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You made it not work as a link, so I'm just reposting the link... Make sure to leave a space at the start and end of the link if you're changing the size or colour or something, or put it in URL tags before doing anything like that.

The leg that's raised looks like it might be a little bit longer than the other leg. I'd personally maker her body thinner. I don't think she looks chibby enough to make that kind of thickness look cute. Also, I think the breasts look like they're too far apart. I don't think breasts typically stick out on the sides... they should be more in front of the body. If her body is turned in one direction a bit, it only makes sense for one of her breasts to appear to be sticking out on the side... she almost looks like she's trying to face towards our left, but it's not very distinct... I'd make it more noticeable (which would include the breast position change).

I think it looks a lot better and you made her look cuter.

I think the leg on the ground might be a bit short; more specifically, the lower leg... Like, the heel should be where the toes currently are, I think... but I'm not sure what sort of art style you're aiming for here, so they might be fine, or maybe you were aiming for an exaggerated angle where that leg appears farther away from the viewer, making it look smaller...
Even if you weren't intending the angle thing, I think that just might work, and it might even look better than a straight up front view... I'm really not sure about this, though, so hopefully someone else can help.
Nothing else really seems to be a problem to me.

Also, I think the face and hair look quite good... well, the new head overall. The hair was pretty good before, too, but I think I like the new version better.

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