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Redline and Critique, please?

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PostPosted: Wed Oct 06, 2010 6:22 pm


Okay, so before I move on, I'd like some help...
Here's the picture: cliiiick
The pose is kinda thought out, kinda not. In my opinion she looks off balance x_x
But I'm trying to get different poses and such.
Note: the right leg is up into an almost knee-ing position. So the knee is bent and the leg is slightly angled back.
the right arm is reaching behind her, idk if she'll be holding like a staff or something, it's possible though.
Plus I need help with some proportion and obviously, the boobs. xD They look weird right now.
In general can you critique, redline, and suggest things.
Anything will help, thanks. (:
PostPosted: Fri Oct 08, 2010 4:23 pm


Critique and Redlining would be appreciated on this picture too..
cliiiick

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PostPosted: Fri Dec 17, 2010 10:16 pm


I personally think it looks fine and I can't wait to see the final product!!! I'm sure it'll be great!!! rofl
What kind of critique did you want? I can't see anything wrong...
PostPosted: Fri Dec 17, 2010 10:59 pm


>haha, I forgot I posted those two<
Well.. any critique actually. I've not done much with either since I posted them.. but just looking back now there's a lot I need to change. Thanks for your opinion though. and I'll try to finish them at some point soon.

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