A Single Rose~ Poem.

[alkaline-phantom]

A Single Rose

As I, a single rose,
Sleeps in a barren field.
Waiting to be loved,
And to be healed.

My dark red petals,
Look almost perfect.
But there is one tore petal,
Showing all of my neglect.

As I sleep in the meadow,
Season start to go by.
I start to wilt,
Almost about to die.

Then a stranger comes,
And picks me, the rose.
Giving it to his loved one,
Saying a lovely prose.

She sees my imperfection,
But doesn't say a thing.
Instead the beauty,
Takes the golden ring.

For once I feel loved,
Knowing somebody wants me.
I no longer worry,
Because I am calm like the sea.  

[Arayza]

the pacing is good
the lines are simple and crisp
and I really like the last line