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chelsealdy

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Posted: Mon Aug 24, 2009 12:01 pm


	critiques?suggestions? help me improve?

Posted: Mon Aug 24, 2009 12:15 pm


	Oh wow, that's a nice drawing. Very detailed and very well drawn. ^ ^

-Myst Sadakichi-

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NotHereNothereNothere

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Posted: Mon Aug 24, 2009 1:16 pm


	I love it XD the shading is very great! biggrin

Posted: Mon Aug 24, 2009 7:05 pm


	wow, your drawing is really good and detailed, and your shading is lovely ^_^

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hesikai

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Posted: Thu Sep 03, 2009 6:44 pm


	Well, it lacks perspective, and you could use a reference photo for that. Also try to use more tones in your values. Right now you have mostly mid tones and may a bit of highlight. But do have potinel, so keep practing !!

Posted: Wed Sep 09, 2009 6:44 pm


	That is really good but you do need to fix the ship itself ships are more of a half circle what you have is like a third of a circle.

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Otange

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Posted: Wed Sep 09, 2009 9:42 pm


	Wow that's very nice. smile To help improve it, maybe put a few highlights in the water. Light reflects off of the waters waves.

Posted: Wed Sep 16, 2009 6:53 pm


	I think this is lovely, the style is very nice. smile

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