoulder but it is also her arm because of her left is like doing the chicken dance in a way. lol.

Guhh, so hard.

Please help me out. Thanks.


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PostPosted: Sun Aug 16, 2009 1:01 am


well im not too good at redlines so i wouldnt wan to make something bad but I can tell you the neck is a little off. its too big and not fitting on to the shoulders. over all its pretty good, especially the coloring =)

P.S. Is that an RS character?

Nagoshi Kun



nemoricultrix


PostPosted: Sun Aug 16, 2009 7:36 am


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I'm not skilled enough to give you a red line (my anatomy is off) but I'm pretty sure if her neck was going that far back (I think it's too far back, also) her head would be tilted back more (looking straight up). The neck should also be curvier. The pose, though, is overall awkward- very stiff. I'm sorry I can't help more. I like the concept, and those boots are killer. xd
PostPosted: Sun Aug 16, 2009 10:02 pm


Thanks you two! I have been fooling around with it, and I think I came with an reasonable satisfaction.
And yes, it is a Runescape Player.

Doctor Nitrus Brio


-LeanneCirce-

PostPosted: Tue Sep 01, 2009 12:24 am


okay here.. yeah the neck was a bit long, so i edited it with gimp, hope this helps (is the cape's length right? if not pm me and i'll make another one redface )
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PostPosted: Sun Sep 06, 2009 10:22 am


She's dodging the arrows right? If she's moving that fast the cape wouldn't have time to fall straight down like that. The cape would be flowing close to her.

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