Tomoe's Poem Competition #2

[gas powered stick]

I am sorry. I have been hacked, so therefore I cannot provide the prizes I stated. To say sorry, I will give the participants 10,000gold.  

[inutori]

you were hacked again o_o? D: that's awful  

[gas powered stick]

Because Crystal Miner got paid 10k he does not get anything extra.
@inutori:Yeah...suckz.  

[Kaoiji TM]

If you got hacked again feel free to cancel the trade you sent me.

I'd rather not take money if there is someone who needs it more than me.  

[aangelica22]

heyy sorreh yew got hacked but is it 2 late to enter?
i dont want anything but i like making poems smile  

[gas powered stick]

Go Ahead, put any poems you like.  

[aangelica22]

She smiles through the tears,
an act, pink leg warmers, and pig ears,
her rainbow hair, a symbol for emotion,
her teddy bear, a soundless cry for help,her only friend,
she keeps smiling for years and years and...

you touched my heart,
you smashed it,
why did you do it?
you fu-cking git

yew cut out my tears, just to replace them,
my heart was black,
now its red,
the outside of me appears alive,
but on the inside im dead...  

[aangelica22]

Reiko Tsukagi

Go Ahead, put any poems you like.

thank chu! smile  

[Zenally]

Avi Poem: N/A


Funny Poem: Summer Blues

Ah sweet summer,
Evenings full of sounds
Of mosquitoes and bugs and nasty things
Fluttering all around.
And your sweltering sweaty days,
Getting sunburned, never tanned,
Most of us spend time wishing
We lived in water, not dry land.
Don't get me wrong,
I love vacations,
But I dread the day we leave
To visit our strange relations.
I know most count down the school days,
They say it's boring and lame,
But that's not so easy for me to say
When each hot summer day is the same.
And I just have one thing to add-
Wait, mom, what's that you say?
You say we're going to Hawaii?
And that we pack this very day?
Well so long friend,
I cannot stay,
We pack, we leave,
Then it's time to play!


Freestyle Poem: Paper Crane

Upon the wind,
Past the night,
Aloft on tissue paper wings,
Moonlight glinting on golden folds,
Through the rain I saw the thing,
A tiny paper crane.
The crane, it flew,
Along the lake,
Over the hills,
And I doubt I'll ever make
Another paper crane.

What do you think?  

[Zenally]

Oops, me thinks Ima little late!  

[DemonShidoji]

This just took me about 2 minutes to gather up. I did a bit of a gruesome but poetic feel. Hope its not too ........ I wanna say "evil" twisted for everyones taste. But my peoms ca be a bit dark sometimes. mad p

Its called:
~The Beautiful Samurai~

See this beautiful samurai
her victims get lost in her eye
revenge is what drives her to
slice the life away from you
to bring the cold and hollow death
rip up your soul 'til there is nothing left
break your body and shatter your spirit
looking down at your corpse
and theres nothing within it
so turn your back
and pray for grace
as she takes you now
from this awful place.........