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tricky_angel

PostPosted: Mon Aug 24, 2009 11:31 am


This is part of a contest that I'm entering (or at least hoping to if I get this finished XD). My main problem is her shoulders, the the one on the right of the screen, and I wondered whether anyone could help me put it in its proper place?

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PostPosted: Thu Aug 27, 2009 12:38 am


wow! its fantastic! i almost didnt notice the shoulder before you mentioned it razz anyway all you need to do is put it up a bit to be aligned with the other shoulder, its a bit low. and somehow..the breasts are bothering me.., if i'm right your character is wearing a long sleeved blouse, the breasts look kindof naked xd idk maybe its just my opinion, however even if the fit of the blouse is tight around the chest only the curve of the breast is prominent,not the roundness and all. *sighs* once again is just what i think, but besides that, the anatomy's great, the proportions are good and the facial details are beautiful.

-LeanneCirce-


tricky_angel

PostPosted: Thu Aug 27, 2009 5:36 am


Actually thats a great help, and i get what you mean about the breasts, I'ma gonna try to soften the lines a bit more and add a bit of foldage razz
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