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PostPosted: Thu Sep 30, 2010 2:12 pm


At first it was just a drawing of a person supposedly in the air, but ppl at school kept on sayin it looked like Ichigo so i made it into a bleach character.
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PostPosted: Thu Sep 30, 2010 2:24 pm


So first thing. It does NOT look like Ichigo. Don't listen to those people please. It's got a great, dynamic pose. With how his eyes are though, it makes you think he's only doing what he's doing to show off instead of what the real objective might be. Or I could be completely wrong and he only wants to show off. Otherwise, everything flows rather nicely and I would actually like to see a colored version to possibly want to use for a RP OC.

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PostPosted: Thu Sep 30, 2010 9:59 pm


I see where the resemblance with Ichigo lies.

Let's get into an otaku mode here:

[otaku mode: on]

Normally in Bleach universe, the sword represents the shinigami's reiatsu, and since most of 'em know how to keep their reiatsu small their swords adopt the katana style (their real form is when they are in Shikai mode), unlike Ichigo who doesn't know how to repress it very well and his sword always appears in shikai mode.

Knowing this, it seems your character has a bit of reiatsu problems himself and/or his Shikai is very similiar to Ichigo's (just in size though).

He does have a similarity to Ichigo's looks, and, unless he has a different hair color, it looks like Ichigo with different clothes and an earing (like Kaien Shiba, ex-vice-captain of Ukitake's division, who looked identical to Ichigo but with a different hair color. Hisagi is also an example of this too)

And lastly, using his Zanpakutou without the shinigami clothes?

[otaku mode: off]

Other than that, looks very nice, just a tiny bit more work on his hands and his thighs, as they seem kind of short.

But don't mind me, I might be wrong ;P
PostPosted: Thu Sep 30, 2010 10:18 pm


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So first thing. It does NOT look like Ichigo. Don't listen to those people please. It's got a great, dynamic pose. With how his eyes are though, it makes you think he's only doing what he's doing to show off instead of what the real objective might be. Or I could be completely wrong and he only wants to show off. Otherwise, everything flows rather nicely and I would actually like to see a colored version to possibly want to use for a RP OC.
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If you want to use a character as an RP OC, please keep in mind that the design belongs to the artist and always ask for permission. Characters and their likeness belong to the creator. ^_^

That aside, I really like the pose. It's very dynamic, as already said before, and the smile looks great. I'm really not a Bleach fan, so I don't see how it looks like Ichigo at all.
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PostPosted: Thu Sep 30, 2010 10:25 pm


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So first thing. It does NOT look like Ichigo. Don't listen to those people please. It's got a great, dynamic pose. With how his eyes are though, it makes you think he's only doing what he's doing to show off instead of what the real objective might be. Or I could be completely wrong and he only wants to show off. Otherwise, everything flows rather nicely and I would actually like to see a colored version to possibly want to use for a RP OC.
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If you want to use a character as an RP OC, please keep in mind that the design belongs to the artist and always ask for permission. Characters and their likeness belong to the creator. ^_^

That aside, I really like the pose. It's very dynamic, as already said before, and the smile looks great. I'm really not a Bleach fan, so I don't see how it looks like Ichigo at all.
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I know and would ask permission after it was finished to the artist's liking. I was just expressing an interest in the piece as well as the style.
PostPosted: Fri Oct 01, 2010 11:14 am


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PostPosted: Fri Oct 01, 2010 1:41 pm


SorceressJacklyn
So first thing. It does NOT look like Ichigo. Don't listen to those people please. It's got a great, dynamic pose. With how his eyes are though, it makes you think he's only doing what he's doing to show off instead of what the real objective might be. Or I could be completely wrong and he only wants to show off. Otherwise, everything flows rather nicely and I would actually like to see a colored version to possibly want to use for a RP OC.

It probably take a while to color it cuz i dont have much free time since i started high school and joined the football team.
PostPosted: Sun Nov 21, 2010 7:52 am


it looks like a different character but it's a nice pose and has nice shading and detail. wish there was room for the other foot.

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PostPosted: Thu Nov 25, 2010 5:02 pm


Wow, this is great! I love pretty much every thing. I think the proportions of the body are perfect, and the perspective on the leg is pretty good too. The only thing I would say to improve the picture is shade a bit more, or not, and work a bit more on the place ment of the facial features. maybe add in more detail, like in the hair (shading the pieces? Your disition, I know it depends on the type of drawing it is, the art kind of calls it's self) or in the jeans( once again, artists choice, but adding Ina seam or something?)

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PostPosted: Fri Nov 26, 2010 1:19 pm


only one thing if you look at the arm on the left its bigger than the one on the right it most the time is sopose to be opposite were the one in the front is soppose to be bigger orwateva

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PostPosted: Fri Nov 26, 2010 1:30 pm


Pretty good pose. I like it.

Some things that I see that could be fixed is :

1. Watch the proportions on the arms like rikutefox was saying, also watch how it is on the hands too. your fingers look good but, remember how the fingers are drawn make them blend alittle smother with the joints. same for the arms.

2. the face has a good expression but it doesnt seem blananced out. the mouth seems in an akwardshape (maybe its just me)

3. the proportion on the legs are good too. but it seems like (his) left leg is short in comparisson it would be if (his) right leg was on the ground. (if that makes any sence)

Other wise than that its pretty good. you did a really good job on this picture. I like it alot. the shading is done really well. and how you added texture to the clothes and hair is awesome. : ) good job.!
PostPosted: Fri Dec 03, 2010 1:32 pm


Oh wow that's amazing. You don't even wanna see my manga drawing.It's not that good. But if you do want to see it, then here's the link:

http://dustsully.deviantart.com/#/d3453ep

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PostPosted: Mon Dec 06, 2010 3:26 pm


now that i look at it again the eyes are also a little off
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Pretty good pose. I like it.

Some things that I see that could be fixed is :

1. Watch the proportions on the arms like rikutefox was saying, also watch how it is on the hands too. your fingers look good but, remember how the fingers are drawn make them blend alittle smother with the joints. same for the arms.

2. the face has a good expression but it doesnt seem blananced out. the mouth seems in an akwardshape (maybe its just me)

3. the proportion on the legs are good too. but it seems like (his) left leg is short in comparisson it would be if (his) right leg was on the ground. (if that makes any sence)

Other wise than that its pretty good. you did a really good job on this picture. I like it alot. the shading is done really well. and how you added texture to the clothes and hair is awesome. : ) good job.!
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