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 Posted: Fri May 21, 2010 12:58 am
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Posted: Wed Jun 02, 2010 2:46 am
In the first picture, I think the legs look kinda blocky. The lower leg might also be a bit long. The feet are big, but maybe that's just your style. Otherwise seems pretty decent overall. I like the hair.
Second picture, I think the lower legs look a bit long again. The hands could use some finetuning. The rear foot looks weird... is that the sole of the shoe like on the nearer foot, or does the design change on the inner part of the shoe? More realistically sized feet in this picture, though. The hair and other little details look pretty good.
I really don't like the face. However, I can't really say anything about it since it's the only face of yours I've seen and this is a picture of some "dark persona".
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Posted: Wed Jun 02, 2010 7:56 am
It is the sole yeah. I've also got a pretty big problem where it comes to facial profiles, about 50% of the time I spent on the picture was using up my stock of transparent paper to re-do the face. Most problems for come at the nose, then they get worse as I pass the lips to the chin ^.^; It's why I hid the face between the arms on Chista.
Thank you very much for your critique though. I'll definitely get to working out the kinks as soon as possible. Currently working on two pictures, both of guys (first attempts on guys ever, I suck at men), from a frontal view... (I suck at frontals too ^.^ wink
As for the big feet, how exactly do you mean that? They don't seem overly long to me. Could you mean the soles of her boots are rather high?
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