Poem?

[Ydna Wolf]

Birds cherp sweet melodies
A squirrel dances as it gets their nuts from their burrows
The cats join in to meow along with the birds
The wolves and dogs howl along with them
The bear want to roar along as well

A forest at peace, so wonderful and nice
Then awful things happened
The trees fell one by one
The creatures confused and scared ran
But the beautiful song bird were caged

The wolves killed
The dogs owned
The bear be headed
How terrifing to their little ones running and crying
But the things destroying it doesn't care

A house built for a family
A village of the things
It turns into a town more of those things
Then a city filling with poison
Those awful clouds coming from the towers

The dogs, we once though were our friends, now chase us with those things
They kill us with those odd shaped sticks
The forest of peace turned into the city of hell
The animals, confused and not having enough room to live now kill one another

I'd love to hear your comments please and thank you =3

 

[RowenthaDark]

it was pretty...and then got REALLY dark.
....i liked it.  

[Ydna Wolf]

mrgreen Glad you like it

 

[Spirit Kitty Cat]

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● ● ● A few spelling and punctuation errors, but no big deal (Sorry. I'm kinda OCD when it comes to those things. Don't pay any mind.)

It was a nice poem. The change in atmosphere from the beginning to the end was well thought out. Very enjoyable to read.  

[Ydna Wolf]

I don't mind someone pointing out errors like that it helps and thanks =P