Look at/Rate Vivian?

[Monochrome Nightfall]

Alright. So. Entered Arenas as Vivian the Shadow Siren from Paper Mario: The Thousand Year Door. It would be nice if anyone looked at it, and/or rated/commented it. Currently ranked 17- if you search Vivian, papermario, or Twilitassassin13 in the search (submissions by user for the latter), you should find it. Constructive criticism is loved. And thanks for even looking at this~ *gives everyone who read a virtual cookie for reading this*  

[Monochrome Nightfall]

To make it easier:

Here it is. Votes appreciated~  

[Rotality]

Actually pretty good.
You should've tried a yellow masquerade mouth too see if worked or not, and the jenny blush doll

Other wise pretty nice =]

 

[Monochrome Nightfall]

Rotality

Actually pretty good.
You should've tried a yellow masquerade mouth too see if worked or not, and the jenny blush doll

Other wise pretty nice =]

surprised Why thank you! ^^

Thanks for the advice ^w^ Just used Angelic cause the eyes didn't really show and because it had blush and a sorta-matching mouth. *shrugs* Tried what you suggested, the blush looked nice, but the mouth didn't work. ^^;