Feedback on manga PLS!

[emeraldocean_von_siraine]

http://shadowknightpaladin.deviantart.com/

That's the link to my DA. I'm trying to do a manga and was wondering if I could get some feedback?  

[emeraldocean_von_siraine]

~bumps~  

[teddehguru]

I'm on page four right now, and I quite like it. c: Something to work on: smoother inking, it seems a little rough to me. And anatomy, you can never get too much practice on anatomy. c:

 

[emeraldocean_von_siraine]

Yeah, the inking got a bit faded due to the watercolor pencils...0.0'''

Haha, yes, anatomy. I'm trying to work it out right now. Specially on the face xD

Thanks a lot ^_^