gods and demons. (wraning included) (ended!)

[shishimaru 80]

sorry for the inconvince but since i have had alot of people who didn't wish to read this and just ragged on it. i'm removing the story.
-.-
hope the ones of you who have read my story enjoyed it.
from now on i shall no longer post my stories here on gaia since only a small handful really care about my writing. and since the majortiy of you decided to say ******** off instead of at least trying to humor me i shall be leaving the guild for a while.
hope ya'll have a good time without ******** YA'LL WHO DON'T GIVE A s**t!
-.- i quit this guild.  

[Jedi Master Acey]

interesting!
The end part reminds me of Princess Bride sort of.

Also, since I like mythology a lot, brownie points. I also like the fact that it's not too drawn out and gets straight to the point. Mmyup.  

[velvetveela]

Awe that was a good story that I could actually see elaborated into a full novel. Although being its a story After the first paragraph I knew the plot for the most part. If you watch the second cardcaptors movie thats how it is, a prince and princess go to a masked ball and end up falling in love and then they found out they were from the countries at war. Good all in all though but I really think you could elaborate this into a novel. (:  

[ReaperPuppy]

I like it! 3nodding

You is a good writer